The Person Who Wants to Fall in Love with Me Is Not Even a Human Being

If the author is really a newcomer, the prospects are quite promising. However, there are a few issues with this book for the author's reference. 1. Two heroines or multiple heroines? If there are multiple heroines, please change the introduction. Since it is a dual heroine, there is too much emphasis on the kendo girl. I feel like I will write more about the kyudo girl in the future 2. The background setting is a bit too big and can easily collapse if you don't control it well. The setting of law-abiding monsters in the early stage is very eye-catching, but these chapters are a bit deviated. If the control is not good, it will deviate from the daily to the fantasy. 3. The male protagonist Xianyu character may be a tool man, so the main camera should be on the female protagonist, not the mirror. The heads are floating around to irrelevant people, such as the part about preparing for the school festival haunted house 4. Personally, I feel that the essence of the daily series lies in the heroine's mutual tearing and food protection in the early stage, and in the middle and late stages of giving out sweets Above, for the author's reference

I just want to ask if you plan to get them all or what, if you want to trade stocks 🔪🔪🔪🔪

Kitashirakawa Sengoku

Tsukishima Hime

There are still nine hundred and eighty-four years left before the thousand-year-old demon fox becomes a sixteen-year-old demon fox? Isn't this just trash?

To put it simply, if you can tolerate the poisonous points I mentioned and even think it's okay, then this book is actually quite good and worth recommending . . . It was okay in the past, but I couldn't accept that the protagonist had to risk his life and still have to be calculated, and even after the calculation was done, he still had to show off his face. The protagonist had no choice. What if the protagonist, an ordinary person, was killed by her, even if he didn't die, he still had to pay the price? In the end, I punched this person. The protagonist was too innocent, right? There is also no reason to take in a woman who wants to kill him, and there is huge danger. Didn't you say before that the protagonist is a salty fish? To jump into the conspiracy designed by others and get involved so easily, your character cannot stand up at all. Even if it reflects the charm of the protagonist, it cannot be reflected. I only see the simple Asashi in Japanese comics. This is too stiff. Just because she is beautiful? I really can't accept it. Please, you said this woman is going to kill you, but you are still like this. Are you really thinking about it? Even if you help her, you shouldn't help her so simply. Even if you think she is pitiful, you only feel that after taking her home. Your reason is simply untenable, so why are you asking? Are you sure it won't be frozen to pieces if you send it? Meow, what I read earlier is quite good, even if there are some flaws that I don't think are missing, I feel that I have found a good book. . . Disappointment

I found someone with a gentle temperament, and I think he is more suitable than a golden retriever with twin tails

The author, please tell me, whether it is all-encompassing or party-government, if it is all-encompassing I will be fooled 😍😍😍

I think the book is good. I am not very demanding. I just want to ask a question. Two heroines? I will definitely chase it to completion. It is another type. Well, I have already raised it. To see the effects. After all, sometimes I think good is not necessarily the best.

The book is quite good. Now that I have seen the school festival (although I want to see Shura Field), I feel it is pretty good. As long as the author is not too careful and the two female protagonists are not too close, I will keep reading. Also, I want to ask: Is there a group?

A few suggestions: 1. Regarding the male protagonist's IQ, this is the biggest problem in this book. The male protagonist is a child prodigy, but the only feeling after reading the last chapter is that the male protagonist has either been cheated or is on the way to being tricked again. Is this reasonable? The author may think it is interesting, but in our opinion it is a bit inconsistent with the setting 2. It is better for articles of this type to be more daily life. If a new author expands the world view too much, it will be difficult to finish. If there is no inspiration, it will be difficult to handle 3. The follow-up processing of the two heroines. Whether the two female protagonists will agree to share the same male protagonist in the end is a common problem in novels with two female protagonists. This is very difficult to write. I hope the author will try not to ruin the character when dealing with it. In fact, these are the three main points. The first point is the biggest problem, and the second and third points are possible hidden dangers. As a bookworm who has read novels for more than ten years, I put forward suggestions. I hope the author can think about it carefully and solve it as soon as possible after writing more than 150 chapters. Of course, this is advice, and the author can ignore it if he doesn't want to hear it. I really hope this book can be well-written, because the structure of this story background should not be read by so few people. The story background and the character creation of the heroine are quite good. I hope the author will work hard. When I advance to lv3 in the college entrance examination next year, I will try my best to give my recommendation votes to you.

Is this book multi-heroine or just Tsukishima and Sengoku?

Hmph

Is there anyone who tested the poison who is still alive and can introduce it to me?

A eunuch? Why hasn't it been updated in so long?

Don't send it. There are very few books that are so appealing to me. The author posted a single chapter explaining that eunuchs are also acceptable. This is very uncomfortable

Good guy, I haven't been here for a while. Is this a eunuch?

Did the author send it?