Jason the Lion of Ice and Fire

I hope the author can create a more original version of Ice and Fire. I have read too many Ice and Fire fanfics, and I like to write about Ice and Fire as a Chinese-style hegemony novel, trying to change the social structure of the Ice and Fire world at every turn. It's better to watch fictional history than watch this.

This book is good. I have read several Game of Thrones fics before, but I can only read three of them. One is Magic Knight, one is Mother of Dragons, and one about traveling as Joffrey is also good. Unfortunately, the author of the book about traveling as Joffrey committed suicide and had a relationship with Cersei, so it was banned. This is the fourth book that feels very good. The book "Sleeping Dragon" feels too boring at the front.

The author seems to be a eunuch. . . . .

From the Tourney at Harrenhal to Robert's Rebellion, the protagonist has not interacted with Tyrion, Cersei, and Tywin at all. Instead, he has a lot of plots with Eddard, Elia, and Robert. Isn't it a bit confusing for you to write about the protagonist? Moreover, as a time traveler, the protagonist has not changed Tiget, nor has Jillian's fate been mentioned. There are also a lot of people in the Lion Family in the original novel. Your protagonist may value family ties, but author, do you really care about the Lion Family?

It's so slow, I'm sure it won't work if I write it like this.

One thing I don't understand is why the protagonist has the body of Wolverine?

The Wrong Spring Chronology of Major Events Since Year 281 of Aegon's Calendar

It feels a bit strange, like a false time traveler. .

How can I put it... After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found it tasteless. The opening is very average, the writing is poor, it feels like you are reading a running account, and it also focuses on describing the past life, which is a big minus point, and the descriptions of the characters in the opening are not good. I, who have read the original work, have a hard time reading it, and those who have not read the original work have no idea what you are writing about. The identity of the protagonist chosen by the author is very ordinary, but since he chose Lannister to start, the opening should describe what happened in Casterly Rock City when the protagonist was a child, rather than going to a martial arts competition. In addition, the writing style is poor and the paragraphs are a bit strange. From my personal feeling, it is very difficult to read through one chapter and it seems stuck. Some authors with good writing skills make the novels that readers can read very smooth, but the ones you write are much worse. Furthermore, the author's description of Aerys II is very strange. The Mad King has become increasingly crazier after experiencing the rebellion in Duskendale. The Mad King described by the author is very ordinary. The Mad King should be crazy and unreasonable, but the author describes him as a mean old man, which is OOC. In the future, there will be a Wolverine body, a time traveler soul, and Joanna can give birth to a Wolverine. I... I will read it later if my grades are better. I am going to die from poison after reading these chapters.

Are you still updating the special one?