Horizontal Push Kendo

It's written dryly and forcefully suppresses the protagonist, only improving his swordsmanship but not his cultivation. It's really funny.

The setting is very interesting, and there are no major flaws so far. The author obviously has his own thoughts, and you can tell that he put a lot of thought into it. I also hope that the author will not write female characters who are pig teammates, and kill female villains when they should be killed.

The setting is okay, but there is something wrong with your practice direction. It's a big problem. It can be said that if a hundred people read it, 99 of them will give up. No matter what kind of martial arts novel, the first priority is the cultivation of the body, not technical things. There is something wrong with the order of your setting. Unless you are a pure swordsman novel, not many people will read it. In martial arts, there is power first and then skill.

This book was probably written by a child, probably an elementary school student. It's great to be able to write like this! Worth encouraging!

Come on! Looks good, I support you 😀

Write well, come on, and be sure to pay attention to quality.

It's useless if you don't go up and practice Excalibur

The writing is okay and I can read it, but if it is calculated based on one hundred refinements before reaching the next stage, then it is too slow for the protagonist to only have seven refinements now. And it's not like there are no restrictions on the technique.

Author, you see that so many people have raised the issue of not cultivating the body, it shows that there is really a problem, and it is recommended to modify it. It is really boring to push the trend of not cultivating the body, and your book will not be popular.