I Use My Puppet as My Path

I copy myself, your last copy is still lying on the bookshelf🙂

Various short clips are spliced ​​together, which makes me a little tired after watching too much. The story is too repetitive and a little tiring. Let's write about weirdness, and I've only scratched the surface. Originally, the puppet's ability to cooperate with weirdness is quite interesting, such as the control, infection, transformation, transposition, and substitution of the Lord of Mysteries. Each ability is weirder and more interesting than the last. When it comes to your puppet, it's really just a puppet. When it comes to writing fantasy, how can I put it this way? The strength of the puppets is indeed average, and I don't think they are much stronger. You can control ten or twenty puppets. Can't you control so many beasts? What's more, you don't need a line to control the beast. There is also the issue of sects. The protagonist wants to make the sect the number one, but the protagonist is always alone, and the sect alone is the number one? If the protagonist's puppet's abilities were incredible enough, it would still be possible, but now it does feel almost like that.

No, can we not do this suddenly? The last book just refused to listen and insisted on creating a world with a clone. Such a good book was ruined. This one is like forcing the protagonist to become an idiot. At the beginning, the protagonist is made into a person who does not understand the world and only knows how to listen to the master. It is okay after all. Then the latest one directly accepts a disciple. Does it have anything to do with you whether he is miserable or not? Also, you have to accept a disciple, and there is no test or anything like that? You must know that the protagonist acted for others before, and he was killed by others if they didn't give him money. The failure of the previous book was not that he was not ruthless enough. There is no need to suddenly show kindness here. Don't ruin it again. Well, that book is really good.

Why does it look a bit like the Avenue of Papermen I watched some time ago?

The book is good. The first book is also very good, but your main character has a low emotional intelligence and has never been improved, which is a big problem. Writing a book is not about grudges, it is about making money. In the end, what good can you do if the readers are disgusted?

This is the first time I see a prodigy copying myself.

It looks good, but novels and TV series are different. These are obviously written in the way of TV series. The novel focuses on the protagonist's opportunities and development model. Who likes to watch a lot of plots that can't survive one episode? This mode is not my thing anyway. I still like the "mortal" and "swallowing" type of mode that revolves around the protagonist.

Can someone other than the author see it? You were able to say a couple of sentences in the last book, but how come you didn't say a word in this book and it sold out?

One small fragment after another, no main line

Many authors spend a lot of space to show supporting characters with flesh and blood. As a result, the supporting characters are there but the readers are gone.

Why is the plot exactly the same as the paper man?

Author, are you plagiarizing Paper Man Enlightenment?

I looked at the name. Isn't it the author's trumpet? The author, the paper man, asked if he would update it and came here to copy himself. I thought the paper man was a eunuch.

The plot remains the same as the Paper Man's Enlightenment.

This is not like a novel, but like a storytelling session and a diary

I just finished reading it, let me tell you something. The protagonist has a basic conscience and will not steal power. Anyone who blocks the protagonist's actions will basically die. The killings in this book are too decisive, cold-blooded, and the killings are too frequent. I am afraid that this book will be blocked. The author's writing ability is very limited. It can be said that I have read so many chapters, and there is no synopsis at all. It is straight to the point. The previous paragraph said that someone was taking revenge, but the avengers were solved within a few short paragraphs. I would like to suggest that the author should moisturize the text. The article looks too straightforward. For the chapter you wrote, the veteran author can write four or five chapters, one at a time, paving the way where it is necessary and digging holes where it is necessary, so that the content will look fuller. Otherwise, when you look at it, it will feel like writing a diary. What you record every day is where the protagonist went, what he encountered, and what he did. If you can always keep innovating all kinds of weirdness, this diary format is still good. At least readers will look forward to encountering new weirdness and appreciate the new and weird style. After all, many supernatural books have basically no new weirdness after the middle period. The many weirdness you have written now are almost equal to the weirdness of other books. (Haha, there are many supernatural recovery novels, there are two or three weirdness at the beginning, and even the shadow is not visible at the end) I wish the author a great success, the more he writes, the better he becomes, and he becomes a great god.

I read a dozen chapters and was very disappointed. The supporting characters and villains largely represent the author's IQ. The three Jianghu people who walked into the mountain temple seemed to be on their first day out. They had no walking experience and basic tacit understanding. Moreover, the efficiency of ancient yamen was not that fast, and wanted orders were generally not issued so quickly. Finally, there is the issue of the economic system. The author can adjust prices and reward money. To add on, the hero's master died from a monster, and the hero's first fight against a monster was without any observation or arrangement. He went up and ACDRed and was so reckless. He really knew that he was the son of luck and would not die at all, right? Not to mention that the armor on the second level of body refining is high enough, why did the master forget it? Moreover, the sect that has been passed down for thousands of years does not seem to have sect assets. The male protagonist is so poor that he needs to perform on the street to earn medical expenses to save his master, and he does not hesitate to kill people in the street. Since the male protagonist is a cold-blooded character, he can just rob a drug store to get medicine, so why go to a show to earn this little money? (I haven't watched it in the future. If there is a twist in the face, please leave a message to let me know) I give it 4 points out of 10, but the story setting is still interesting. Come on, author

I even suspect that the great author opened a trumpet account.

The protagonist's character needs to grow a bit. He can't always be this unpopular like Uemoto with no emotional intelligence! After a lot of experience, you have to make him look like a human being. Otherwise, we will still have to jump around, and there will be no growth at all. What should we look at? What a sense of substitution!

So, the protagonist, who even eats ordinary horse meat, doesn't touch monster meat? Only the skin and bones are collected. No more meat? And it's a mess of both the immortal side and the mysterious side.

Nothing but killing

The protagonist, an indigenous man, looks so unaccustomed to him. Very poor sense of immersion.

The writing is so good, why do we need eunuchs?

The flesh and blood are weak, and the machine ascends. In the later stage, you can use Optimus Prime and Terminator-like puppets.

Can't you write a smart, cunning, self-interested pig's foot?

Might as well turn yourself into a human puppet like Naruto Scorpion

Although there are some flaws, the large frame is very good. Very few people write about puppets like this one, and the writing is pretty good. It's just a little flawed, so that's fine. It doesn't matter if you don't get good grades. You have to write a book first to gain some experience. Write as a part-time job first, then full-time job unless otherwise specified.

I can't see at night even if I practice gas. We still have to light a torch at night. It doesn't matter how much water we have. There is no complete change. Does it just increase the life span? Are you capable of fighting? What kind of special help can you provide yourself? No.

I've seen it before, I thought it was interesting at first, but as I kept on keeping on, I became a eunuch.