Old Investigators in the Steam Age

Does Xifan use a Chinese name? It's a bit weird, and some of your place names and people's names are European, which makes it feel a bit complicated.

The author's private sermons are really a bunch of things, and it looks like a show. The plot in the free chapter is so compact that people can't breathe. You can pronounce the names of the old days when you think about them. The old days in this book are so awesome🤫

The names of people and places are too weird, the logic of behavior is all Western fantasy, and some Chinese names are too weird.

Nothing but a little bit of imagination

The full Chinese name of Xihuan. When I attended the party, I offended the little girl and was so frightened that she swore she would never come again. The revolver jammed. It was so densely packed with poison that I took it.

I gave up (›´ω`‹) the routine is too old. The protagonist has traveled through the past. He actually does something like a little kid. Secondly, many of the Chinese names are used. Does it hit the mark? Xibuxi, I really gave up and said goodbye.

Come on! I think it's pretty good, the more I write, the better!

There's no reason why your grades are so bad

I was sorted out in the second picture.

The investment is profitable, support it and come on!

The protagonist's memory is also known to others

Come on, the recommendation vote has been given to you.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

It would be better to change the name of the protagonist, a western fantasy

I can't even understand this introduction. How do I click in to see the content?