Douluo's Double Spear

This is a relatively long book in the Douluo fandom. I'll analyze the pros and cons after reading so many fanfics. The emotional handling in the early stages of this book is almost perfect (although I personally prefer a single female protagonist), and the setting of the cold-blooded killer in the previous life is very novel, but that's all I can praise. Let's talk about the bad, this book, oh, I really didn't expect such an invincible setting to be written like this 😅 Let's not talk about the inexplicable harem at the end. I know that the author wants to highlight the male protagonist's understanding of love after experiencing personality changes, but that should also be compared to Bidong Hu Liena. Later, the cold-blooded personality of the male protagonist becomes dark and twisted, and the writing is really abstract. There is also a very poisonous point about the male protagonist's dual martial souls. One seems to have dragon blood (maybe also the male protagonist's own). There is a lot to write about, such as secretly forming an army of ferocious beasts. As a result, our cold male protagonist went to the forest in the finale and almost took Gu Yuena away. I was so impressed. I almost had a heart attack, and I still have the second martial spirit. I can see that I forced myself to write a few strokes in my several appearances... There are so many writeable settings that I directly created a Shrek lurking 🤤 But it's okay for a new author to write to this level, after all, he is still publishing books. Come on

I hope to write the heroine to death in the future, and give a testimony about killing my wife. I can guarantee that if I write it like this, it will be popular. What is the use of the heroine? She is always the protagonist. The way forward

Tian'e Soul-Destroying Spear

After reading about 10 chapters, I realized that the author doesn't know how to control comments? It's okay if it's a bit venomous, and it's a trivial matter to choose a bad name. You can read the comments on the previous chapters, they have everything. If you delete those comments that make no sense, at least it won't affect reading. For someone like me who likes to read comments, I didn't see any interesting comments. They were all about this and that, which is really boring. Deleted some negative reviews, out of sight and out of mind. Some of them may be trumpet accounts of competitors.

After reading a few chapters, I want to ask when the protagonist will grow? I am talking about spiritual and character growth Cold eyes, cold heart, the word [cold] appears very frequently! Is this cool? The protagonist was a killer in his previous life. What happened to the killer? The killer is also flesh and blood and has emotions, right? Even Gin will reveal a lewd expression when meeting Haibara Ai, okay? When I saw the introduction, it was said to be a high-IQ intellectual battle, but the author's intellectual battle is reflected in his ice-cube face and ice-cube heart?

One last explanation, these plots are all foreshadowing what follows. Think more about why the protagonist doesn't kill Tang San. One is because of the poison, and the other is because of Tang Hao who is hiding in the dark. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, he is only a soul king. Can he compete with Tang Hao? This book is not an invincible system book. It appears to be invincible, but then it is slapped in the face with all kinds of pretentiousness. Even if Tang San opposes the protagonist in the future, it is impossible for him to be crushed by the protagonist without thinking. Anyone who has seen how powerful Tang San's poison is knows. Moreover, everyone knows Tang San's character in the original work. After all, he was reborn and a disciple of the Tang Sect. How could I become an idiot and brainless in a novel written by a Douluo fan? And if the protagonist's personality doesn't change, how can he break into the enemy? How do you get your own opportunities after gaining trust? Here, I only give a general idea, something like this. Don't change your character, be cold, and make others think that the protagonist is dangerous when they see him? Killing people on sight? Fight all the way to the end? Then I might as well finish ten chapters, make an appearance in one chapter, have a system that is invincible, and stop when I see a woman. Seeing that Tang San and Yu Xiaogang were directly killed, they then retired to the mountains and forests to live happily. Novels inherently have stories, and the people in them must also have their own souls. For example, why everyone hates Yu Xiaogang so much? This character represents what he should be like. Although my writing skills are lacking a lot and my writing is not that good, I am trying my best to shape the characters in it and try to retain the original characters' personalities. Although there will be some small changes, will you do it as a fan? Can they all be moved here? I try my best not to change the character of the original characters. What a novel looks like is the ups and downs, layout and plot development in the process. It's not about being a little unhappy after reading a chapter and then going straight to death. Why this chapter is written like this is all based on my consideration. The holes left before are being filled step by step. I didn't write this book just for fun, I just wanted to create a complete and wonderful story. If after reading this book for two or three hundred chapters, you feel that the previous chapters seem poisonous, and you come to scold me at any time, I won't refute a word. What I am saying today is that I hope that everyone who likes this book will understand and not be led by individual people. I update four times a day, and even five times a day. Read one chapter or one minute or two minutes, but it did take me five hours to write it, and this does not include the situation of Kawen. I'm not a tentacle monster, I'm a bit slow at coding, and I'm not a master, and I don't have such good writing skills. However, I try my best to improve the plot of each chapter. Although there are some typos, Lu Lu was careless and didn't have time to check too many times. Please bear with me, everyone. From now on, try to appear as little as possible or not at all. Finally, thank you for your great support and love. Your support is the biggest motivation for my creation.

