The Immortal Path’s Gatekeeper

Your own strength comes first, and everything else takes a back seat. Don't tell me about your skills. Can a master of swordsmanship defeat Heng Lian? This is still the case when Heng Lian is empty-handed. If Heng Lian is given a sword to cut off his horse, do you think he can get close with the sword? I can fail countless times, but as long as you give me a blow, I will not die or be crippled.

At present, this book is more kind than the one by the demon monk. The demon monk simulates N lives continuously and directly copies and pastes the punctuation marks without changing them.

Everything else is good But can the protagonist not react so much when someone around him dies The protagonist has traveled through time, does he really have any deep feelings? In addition, you want to become an immortal, and sooner or later you will not stay here As time goes by, mortals will die of old age, and they will have nothing to do with you.

I always feel that practicing Qi with a group of Jindan Yuanying is weird.

The work is good, but the author is not careful enough about the overall world view and price levels. For example, when the prey is owned by the hunter, how can the village chief pay a monthly salary of 100 taels. The protagonist makes medicine in reality, but the cost and source are not clearly explained. It is only mentioned that the mother-in-law has a medicine. You must know that even if there are several prescriptions, there will be dozens or hundreds of ingredients. These require cost and supply, but as long as the protagonist needs it, he can have it. These sections will affect the reading experience. I hope the author will continue to work hard to upgrade grain and grass into fairy grass.

The golden finger is so unbelievable. There is such a golden finger that can predict the future and obtain various martial arts, martial arts, pills, and secrets at zero cost. Unless the main character is mentally retarded, even a pig can conquer the world. Such an unbelievable golden finger makes the book meaningless at all.

You probably have more than 30,000 fans. If you cut it off like this, you would be sorry to the people.

🤔 The protagonist is not attractive enough No charm, no goals, no depth of thought, etc.

Woohoo, the author of New Internet Fraud has updated a chapter about his work. I thought he has updated two chapters 😭

Dear author, please send me the title of your new book so that everyone can watch and cheer.