My Youth Love Story Is Always Chaotic

I feel pretty good, come on, author😃

Yukinoshita Harano

It's really hard to have no one to talk to 😭

Well written, good luck to the author!

Hikigaya Hachiman

Hikigaya Komachi

Kawasaki Saki

Ebina Hina

Current group From right to left, Tobe, Hayama Hayato, Miura Yuuko Ebina Himina

The writing is too bland, and there is not a single explosive point. Every time I thought something would happen, it ended up being superficial. Even the original work, which is more about daily life, has several explosive plot points.

Boss, do you still remember this article?😭

Hiratsuka Shizu

Zaimuzha Yoshiki

Totsuka Ayaka

The plot of the first volume is extremely boring (the Sobu Gao part at the end is slightly better), but fortunately the "time travel" setting is quite interesting,,, In the second volume, once the main character's memory disappears and he returns to before liberation, the setting remains unchanged from the original work. Well, there is just a new sister in the character who doesn't have many roles and is not likeable,,, so the plot is not as good as Du Hang's writing and has no exciting points, and the setting is also nothing new. This is not just a piece of cake And what is the connection between the first and second volumes of yours? The plots of the two volumes cannot be connected at all. Isn't it completely disconnected? This is not a separate volume. It is completely divided into two unrelated books Since you added the setting of "time travel" in the first volume, won't the second volume be connected after that? I don't want it to be If the protagonist retains his memory, then you can do reverse time travel, multiple time travels, or memory flashbacks. You can have the protagonist travel back in time ten years later, you can have other female characters who have lost ten years time travel back in time, or you can use some tricks from the guardian of the island of God in the first volume. Can't you come up with something new in the setting?

ε=(´ο｀*)))Oh, won't it be updated?

Okay, it has some flavor. But that's not all. Hikigaya's awkwardness is still not that strong, and the original Riddler flavor is very strong (you can't learn it, and writing fan fiction here... Furthermore, the first and third person are mixed. This is also the first time I have seen this. Our online novels are mainly in the third person.

Your update is very user-friendly. I'm afraid I just remembered that there is a book

Brother, can you write a story about how O-sensei and Yukino got together? After watching their two stories for so long, there is too little sugar 😭. I want more sugar 😢

Yes, the author has finally updated. I jumped from station B

Author 666, one book has two uses

Damn it, why not put it on the shelves 😡 If there is no profit, it can't be updated.

It's well written😭, I just want to see the daily life after marriage😭

I would like to reward the author with 10,000 coins to support the author in finishing the article.

Damn it. . I just realized that you updated both sites at the same time.

The author probably gave up 😰😰😭😭