Become a Landlord Again

The author may want to write something more realistic, but he doesn't have enough life experience or IQ. He doesn't know how to use his brain or method to do things. He is as naive as a high school student, which makes people feel frustrated.

The story is very down-to-earth, the writing is thick, and the words are meaningful without being superficial. For a new author, sincerity will never go out of style. The master of the starting point - Wandering Toad, wrote an answer to netizens on Zhihu, in which he said that for new writers, no tricks or ideas are as good as solid narration to tell the story clearly. Now after reading the whole article, there are some structural problems that need to be paid attention to, including the following points: First, the characters are fragmented, such as the uncle's family who embezzled property. Such typical ugly faces cannot be stood up. Others, such as uncles, aunts, aunts, and village chiefs, have passed by from one generation to the next. The Russian writer Chekhov used a particularly vivid metaphor when talking about drama, saying: If a gun appears on the stage, it must go off by the third act at the latest. This is about structure. The characters mentioned and appearing in the text must have an image, and they must serve the story of the pig's feet and cannot be mentioned lightly. Two, the plot is incoherent and the plots are cut off from each other. For example, the competition for compensation, future planning, and then going to school, there are obviously two lines between rural life and campus life. This kind of transition is very abrupt, and the atmosphere is also contradictory. Last year, Deyun Club had a variety show called "Deyun Douxiao Club". There was an actor named Shang Jiuxi. His crosstalk style was very detailed. Guo Degang commented that he was "reluctant to part with it." What it's about is that if a lot of things pile up together, it will make others feel bloated and laborious. It is better to remove some of them and only keep three or five small baggage. It will be easy to control and it will not be difficult for the audience to accept it. Third, the sense of introduction is not strong and the sense of rhythm is not there. This may be a common problem among all newcomers, they do not know how to control their emotions and spread out the rhythm of the plot. Tiancan Tudu's "Fights Break the Sphere" can be said to have written a novel to the extreme, which was shocking. The trilogy earned over 100 million yuan in revenue, which is breathtaking. Looking back now, I have to say that only routines can win people's hearts. There will be a reversal at any time, a moment of slap in the face and a moment of highlight, just like the theme of hot learning in Japanese comics. The emotions of the author's story are too bland. Divorce, rebirth, and fighting for compensation are just like a mime. The pig's feet have basically no outlet for emotions. Fourth, the main task is not clear. The current story can be said to be a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. There is no incident throughout, and there is no character to guide the development. It seems like keeping a diary, everything follows the timeline. When it comes to campus romance, the most commonly used thing is the timeline, from the first year of junior high school to the graduation of the third year of junior high school, or from the first year of high school to the end of the college entrance examination. The advantage of this kind of description is that the time is clear and the sense of involvement is clear. Some urban novels also like to be written by year. For example, from the late 1980s to 2000, each year is a turning point. At the beginning of the new year, policy changes and new challenges will be marked. At present, it is very embarrassing. It seems that both sides are close but neither is the same. I suggest that it is best to make the main mission public, so that there will be a clear plot chain. For example, "Journey to the West" is a typical chain-type plot. The journey of seeking scriptures from the West and the difficulties of ninety-nine and eighty-one are explained at the beginning. After that, the four masters and apprentices pass each level one level at a time. This is a travel route description. The above is the author's humble opinion. For new writers, the most important thing is self-confidence. As written on Qidian's official WeChat public account, a writer who writes one million words must be more likely to succeed than one who writes one hundred thousand words. The creation of online novels is like this. As long as you keep writing down-to-earth, there will always be rewards one day, such as black cars, self-deprecation, and ten years of small gangsterism. Similarly, Squid Girl was still young when she wrote "Pictures of Destruction of Luck". Looking back now, "Pictures of Destruction of Luck" is incomparable to "Lord of Mysteries" in terms of rhythm and sense of immersion. So, come on, author.

Why do I feel that this protagonist is incomparable to a pig? He has lived for so many years and lived as a dog. He has never eaten pork. Has he never seen a pig running?

