The Immortal Path’s Gatekeeper

Personal strength comes first; everything else comes second. Don't give me that "technique" nonsense. Can someone with mastered swordsmanship defeat someone with external martial arts training? That's assuming the external martial arts training is unarmed. Give them a horse-slaying saber and see if they can even get close. I can fail countless times, but if I get hit by you, I'll be crippled, if not killed.

This book seems more decent than the one by the "evil monk," who continuously simulates countless lifetimes, directly copying and pasting without even changing the punctuation.

Everything else is fine. Could the main character please stop reacting so strongly to every death around them? The protagonist is from another world, so could there really be some deep feelings involved? Besides, since you're aiming to cultivate immortality, you won't be staying here anytime sooner or later. Over time, mortals grow old and die, and they have no further interaction with you.

It always felt strange to be practicing Qi cultivation with a group of Golden Core and Nascent Soul cultivators.

The work itself is good, but the author hasn't paid enough attention to the overall world-building and price levels. For example, how does the village chief pay a monthly salary of one hundred taels of silver when the prey belongs to the hunter?

The cheat system is too overpowered. With a cheat system that can predict the future and obtain various cultivation techniques, martial arts skills, pill formulas and secret arts at zero cost, unless the protagonist is an idiot, even a pig could conquer the world. Such an overpowered cheat system makes the book completely uninteresting.

You have at least 30,000 followers. Cutting it off like this is letting the people down.

🤔 The main character is not attractive enough Lacking charisma, goals, and depth of thought.

Waaaaah, the author of "A New Type of Online Scam" updated one chapter (related to the work). I thought it was two chapters! 😭

Dear author, please post the title of your new book so everyone can check it out and support it.