A God of War Turns Up in the Great Jin

I saw some people say that there is no distinction between priority and priority, saying that there are too many scenes describing Liu Yu in the first part. There is a point in the first part. Maybe the author has also seen what others said, and in the later Xiangyang, Liu Yu's role is less. Also, I think the most famous person in this era is probably Liu Yu. It's impossible to let Pig Knuckle compete for hegemony alone. I think it's okay to focus on Liu Yu's growth.

Here I come. The writing is really good.

Didn't anyone feel wrong when they read Chapter 8? How could the people at that time continue to eat meat? It's good to have meat during the Chinese New Year and festivals, right?

After reading thirty chapters, the protagonist is basically invisible. You might as well just write about Liu Yu. Your novel is like a useless novel, tasteless and a pity to discard.

This book has always been indifferent. The protagonist is not like the protagonist, and the supporting role is not like the supporting role.

I thought Liu Yu was the protagonist, and the main character didn't appear very often. The little lady was always written in a more detailed way than the protagonist, so it would be better to write Liu Yu as the protagonist. . The priorities are mixed. .

The Langya Wang family developed in the Western Jin Dynasty of Cao Wei, was established in the early years of the Eastern Jin Dynasty and reached its peak period. It was known in history as "the king and the horse share the world", and continued to decline in the Southern Dynasty, the late Tang Dynasty and the Five Dynasties. In the past seven hundred years, the Langya Wang family had an important influence on politics, ethics, laws and regulations, literature and art. Representative figures include Wang Xiang, Wang Dao, Wang Xizhi, Wang Jian, etc. During the Yongjia Rebellion at the end of the Western Jin Dynasty, the Langya Wang family crossed south from Linyi Yiguan and moved their entire family to Jinling. After crossing to the south, because of longing for his hometown, he always called the land in the north. During the reign of Emperor Yuan of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, the overseas Chinese settled in Nanlangya County.

Author, the protagonist has a lot less roles and has no sense of existence. Why do you always write about Liu Yu? Give the protagonist some aura!

You are quite capable of writing about Liu Yu under the guise of a time traveler.

To be honest, your opening is indifferent and not attractive enough. If a good protagonist does not advance the main plot, he will become a nanny. You want to compete for hegemony, not to hug others.