I just want to know if you can give a network manager hundreds of thousands, why don't you spend more money to recruit people when the average salary is one or two thousand? Do you still want to stare there every day? Are you the reincarnation of a saint by giving dividends to network administrators at level 5? You said that your aunt was kind to you in the previous life. Look, you would rather give the network manager hundreds of thousands of bonuses instead of supporting your uncle's family? I also asked your aunt to farm and take care of the children at home. Even if the worst is possible, she can still give you some advice! So damn poisonous!

To be honest, newcomers have a lot of bookish points. You can look at it without thinking. Judging from the current situation, the first is the housing price and the second is paying a network administrator 140,000 a month for 01 years. Brother, you are not that good to your parents.

A boss with 20 million in savings, countless houses, and a total net worth of tens of millions: eating box lunches at the Internet cafe every day! This is the reborn boss written by the author🙂🙂

Well, it was okay at the beginning, but I was a little speechless at the end. I felt full of negative energy and felt uncomfortable. First I dropped out of school and then I went to the Internet cafe to earn money. I saw netizens smoking and dancing at the disco... I can't see any difference between the protagonist's growth and the previous life. It's just that I have money in my hands in this life and I know that in the future, fools will make money if they know it. Now that he is reborn, I still hope that the protagonist will grow up a little bit, instead of being depraved and debauched all the time.

The writing is very good, just write it like this, pick up more girls, just get a kidney, what kind of relationship do you need after rebirth, play a few more, the emotional scenes are too awkward, just get a kidney, and don't go into business, just buy a house directly in the future, or buy football lottery, buy Bitcoin to make some money and become a charterer. Making so much money is also in the novel, we don't think it is interesting, now the writing is okay, I will subscribe to this rhythm

What I wrote before is quite good and true, but what I wrote after I came to the Internet cafe was quite vicious, especially in terms of salary. In 2001, I started with a salary of 2,000 yuan, and then dropped it to 1,200 yuan. What level? In 2009, the minimum wage in Shenzhen was 900. Electronic factories such as Foxconn started at 900. Most small factories did not even reach 900. I graduated from junior high school in 2006. At that time, the private technical secondary school printed on the leaflets distributed by the school that the famous figures in their schools were working as small leaders at Foxconn. The above salary was only about 1,500, including overtime pay. You had this job in 2001 The capital is comparable to the whole country, and there is Dalong, which provides a platform, and then it is 50 to 50 or something. It feels very poisonous, and I don't know the situation, so I hire people to look after the store. I am not afraid of supervision and theft, and I leave it to others boldly and confidently. However, my eldest cousin, she lets people work as soon as she comes, and she doesn't get paid. She would rather be nice to outsiders than to her own people. It seems a bit poisonous.

If the author is willing to write about Dalong's affair with Lin Fangfang, transfer all his money, and then wake up, the protagonist will eventually jump off the building and die, and then be reborn again. I think this book is interesting.

Forget it, I really can't bear it anymore. I don't know how old the author is, but what you wrote is really hard to describe. After winning such a large sum of money, you still dare to stay in a small hotel when you return to Shenzhen. What do you think, are you really not afraid of death? ? ? Have your two lives been eaten by dogs? ?

I'm not intentionally attacking anyone. Just because the main character had 700,000 yuan in 2001 and only knew how to play games to make money, I can confirm that this is the author's imagination. It can only mean that he has not graduated from junior high school.

The back is too poisonous, extremely poisonous, the further back the more poisonous it becomes, cuckolds are flying all over the sky, the green grassland is green, and finally it hits the street directly

The path of brothers has become narrow. First, he was too nice to the network manager, and he also trapped himself in the Internet cafe. Can't he hire a few more people? If he hires one person, he still has to work in the Internet cafe. Then come back and see what you are doing again. Also, the salary is too high, and the money for game transactions is divided half and half. This is not good. If you want to win a favor, you will have to fight with a grudge. If you hire a few more people in the future, you have to split it half and half. The relationship scenes are also too drawn out, there are just a few little girls, just play it more relaxedly and don't get entangled, the rhythm is not good, I can't stand it anymore. In fact, I don't recommend you to open an Internet cafe. First, you don't have an Internet cafe license. Second, opening an Internet cafe is risky. If there is a fire or something, you will go to jail. Although you will definitely not write like this, ordinary people are born again and just want to lie down peacefully. Why do you want to engage in such a mess? It is dangerous.

