The Laughing Clown in One Piece

Read it all in one go, it's a rare pirate fanfic. It was a little confusing at first, using a group portrait style of writing. The author's writing style is very strong, but still a little immature. Yu Xi believes that if he wants to write a group portrait well, and at the same time make the work attractive and appealing as a web article without losing the delicacy of traditional literature, the author needs to slightly modify the traditional group portrait writing method. After all, omniscient perspective is still respected in online articles, especially in fan works. Because after all, fans are bound by the settings of the original work. If the author wants to show a different clown in traditional One Piece fan fiction, I personally recommend using a limited knowledge perspective. That is, the reader knows slightly more than the protagonist, but he is not an omniscient and omnipotent God. The omniscient perspective is like "Romeo and Juliet". This work adopts the omniscient perspective, that is, the reader is God. It is suggested that the limited knowledge perspective of this work is semi-omniscience, which is not like complete limited knowledge (complete limited knowledge means that the reader and the protagonist know the same thing. The representative online novel is Chen Dong's Shengxu Trilogy.) But is similar to the writing method of "Water Margin". Representative chapters include Lin Jiaotou Fengxue Mountain Temple. Among them, Lin Chong is the protagonist, so his perspective is limited, and the reader does not fully know how Lin Chong will be killed, but only knows a little more than Lin Chong. There are many benefits to writing about pirates and clowns in this way. The author can boldly combine profile description with psychological description. You can change your perspective boldly. It won't make the characters thin. You can create a group of like-minded people under the leadership of the clown to turn the pirate world upside down~ However, there are a few points to note: when writing group portraits in this way, you still need to have a main timeline, and time changes and jumps should be described clearly (you can let readers know from the side, such as: "After the Navy headquarters moved away from Marineland", "When the golden clock rings", "On the ruins of O'Hara", etc.) So that it is not easy to mess up. The time travel background of Bucky the Clown needs to be introduced slowly, otherwise it will be a bit abrupt and confusing, making it difficult to continue. The next step is to blow 😍😍😍 I really like this kind of writing about group portraits~ Writing like this makes me feel like I am in the magnificent sea, facing the changing world. Every character is great and an explorer of the new era. Behind every character there is a moving spirit. Just like in the arena, the number 923 and the words of the people who were killed before establish a name for people who are unwilling to give in and will always fight. Either profound or superficial, they all give people different emotions and shocks. It is a little regrettable that when the clown faced the battle with CP0 on Mariejoia, I thought this would be the place where the clown announced to the world. Unfortunately, the author did not fully write it out, which is a little regretful. But after the clown bullied Zefa and talked with the dragon later, I saw a calm and crazy person who was also wise, arrogant and chaotic. This kind of clown not only has nostalgia for the classics, but also has reasonable improvements and innovations. Although it's not obvious that it was written, it's still refreshing. Really great work. I still suggest that the author make an outline and be more detailed in character creation. I will continue to support it and hope that the work will get better and better. ps: please improve~

This is a god-like book. He has not written anything about time travel, but he can also write that you are a clown. He time travels to the original owner Bucky, but lives a life that is not Bucky's style. It gives me a feeling of facing the real Jack. There is a very classic part, which is casual clothes and becomes cp9. I think it may be a tribute to the clown in the DC universe. I wish I had seen it when he was finished instead of now.

Come on, author, your work makes me feel right. The various descriptions are amazing. I gave you 600 points as a small reward. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง I'm looking forward to your work.

Look what I found? Wow! Golden legend!

The characters are full-bodied, but the shortcoming is that the rhythm and paragraphs are a bit messy as a group portrait, and it seems to have no outline at first glance. I have to say that this writing style gave me the feeling of reading Qi Miao's works. At first, I thought it was Qi Miao opening a new vest, but the detail processing and rhythm were not sophisticated enough. Come on! Writing about county portraits is not easy, I hope you stick to it.

Very interesting. Update soon, the author is great

It's great. It's a blessing to have a fandom zone. It's also a blessing to see readers who appreciate it and share the essence of life.