When I read Chapter 30, I bought the whole thing. I started reading it when I saw Bibi Dong as a single female protagonist. Then I saw that the author mentioned that there can be at most 2 female protagonists, Bibi Dong and Hu Liena. At this time, I already felt that I couldn't stand it anymore, so I endured and continued reading. After all, the relationship between Bibi Dong and Pig's Feet was handled very well and it was very comfortable to watch. By the time we reach more than 60 chapters, who the hell is Tang Yuehua? ? ? Since Pig's Feet is ready to kill Tang San, Tang Hao and destroy the Haotian Sect, why don't you take Tang Yuehua into your harem? ? ? There are so many women, why do you have to accept Tang Yuehua? ? ? The character design of Pig's Knuckle was created by Bibi Dong wholeheartedly. Judging from the way you wrote it, there must be at least several people in the harem. The poisonous point of accepting Tang Yuehua suddenly made me unable to stand it anymore. I turned to the last chapter to see how many people you have accepted. For those who haven't watched it yet, let me reveal that the heroines include Bibi Dong, Tang Yuehua, Hu Liena, and Zhu Zhuqing Can you change your profile? ? Forget about the two heroines, just list the heroines. Money is a trivial matter, and it's mainly a waste of time.

Is there anything particularly eye-catching?

The author's emotional drama makes me embarrassed and pick my feet.

In a harem novel, you would like to introduce a single female protagonist? You don't even need to be embarrassed, right? Pure primary school student writing style

The Rakshasa God rescued Tang San in front of Bibi Dong and Su Yi. Su Yi couldn't recognize that even though he was once the inheritor of the Rakshasa God, he was still an inheritor who had reached the ninth test. It was outrageous that he couldn't recognize the power of the Rakshasa God 🤫🤫🤔🤫

It's okay to be an enemy to the protagonist, but I don't like calling others brothers and then killing them.

After being convinced, he said that he didn't like the harem but showed mercy in every way. Just forget about it if you tease someone together.

People can die in the Killing City, but the Killing City cannot be destroyed. Otherwise, what is the difference between what is done here and Tang San's?

I think a pig's foot can be poisonous, cold-blooded, and vicious, but it's really too low to play with and trample on feelings. Tang San is really good with the protagonist in this book. There is really no need to describe so many pig's feet and Shrek's emotional involvement.

Maybe I'm too picky. Although the comments say it's good, I feel very embarrassed Order 20 chapters and send a sentence. It's not too much.

I haven't read it, is the author bragging in the introduction?

The author must give Qian Renxue a good ending. After all, he and Qian Renxue still have martial soul fusion skills, and I think Qian Renxue is still very pitiful. I hope she can reconcile with Bibi Dong. Blood is thicker than water. When I first saw the finale, seeing Bibi Dong blocking Tang San's sword for Qian Renxue really made people cry. It was so touching. It is best to accept it together. Isn't the three beauties of Wuhun Palace delicious? Do you still want to take advantage of Tang San? ! !

Author, take a look

I got it from a pirated version, and I'll send you a monthly reward ticket.

Dote on Bibi Dong? Love it, love it. Come on!

Big cheers to the author! For this book, I came here to read the original version and give you a reward. I hope you don't give up when you encounter difficulties, and that we book friends will support you.

Harem, do you introduce the heroine who wears shoes alone in summer?

It looked pretty good in the early stages, but why does it feel darker and heartier as it goes on?

In the early stage, Giant Poison treated Tang San and the others as dirty things.

It's so verbose, it makes my head hurt just to read it! Imitate the Chinese language level of the author in the third grade of elementary school: Looking at Bibi Dong...'S eyes, Su Yi said... Looking at the expression on Su Yi's face, Bibi Dong said... Hearing what Bibi Dong said, Su Yi replied... Looking at Su Yi's eyes looking at Bibi Dong, Bibi Dong smiled and said... ... It's better to watch, after all, the eyes can jump directly and automatically ignore these verbose nonsense. But when listening to books, it is really uncomfortable. It is not an exaggeration to describe it as a magic sound filling my ears. A group of people are poisonous in poisonous places, and a group of people are embarrassed in embarrassing places! In order for several women to completely return to their hearts, the male protagonist must be forcibly subdued and tortured to achieve his goal? Every time he said that he would collect interest from his enemies, he ended up being abused every time he went out. I have never seen a cool article where the male protagonist was often slapped in the face. The author is really a rare talent. Keeping saying that Su Yi is not the author's son, but a close friend, but in the end, he treats his close friend like this, as if he doesn't know how to advance the plot without abusing the protagonist. I can read it now only because there are several more eye-catching settings in the book, which makes me feel a bit hopeful. However, this language level is really not good! Alas, let's just take a look...

Bibi Dong also came from the Killing City. How could his combat skills be so weak?

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Author, you really got my point completely.

This book is very good and awesome. The real god of murder plays with people's hearts. If you like dark literature, you can read it.