I Have a Sky Island

The book is well written, surprisingly not many people read it. A fantasy pastoral about the construction of another world. If the author doesn't want to create too many villains to force conflicts, why not dig deeper into the technology tree upgrade? Wooden technology is upgraded to stone technology, then iron, gold, and diamond. Skeletons have evolved fusion technology, with three bones becoming generals, ten bones becoming tigers, and hundreds of bones becoming dragons. It's a common tactic in very old online games, but if it's written carefully, not complicated, and not repetitive, many people will like it rather than hate it. Buddhist series such as MC all have upgrade elements. The author might as well try to eliminate the bad and retain the good, and see what can be learned from it? If there are only two sides, good and evil, the hierarchy is a bit too solid. Are there any settings such as cloud beasts and moon spirits that should be added during the red moon? If the world is all already explored areas, it would be too boring. Why not add a new map to the depths of the fog? Judging from the settings of the gate of time and space and the ruins, the author should have already foreshadowed it, so I hope it can be more fantasy 😁. Like cloud trees, moon shadow grassland like the Milky Way on the ground, cloud beasts and birds playing in the sky, dandelion grass as huge as an elephant...

The interaction between the game and reality is equivalent to taking a different world with you, and you are still in the same class. If the game world is opened later, it will be equivalent to a different world for each person, which is too big. Please change your introduction quickly.

Write more about reality. In reality, the higher-ups should be aware of it. Write about these plots

Let's take a look at the daily life of ordinary people who come into contact with people in the sky, and add real-life details. Erin csgo kills randomly and so on

I'm very strange, why do I think there is nothing wrong with this book? On the contrary, it's quite beautiful and interestingヾ(Ő∀Ő๑)ﾉ

The writing is quite good, but some details are not handled well, and the advancement of the plot is too deliberate. It just comes right away if you feel it is missing. . . Next time, you can buy foreshadowing in advance and dig it out after dozens of chapters.

The idea of ​​this book is very novel and interesting. I hope the author will not be a eunuch and like this book very much✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Is this theme original? It feels really broad.

Isn't this the same game as Raiders of the Lost Ark, similar to Clash of Clans, except that the sea is replaced by the sky, exactly the same

I'm confused... Why during the jury meeting in Chapter 3, the protagonist could say that he had already made the first version. As the leader of the planning team, he made a game, but the team members knew nothing about it and no one had seen it. No one questioned it [scratching his head] The jury didn't question it either, and there was no market survey or anything like that. According to the protagonist, is he independently developing a game at his own expense? There is no need for project evaluation, no process, and no need to file design data. It just feels like child's play. Not engaged in game development, confused. You can only speak if your fan value is above 200…

Cow, I like this type the most

😃 Come on, author, you write well.

I read a chapter, it was a subject that suited my taste, and the writing seemed okay, so I tried poison.

Nice, interesting setting! Where do the other gods go? I hope the protagonist will follow his faith and become a god. It would be great to add a fantasy setting!

Is this miracle child really not a trustee?

Look what I found