A God of War Turns Up in the Great Jin
大晋捡到一只战神
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- Completed
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- 3.8M Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Jin-Sui-Tang Dynasties
- Updated
- 2y ago
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Some people have said that the main and supporting characters are not distinguished, and that there are too many scenes depicting Liu Yu in the beginning. There are indeed some scenes depicting Liu Yu in the beginning, and perhaps the author also saw what others were saying, so Liu Yu's role was reduced later in the Xiangyang campaign.
I'm here! Your writing is really good.
Didn't anyone notice anything amiss when they got to Chapter 8? People back then couldn't afford to eat meat all the time! Having meat during festivals was considered a luxury!
After reading thirty chapters, the main character is basically invisible. You might as well just write about Liu Yu directly. Your novel is like a chicken rib—tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away.
This book consistently fails to distinguish between primary and secondary characters; the main character doesn't act like a main character, and the supporting characters don't act like supporting characters.
I thought Liu Yu was the main character, but the main character doesn't appear much. Even the concubines are written in more detail than the main character. Maybe I should just make Liu Yu the main character. The main and supporting characters are mixed up.
The real Langya Wang clan in history
The Langya Wang clan flourished during the Cao Wei and Western Jin dynasties, established itself in the early Eastern Jin dynasty, and reached its zenith, historically known as "the Wang and Ma families sharing the empire." This influence continued into the Southern Dynasties and the late Tang and Five Dynasties period before declining.
Dear author, the main character has far less screen time and lacks presence. Why do you keep writing about Liu Yu? Give the main character some glory!
To write about Liu Yu under the guise of a time traveler, you're really something else!
To be honest, your opening is poorly structured, lacking focus and appeal. Instead of pushing the main plot forward, the protagonist becomes a mere babysitter. Are you aiming for dominance, not trying to ride on someone else's coattails?