Holy Book, Three Golden Chapters and Three Wasted Chapters. 17-Year-old brother who is in the second grade of junior high school. How many levels have you retained? Why are you so stupid and reborn? Open an Internet cafe in 2001 and give employees 2,000 in salary and 50,000 in bonuses. Are you a joke sent by monkeys? In 2010, Shenzhen's network administrators only had about 1,500.

Dog meat cannot go on the table, mud cannot support the wall. I'm probably talking about the protagonist! ! ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist poisons people, and the protagonist has no ability to take care of himself mentally! How can I describe it? Even mom, I haven't weaned myself yet! Throwing money everywhere, why do books like this become so popular? He is still an imbecile who started primary school at the age of 11. A person in his 30s was reborn with no life experience at all.

The author takes it for granted. Even if you set up a stall now, it won't be that simple, right? In those days, if a little loser opened an Internet cafe, wouldn't there be nothing left if he wasn't eaten up? There is also some confusion between adultery and social women. Believe it or not, I will find an opportunity to eat you alive. What a poison

I was puzzled. The author wrote that the protagonist lost the 400,000 yuan compensation from his parents, and asked his aunt for money several times. You also know that it is his aunt. He doesn't want to live a good life, and he has a bad relationship with his family. How can he have the nerve to ask his aunt for money

Although you know that ordinary people are still ordinary people after rebirth, but the protagonist you created has become a waste, and his previous life was in vain.

Just after his parents died, he dropped out of school, smoked, clubbed, and danced in disco. Well, he was not a qualified scumbag.

The author is really a chef, and he travels back and forth to Internet cafes and restaurants. I have a net worth of tens of millions, but I only want to date female network administrators and waitresses. That's all I have in mind 😒

To be honest, it was fine in the beginning. In order to buy a house and open an Internet cafe, I can accept Chapter 155. I really can't stand it. You have to spend a lot of money to buy a house and you still need other people's consent? What are you doing? She's just a girlfriend. She doesn't have too much control over the money. I can't do it after seeing this. Let's go straight to the ending. The ending is not bad, but the front is too poisonous.

Are you sure the protagonist only has one level left? You are a 17-year-old who is a senior in high school and you are a junior in junior high. You are awesome.

It's so watery that I wish I could write down clearly what the smell and color of shit and farts are.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. It's okay to be low-key, but I can't live without my brain.

I was reborn at the age of 17, and then spent two months studying junior high school knowledge, but I didn't learn anything at all. I turned in a blank paper for the English test, and I can get more than ten points with my feet. I have every reason to suspect that the protagonist is mentally retarded. Tmd Before I was reborn, I was able to get into the top 10 in junior high school, but I didn't learn anything after two months of rebirth.

These books by the author give people the feeling that they have changed a bit after being reborn, but they still treat people as tool men and are always inferior to others. In this book, two women give him advice, and people around him are not very optimistic about the protagonist. But it's not a character design that still has money, including the forum saying that the protagonist always eats box lunches. To be honest, this is obviously the author's thinking. First of all, the first woman I met was not surprised at all when she found out that the protagonist had hundreds of thousands and opened an Internet cafe. She was not surprised at all when she made more than 10 million, and even helped the protagonist manage money. I was puzzled. With so much money, you still can't impress a few female supporting characters? To be honest, it gives the impression that no matter how much money the protagonist makes, people around him look down on him and think he is just a lucky upstart.

There is no passion at all in the straightforward narrative. To be honest, the novel either gives people a feeling of pleasure or it is suspended and ups and downs, but no, it is really bad.

After reading the book, I felt that it was a book about the true inner thoughts of a little person. For the protagonist, it is a bit cruel, and the tragedy runs through the past and present lives. The writing can be further refined