Ruling the Myriad Worlds, Starting with Demon Slayer

The power system is too confusing. Only after reading ten chapters, there are three power systems, breathing method and true energy chakra, which makes people have no desire to read anymore. One ability is greedy for the next ability before starting, and it is cannon fodder thinking.

The first chapter was so uncomfortable to read. You insisted on writing two separate sentences into one sentence. Did you even bother to type in punctuation? See you soon... Let me give you an example. Lin Heng grabbed a stone and threw it at the monster. The monster grabbed the stone and crushed it to pieces... Also, let's distinguish it from being in trouble. For someone like me with obsessive-compulsive disorder, it's very uncomfortable to watch.

I always feel like something's not right, but I can't put my finger on what's wrong.

Pig's feet are too funny, too childish, and too idiotic!

Plant a seed now and countless vegetables will grow later

I asked the author, can you be like the one who has never seen a woman before? When you see a female character, you can't walk. It's very annoying to watch. Do you know?

After reading the previous part, I felt that the main character was too idiotic.

I feel that writing about the participation level of each world is a bit too follow-up, and I don't know much about the settings. For example: the Aragami in God Eater. The setting of the Aragami is the aggregation of the Aragami factors, so people only despaired after seeing these Aragami being killed and then resurrected without consumption. Also, I don't seem to be very familiar with forces like the Crimson Eyes, and I don't seem to know much about Esdeath's ability to freeze time and space with energy.

Aren't you embarrassed? No one there

Don't stick to the pillar to destroy it, there must be ten thousand realms.