A Collection of Strange Human Stories

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The new book was seen in the investment circle. There are no major problems, but the small details are uncomfortable to read. First of all, punctuation marks must still be used, and paragraphs should not be used instead of periods. Especially when the context can be solved with a period, it feels like the reading is interrupted as soon as it is divided into paragraphs. Just like driving a car, the road is uneven and bumpy all the time. The reading experience is not very good. Also, please use commas wherever commas should be used. Secondly, you can write in spoken language, but this is a novel after all, and you still need to make some modifications to the vernacular. For example, when dealing with Lao Li's funeral, you can use the sentence pattern of "what you say, what he said" instead of "what you say, what you say", and you won't be able to figure out who is who. Also, in some places, two "so" are used together, and one can be removed. Finally, I suggest the author re-read it and correct many awkward sentence patterns. For example, "The corpse was parked in a newly built shed near the company." Shouldn't the normal writing be like, "The body was placed in a temporary shed, near the construction site"? Don't pile all adverbial modifiers into one sentence, which will look awkward.