The War Domination System of the Heavens

After briefly reading it, I found that the writing is good, but it involves too many elements, is a bit confusing, and the genre is relatively niche. This should be one of the reasons why this book is not famous. Part of the plot is deliberately exaggerated, probably to create excitement. 😵This is nothing, it's just that exaggeration should be done in a certain way. Gold shopping shop shopping street. This may also instill in that child the idea that having money can do whatever you want.

I have written several books but still have zero fans. Although I have only read the first few chapters, the author is not a foreigner, right? The writing content is totally not in line with the taste of Chinese people. If this is the case, why would you send it to China? It would be better to just send it to foreign websites.

The writing sounds good, keep up the good work

What is this written about? ? Two armies for a dozen worlds? Also, if you can explode troops, Vergil's life or death is none of your business.

The front part is really a bit messy, but the writing in the back is getting better and better. Good luck, author.

Fast food article is just like I can't remember what I wrote before after reading it.

I'm not worthy anymore, I can't understand

Qianlie suggested that the author take the time to change the content before Oda's letter. If the beginning is not done well, no one will read the subsequent content no matter how exciting it is. People who say this book is not good should base their comments on it at the beginning. 😵The beginning is really messy.

The subject matter is good, but suddenly the card is messed up, and a good hand of cards is played to pieces.

I don't know how to evaluate it anymore

It's a bit of a crotch-stretching one, but it's good to have a right of passage to the world. I'll give you dozens and dozens of them here.