DC Comics: Batman Dark Dawn

After reading two chapters, I feel that the author's writing is okay, but I feel that the author is a newcomer. Let me mention a few points. In the second chapter, I feel that the identity of the protagonist changes a bit quickly, but I think it is okay. However, if there are more people, some people will probably complain. Let me talk about a few points in detail 1 Batman is a lonely hero with no superpowers, so when the author strengthens the protagonist, it is best to limit it to the physical body, otherwise lightning and flames will be too inconsistent on his body. When writing, it is best not to pretend to be humorous, and refer to the vulgar stuff in the taillight version of Zhenglian, which is very disgusting. 2. If you want to write the main female lead, write it later. Emotional scenes can easily go awry. If Robin appears, it's best not to be too young. The book next door is written about Batman. If a kid of several years old is used as an assistant, I'm speechless. 3 Because the DC movie universe cannot compare with Marvel next door, be careful when you are trying to join the series. The American comic system is too broken, and the audience for domestic comics is average, so the author had better be careful and don't keep adding more people, and you don't know how to end it in the end. In addition to the DC movie universe, there are also many Batman-Superman personal movies. The author can come up with a main line by himself, as long as it can be connected. DC American TV series can develop the universe, and if possible, he can make a cameo 4 In fact, Batman's strength is difficult to write. If you write it weakly, you will be criticized. If you write it too strong, you will not fight. So I hope the author can control it well. If it doesn't work, just hang out in Gotham and be more stable. Finally, I hope the author will write well. Frankly speaking, most of the people who wrote Batman at the beginning were eunuchs. This is a new book that I accidentally discovered. Come on, I hope the author can update as quickly as possible while maintaining the writing style. This way, it is easy to see the response and judge whether to continue writing. If it is not possible, it is best to finish the book, because you will never know where you are missing until you finish it. Good luck to you.

If you are a novice writing Batman fan fiction, you are like a heifer, flying on a plane and flying to the sky.

Batman, Gotham Phantom, Dark Knight.

Grandpa's book doesn't have much starting point. I hope the author can work hard and at least have a beginning and an end.

Please do your best! Starting today, I will give you 13 recommendation votes every day, and wait until you get really fat! I'm in the mood to watch it. Don't imitate the other eunuch's Batman over there.

DC is not easy to write about. There are many classic characters but they are niche. Come on.

It's not easy to write a Batman fanfic, try your best

The author is very slow in updating. Don't enter the palace with such a good book 🙏🙏🙏

It's rare to see such serious Batman fan fiction, so please do it! Awesome.

Looking forward to Robin's appearance😄

Oh hao

Go advertise, for example, in the book review section of Lost Stranger

The book I read before entered the palace. Will this book enter the palace?

It's not that the author doesn't know how to write, it's that he doesn't write at all.

Batman solved, Batman defeated...

When will it be published again?

In fact, it's already wonderful to write Gotham well. I thought the multiverse was a bit far away from the beginning (for a newcomer).

The latest chapter feels familiar...

Is your time-travel setting necessary? It's no use

There is no need to vote for this book! Thank you for your support. This book is my test of the waters, but I will eventually become a eunuch. I know that I will lose my character and there is nothing I can do about it. The book will stop immediately. Anyway, it is adapted from the comics, so there is not much new idea in the early stage and the pace is slow. You can definitely read the comics. Recommend "Batman: Year One", "Batman: The Dark Knight Returns", "Penguin", "The Killing Joke", "New 52 Batman", "New 52 Batman: The Dark Knight", "Batman: The Long Halloween" and too many Batman V1V3V4 issues. You can Baidu the key chapters by yourself. The app recommends cartoonists, the home of animation. Next, I will learn my lesson and cast in first. At least you can know where the shortcomings of the opening chapter are. Otherwise, writing hundreds of thousands of words will be useless. Thank you so much!

The greatest evil in DC is in Batman