I Am an Experiencer in the Heavens

First of all, let me state that I am not teaching the author, nor am I trying to bully the author. Let the bullets fly to the six players to gain fans. Many people say that. They don't care how many bowls of rice the six sons have eaten, they just want the six sons to die. But when I watched the bullets flying, I clearly heard the sighs of the people, sighing twice. I heard it many times, but you said that the people wanted to watch the show, they knew it, they just didn't dare to say it, "Zhang Mazi" said He killed five good county magistrates. When Zhang Mazi went back, the people clearly said that he had killed five good county magistrates. The people all remembered it. You said that the people are ignorant. I always think that you have broken away from the people stage. You don't regard yourself as the people. I won't say more.

The protagonist uses a body other than his own in another world. Then it is best not to let the emotional line appear in the plot guidance. The protagonist is also a human being and cannot remain steely forever. As long as you are restricted to your body, physical distance is the most dangerous erosion If you are steely, you are no longer a normal man. So the plot rarely leads in this direction. If the protagonist really doesn't have a cold, then write less. If you write more, it will feel like you care.

Abandoned in Chapter 69, the protagonist's wife in that world was kidnapped. This plot is extremely toxic. In addition, the world of Grandmaster is almost developed according to the original drama. What have you accomplished? What have you changed? (If it were me, I would become as strong as in the second world, and then go to the devils to kill. Don't you want to practice your skills? The devils are surrounding you all over the country, can't they hone you? Also, one last thing to emphasize, it is disgusting for the protagonist's wife to be kidnapped. If I were the villain, I would definitely feel good first, especially the beautiful one. 😅

Support. Some novels don't want to read when they see pig's trotters added to the plot. Butterfly effect, you change some things when you enter. It's disgusting to follow the original work later. Support the author.

I started reading it from Chapter 69, and I just wanted to ask how many times the author plans to write the plot of the wife being kidnapped to persuade her to quit? Did the author consider the reader's mentality when he arranged it this way? Do you think the real robber would leave the protagonist's wife safe and sound? And let a female robber take care of him? You thought it was a women's prison?

The writing is good, but in the second copy, you can just write the mission requirements, and you can't practice the samurai training method. Don't write that you pretend to be noble and don't practice martial arts if you want to experience it. I have read so many things about self-defeating martial arts, but you are the first one who dares to write about it.

How should I put it, the author is somewhat literary and pretentious, and made a lot of poisonous points for the sake of the plot!

Write well! Support! 😁

The master's world is very exciting, but I always feel that I still have more to say The great master repeated it to the master Now that the master has experienced the great momentum and the joy of invincible pushing, and then returns to the body in the next world, practicing martial arts and fighting will not be as exciting as before It would be better if the order was reversed.

Although I think it tastes good, I personally feel that compared to The Master, The Grandmaster is not big enough... The main character in The Master has always had the right idea. You play your role and I fight mine throughout the whole process. From farming to farming, the times revolve around individuals. It can be expected that the initial lack of talents in the New China era and the phase of being chased and intercepted by various countries will be alleviated. The protagonist has also been focusing on doing his own thing, putting aside the love between his children and practicing farming first. We have everything we need, and the foundation we need to lay has been laid. But in The Grandmaster, the protagonist suddenly seems to have run out of ideas. He has stopped cultivating the fields and lost his voice. Following the trend of the times, he has become a tinker, carrying out assassinations in vain, making himself physically and mentally exhausted. He has also become a screw-type character, and even wastes points to maintain a relationship. Then you have to get something to be worthy of it. What did the protagonist get in The Grandmaster? Extensive experience? Isn't it enough that the master who has returned from the world's best martial arts club is not enough? The enemies in Grandmaster can give you the same things as Master, right? Look at the introduction and there are even super types in the later chapters. At the beginning of Avengers Alliance, space battleships can send you flying all over the sky. How useful is your experience in fighting humanoids when fighting against tin cans or even purple sweet potato spirits? Can the spacecraft have joint acupuncture points? If you really want to be stronger, you might as well challenge natural disasters with your physical body and seek a breakthrough. So is he a new perspective and outlook on life? For him, a life that returns from intense to calm may be meaningful, but if he remains so humble and depressed, how will he confront the deep well ice like the Purple Sweet Potato Spirit in the future? Reasoning with him, is it true that it's just plain and simple? The opponent may just punch you and kill you. And from a reader's perspective, my personal reading experience is also very strange. I can push it horizontally and be the absolute center. Why do I have to marginalize it? Haha? If you want to be an inconspicuous person, why not turn off the app and go to work? Purely personal opinion, no malice intended. I hope that the future plots will be more exciting and the future of this book will be prosperous.

