American Comics: I Am Superman Brother

Let's put it this way, the protagonist reaches the earth at super-light speed, does not brake first to bask in the sun, but rushes into the atmosphere and lands. After that, he is captured and taken into Arkham to serve in various experiments. The reason for escape is that the villain wants the protagonist to be burned to death by a lamp. As a result, the protagonist's eyes glowed red and he killed all these people. By the way, the protagonist is a scientist. 🤔

The rough and sad story makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Summary of Superman's basic superpowers: Energy absorption (absorbing yellow solar energy to enhance oneself) Super strength (normally at least greater than one million tons) Super speed (normally no less than four times the speed of sound) Man of Steel (defense, vitality, Recovery) Super vision (telescope, microscopy, clairvoyance) Super hearing (this book is set to no medium) Thermal vision (adjustable power. Has derivative skills, solar flare.) Super breathing (breath-holding, hurricane, freezing) Biological force field (Invisible force fields are generally just passive skills to help you stabilize the plane, fly stably in the air, etc. Man of Steel is also related to this. But in All-Star Superman, there is a force field to save the spacecraft. It should be able to be used as an active skill at that time. If so, consider the derived force field physical shield and Force field controls two skills) Flying Super brain (knowledge reserve + thinking + thinking speed. Eleventh level wisdom. Reference: Brainiac level 12. Batman and Luther level 9. Title-blocking skills.) Other miscellaneous abilities, many of which are meaningless. If there are any important abilities missing, please add them.

Generally speaking, the characters are not likable, the plot is not likable, the author has too much self-pleasure and adds a lot of dry stuff that he thinks is good, but the readers don't buy it, is it bad or not? White or not? And I can't write that it's both good and evil. After being tortured for three months, it feels like your brain has been damaged, right? Has the brain and IQ of scientists been suppressed? After accepting the scientist's memory, he still looked stupid and filled with emotion at every turn. Overall, this is another book that gained strength from a diaosi, but it is still a novel written by a diaosi. You repeatedly emphasize the star of the protagonist. In my opinion, the protagonist neither looks strong nor has the rigor of a scientist. If you are black, you can't compare to Batman. If you compare to white, you can't compare to Superman. Even if you compare to the middle, you can't be called Wolverine, just a different-looking Stitch Monster.

In fact, the author does not need to set up some plots to abuse the protagonist because of the protagonist's personality and behavior. After all, a normal person who travels to DC will basically not want to be a great and upright superhero. They are usually lawful chaos or neutral villains. This is a bit redundant for the author.

This setting is too exaggerated, slip away.

①The first six chapters are just a contrast with Superman. This is the idea behind my book title. Superman and his brother have different lives and different personalities. The abuser mentioned above is only used to create characters, not the abuser. After the protagonist is created, his character will be very strong. I'm not the kind of person who takes things slowly. The beginning is just like chasing a duck to get it on the shelf to complete the shaping of the protagonist. The result still doesn't work, everyone likes the protagonist to stand still at the beginning. But these foreshadowing chapters are no longer available. After that, I might as well just go to Haier and write the invincible article! Or write "I'm Just a Kryptonian Scientist" in a light novel ② In order to be able to sign the contract, a lot of content was deleted. Of course, there is nothing wrong with editorial opinions themselves. At the beginning of the chapter, the contradictions should be brought out. Everything that happened in space before the spacecraft landed was deleted. It's a running account in itself. But a lot of spaceship settings have also been deleted. Otherwise, we can understand it more perfectly. For example, I was scolded badly for going directly to Earth. The crash landing itself was caused by a tiny error in calculations. It could have stopped on the track, but now it is unable to fully decelerate and brake due to insufficient energy and insufficient braking force. Therefore, it cannot stop in orbit and can only rush directly to the earth. It's that simple. Logic is self-consistent. It depends on how you understand it. ③ Chapters seven to ten, with strong jumps between chapters. This is the way of serial dreams to complete the settings. Connect the past, present and future together, and then draw out the main line. Chapter Eve is considering that there will be a character named Eve in the future, who may be the heroine. It may or may not appear. Because the timeline has changed. It's okay if I don't write. Just lay it first. The seventh is a direct tribute to the senior year of high school. My first book is about the background of my senior year in high school. The eighth is that I used other methods to make up for what I had deleted before. The timeline is my own setting. There is only one explicit timeline in the three-dimensional world, but there are multiple four-dimensional perspectives. Changing the past can change the future, but there are limits. Now the Eve inside is just a funny phantom of Constantine. Eve is the homophony of Eve, which is taken from Genesis like Adam. ④I think the most complained about writing style, plot coherence, plot development, detailed description and perspective exposition, and consistency. I thought about this before I started the book. But no one mentioned this. It's all opening chapters. In fact, you can give some opinions on these aspects. Don't just say "poisonous" or "abuse of the master", you can be more specific. ⑤ American comics are originally a minefield of novels, not to mention I am a novice. To summarize. First, the concept of value and cognition. The biggest problem is that different people have different ideas. There will definitely be opposition. The second is the difference in style. For example, comics are group portraits, while online articles have obvious protagonists. The story mode is also very different. Also, online novels have very strict levels of combat power, while American comics are more idealistic. Anyway, there are quite a few differences. The third is outsiders and insiders. Because people in the circle know so much, it is very easy to disagree with them. Because of the different perspectives of outsiders, some plots that you think are normal will be questioned. Unpleasant on both sides. Even I can only be considered half an insider. Because DC and Marvel now have too many comics. ⑥This book will be written down, please supervise it. I am mainly the kind of person who tries hard to do things without success. This book is updated twice a day, with a total of 5,000 words. Will write more than one million words.

If you don't have such good writing style, don't write in such convoluted ways, just write down one main line. So many messy characters have been added.

What kind of hero is Batman? A supercriminal who doesn't kill people, only to cause harm to others, and then comes out to save the world. This is Batman.

In the beginning, there was an inexplicable torture of the protagonist, and then there was amnesia, confusion, and three consecutive dreams. Author, there are too many things you want to express, and it is a hodgepodge that makes people incomprehensible.

A typical torture novel. Even if he landed in an uninhabited forest, he would be caught by Arkham people and tortured for three months. The author is really capable of torture.

I don't know basic physics knowledge, the writing is too cruel

Superman skin, right? The whole article is just one. It smells like licking at the beginning. Why are you in such a hurry to go to Earth?

You definitely want to write about a split personality, where the mysterious person is the protagonist's pre-time travel personality. The ending should be the old routine of mastering one's own promotion once 😒 with the help (attack) of the big super master and others.

The plot of AI's joke is so disgusting. If I could use kryptonite to make a joke, I could use kryptonite to kill you tomorrow. Not as good as a weak AI like Jarvis

Messy settings, inexplicable writing, movies are not movies, comics are not comics, a lot of ideas