My scalp is numb, my favorite American comics and pirate fan fiction can be successfully integrated. —— No spoilers, this book needs to be read with a brain, it is not a mindless read. —— If you like American comics, you can check it out. DC fans should find it interesting. —— Only my personal opinion.

Tianhu has the potential to become a god at the beginning, if he doesn't collapse later

If there is no original plot in the middle of a fan novel, both the audience and the author will be disappointed. After all, the protagonist has changed the world line and the story is still the same, which is very logically problematic. This novel is different from the beginning. I hope to see more pirate backgrounds but the story is completely different. The beginning is great, come on! ! 🤭

Why did I discover this work when it had 7.7K words, rather than when it had 1 million words? I'll blow up this book, okay?

This masterpiece is the Pirate Code, I hope the next one will be this book

I can change my gender 🤭 I guess the effeminate clown wears a red leather jacket and purple leather pants (don't care)

Even if you spend money to watch ads, you have to support me. I will follow you as long as you write, and all my votes will be yours, even though they are only recommended votes.

Joker fan art

Come on, this novel is unique. It's the first time I've seen such a crazy protagonist. I've only read articles about obscene development and pretentiousness. This crazy article is refreshing. It's very exciting to read. Keep up the good work. I hope it can highlight the cunningness of the clown. It would be better if some cold storage can be added 😃😃😃

Actually, what's the problem with the sex-change plot? I don't quite understand why so many people don't like it.

This memory does seem a bit bland now, but after re-reading it as a whole, the characters have become much fuller. Author, you are really nb

You can refer to it

As a reminder, anyone who complains about confusing narratives can be treated as if he failed elementary school Chinese.

———————————————— "What happened later?" "Later, of course we defeated the navy heroically and continued on our adventure" "What about the blue-haired young lady?" "She... I've never seen her again" "Ah~ so boring" "Haha" The red-haired man smiled softly and put a straw hat on the head of the boy next to him. "Luffy, the sea is too vast. She carries every ship that sails towards her, and offers cheap freedom to everyone, but often the cheapest needs to be exchanged for the most precious things." "Uncle, I don't understand~" "Haha, stupid kid" The man gently knocked the boy's head with an empty wine glass "It's already seven o'clock, won't you come back? The Tatars are coming to arrest you" "Ah! Let's go, uncle will come here tomorrow" "Haha" The man raised the golden ale, and the candlelight reflected in the wine, he seemed to see the blue figure again, the last time he met her "A gentleman who is too straightforward will not be welcomed" "Don't be so impatient, red-haired Mr. "Sir, let's play another song" "One day we will meet again. At that time, grab me on your ship, let me sing for your banquet, dance with you, every day and every night, be gentle, my Mr. Pirate, otherwise I will cry." "Hey! Shanks" The man came back to his senses, and the shouts, whistles, and the clinking of wine glasses slowly returned. Into his ears "What are you thinking!" The monkey on the man's shoulder scratched his red hair, and the collision of the wine glasses wet his clothes "Haha~" He smiled happily, his red hair was messy "Of course it is our next banquet! Boss lady~ Another twenty barrels of wine, boys! Today, you will not go home until you are drunk!" The wine glasses clinked, which was a melody praising freedom. ——————————————————

It's really great. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. Come on, author. I'll read the ads and support you.

To be honest, I don't like transvestites very much, but the author said it was for plot advancement. Unfortunately, after thinking about it for a long time, I still didn't realize that the clown had to change his gender to accomplish anything he wanted to do.

Aren't memories meant to fill in the image of a character? Why is it so confusing? It's rare to discover the characters' personalities from online articles. I feel that it allows readers to understand the reasons and why the characters behave the way they do, and to experience the plot more immersively. Moreover, the narration of so many characters must be to pave the way for the subsequent story. The author's writing style is very stylish, and I believe he will not do it in vain.

Brothers, the female version of Bucky the Clown, come with me! ! !

Bucky the Clown

I voted monthly. Please update more.

Hey, I drew it in imitation, maybe the lines are not very smooth, please forgive me✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Reward 500 points, the author will hurry up. Don't dawdle

I voted for you again and my ranking has risen by one place. Please update more.