In the End of the World, a Person Becomes a Zombie Lord at the Beginning

The writing is not bad, the writing style and logic are OK, but the writing in the later period is too ink, and there is a lot of psychological activities. I wrote two chapters about an ordinary bandit chase, and I was tired from reading it.

😅 You might as well write about Tokyo Ghoul and its ghosts. Then Asasi, ah, so touching? How high do you think people's bottom line is? People are individual beings and are self-interested species. When someone dies, his relatives and friends will be sad for a while, but will others care about his life and death, and will they care about the mood of his relatives? In the famine years, there was too much food, but it was the end of the world. You are all zombies and are no longer the same species as humans. Your thoughts are still human judges, the same as Batman, right? The position is skewed. In peaceful times, people survived air crashes in the Andes Mountains by cannibalism, let alone in an apocalyptic environment where law and order have been destroyed. There is always a devil living in people's hearts, but now it is bound by the law.

A zombie protagonist actually has three female protagonists?

Not only are your subordinates like robots, they should at least know who is the boss. As soon as your memory comes back, you punched the male protagonist hard with a combination of punches. The writing is really... Average.

28 Fans are enthusiastically supporting, but the author is still insisting, so I want to help 😭

I haven't read it yet, but it feels like another dog-licking novel, right?

A total of 2,000 points of investment were signed, "take from the people, use it for the people"~ Come on~ 😡

Are these three heroines considered tools to the protagonist?

Saw twenty-five. I feel that the character of the protagonist is still a little flawed, the characterization is also a little worse, and the plot direction is also a little worse. It is a fly in the ointment and superfluous, just a little bit, otherwise it would be very good. Looking at the plot, the depiction of strength is not clear. Levels and skills are highly recommended. I can't finish the introduction at all, and I can't estimate how strong it is after reading it. In terms of character development, the male protagonist is not as good as the female protagonist. We do not talk about strength, but talk about aura, control, and opposition between the upper and lower. Even though he is completely under the control of his skills, he is still controlled by the female protagonist, forming an equal match. It is very magical. In terms of settings, the system force is not pleasing to the eye, and in terms of tasks, it is not pleasing either, although the author wants to express that feeling. I can only say that I have tried hard, but I cannot write about life in the apocalypse. Personal opinion! No matter how perfect you are in writing a novel, it will get better little by little. Old bookworms are more picky, but newcomers will probably look good.

Dead Lord!

A zombie controlled by a pig's foot using skills can still negotiate terms with the pig's foot. I would rather not have it than do this.

It's too procrastinating. I keep trying to make sense.

I just read a few chapters, and I hope the protagonist doesn't want to be a virgin or a savior. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better if you just rewrite it and put it on a human body? ! Why be a zombie?

Seeing 75, when will the protagonist Niu Niu be repaired :(

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