How many years have it passed before the heroine was kidnapped by someone else?

I really like the warriors of the Republic of China in your works. They have a kind of moral and military demeanor, which has an unusual meaning. However, it is difficult for me to read the Western fantasy series you wrote.

Finally read a book where the main character is not a monk 👍

Author, I would like to make a suggestion to rewrite the third world as soon as possible. The pattern of the story behind your two stories is smaller than the pattern of the previous story. I saw that you let the protagonist enter the plot 20 years in advance, only practicing martial arts and assassination, and did not want to follow the old path of the first world. I thought you would go to Japan to assassinate the emperor and those war criminals later, but you ended up falling in love. I am not against the author writing about love, but the problem is that as long as I write about the Republic of China, I don't want the Chinese people of that era to be so damaged. The war during the Republic of China is an eternal pain in the hearts of our Chinese people. If it is painful, we will try our best to let our descendants remember it. If it is painful, we will find ways to make it unforgettable for our descendants. Therefore, as long as there is an author writing about the Republic of China, the protagonist who does not save the country and the people is a crooked person! The author writes about brothers of life and death. Although he does not explicitly write about the spy confrontation between the two parties and assassinations of each other, a top spy leader does not need to think that his hands are absolutely stained with the blood of martyrs. Can such a person be overshadowed by the words "brothers of life and death"? ! I don't know if anyone has pointed it out in the post. This is not the second story at all. It is not as exciting as the first story, but because the second story has an incorrect butt. Most readers don't like the second story because subconsciously they feel something is wrong and they will feel disgusted when they go back to the future. I am afraid that this book will be reported. I am definitely not alarmist. So the author begs you to delete or change the second story as soon as possible.

I'm dizzy. You've already made enough money to put it on the shelves, and you update it every day. What do you think? When it's free, it's updated twice a day.

Pretenders, swords, hidden TV dramas praising revolutionary heroes are much better than anti-war dramas 👍

The foundation of the rapid development of American comics is unstable 😎 The room for improvement is limited 😅 It is not as good as China's fairy tales and fantasy 🪖

The front leg Liuzi just said that only the county magistrate appointed by the provincial chairman has the power to try cases, so how can the Liuzi have the power to kill people? This in itself violates what the county magistrate said is fair, killing people to establish authority without any basis? Not to mention the testimony of Hu Wan's frame-up, why can't you say that the murder of Huang Silang was the frame-up of Liu Zi's murder and forced selling of fans? Even if the fan seller followed Liu Zi to testify, the frame-up would require the county magistrate to interrogate the case before killing him. Killing someone without going through the county magistrate's trial is unfair in itself. Liu Zi really had to die now. In the movie, Huang Silang was very powerful, and Zhang Mazi had to make many calculations before he dared to fight in the end. But at that time, Zhang Mazi had the support of the people and the people. What does Zhang Mazi have now? How many brothers are there? And the four major families have never stood next to Zhang Mazi. Even if you are a dragon crossing the river, you have to hold it first. As a result, the county magistrate's son killed people and established his authority not long after he arrived. Are you not afraid that people will be ruthless and kill you directly? It's really not okay to intensify the conflict before it has a foothold and let bullets fly into the plot.

Soul Transmutation is still too weak in reality, and does Soul Transmutation have to be started from scratch every time? That would be too troublesome

I like the part about The Grandmaster the most, but I don't like Wolverine and after. It's a personal preference.