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Therefore, the author made a mistake in setting the dragon spirit species from the beginning. Any dragon spirit species will be at full level as soon as it is born. It will know everything about its life as soon as it is born, and it will accept the cause of its death as soon as it is born. Dragon essences are high-dimensional beings that integrate their past, future and present to contain them.

Is the author serious? Although the dragon elf appears at the first level in the anime, and there is no positive description or specific character in the novel, the story of Jibril's crusade against the dragon elf is written in the special edition. The appearance of the dragon elf is that of a giant dragon in traditional mythology, without being anthropomorphic...

When you write about dragon spirits, you at least have clear settings. The names of the ability to transform into humans after being born from a dragon egg are all ancient fantasy names, and you don't like Tut's rule that the eggs can be used on other planets 😒 Original text ——Star Cup As a conceptual device of absolute dominance, it is a container that contains almighty power. The power that exists in this universe is nothing more than the fragments that accidentally dripped from the container. For Tetu who can control that kind of power at will, whether it is time or metaphysical causality - it is meaningless. Creation and destruction, past and future, even observation and determination, he can do whatever he wants. It is easy to see a future in which the gods will cry in despair—or even to create that kind of future. Star Cup is a single-player universe that can be controlled as you wish. Unless you leave the world view of game life, you have to play the game obediently.

I love Binchotan so much, I feel warm and distressed, please write to me carefully, otherwise the blade will warn you

When writing a fanfic, you can first understand the settings. Is it just a hard cloud?

The writing style is a bit poor, but the idea is quite good. The writing is too embarrassing, almost like a running account 😅

Author V1, I should say the first book. You know The style is very similar to the fan works from ten years ago. There are a lot of typos, and there is a big problem in setting the level. Food made at the third level can easily damage the skin of the fifth level. Can the ancient type ignore the firearms and challenge the army? Fighting the Japanese Warring States Legion equipped with a flintlock gun? If your two-dimensional concentration is high enough and you don't care about various bugs, you can watch it. Anyway, I was quite embarrassed because I indirectly saved Bo Spider-Man. Spider-Man seemed to like the protagonist and kept talking about Zha Long. I'm too lazy to say more The above is a personal YY debut full of two dimensions. May the author work hard to make progress and bear fruit.

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There is no possibility of being weakened by a dragon spirit in a fight. It will always be at full status until it is killed, because it is a high-dimensional creature that combines time and space into one.

Nothing new, the setting is still the same class-based combat power system of the ancient infinite flow.

It feels like this

The three golden chapters at the beginning persuade you to quit, and you get the opportunity given by the transcendent existence to have a powerful system, and then reincarnate into a powerful race, as well as system elves, clear classes and advancement methods. These are not problems. The problem is that the author exposes all these things from the beginning. This not only makes readers lose their sense of expectation, but also causes the plot to be uneventful because the protagonist is too invincible. This is not to say that the invincible flow will be uneventful, but the author's way of writing will make the protagonist invincible without a sense of mystery, and finally the plot will become uneventful. ps: By the way, daily poisoning is a well-deserved reputation.

Actually, I have wanted to say it for a long time. Pig's trotter's character is too much. Things like the tree of life, the water of life and the life crystals are just his parents' things. Although he has the power to use them, he has no right to give them to others! It would be fine if it were given to a friend, but I don't know what to think about giving such a precious thing to a friend for the first time. If you are used to giving away things like pig's feet, others will think that you should give things to others. People will gradually get used to it and don't care. They naturally think that the protagonist should give things to them. This is not good, if you are friends or family members, it is fine, but if you give a lot of things when you meet for the first time, it feels like, ugh, bad words. No matter how many things you have, you can't waste your family property. And the author, I found that your article has no main goal, so it is easy to get messed up as you write. Finally, the author, try to write the protagonist's character better. Don't write the kind of character who just likes to give things away. Once others get used to it, it will be taken for granted. If they want something, they will ask the protagonist for it. If not, it will be embarrassing. If it's just like this now it's okay, but if your personality doesn't change in the future. I believe there will always be some internet trolls who notice this and call the protagonist a licker. So the author, you should pay attention!

With the author's writing style, it's really impossible to write about a dragon spirit species. It would be better to write about a naive giant species. Among the giants in Game of Life, there are those like Titan Soldier and Ultraman. The giants in Game of Life are just relatively naive, so they are ranked fourth, but their combat power is still very impressive.

Those who write about Game Life and Hakoba are not popular because there are few settings that are comprehensive and correct 😂

A dragon spirit breeds an egg? You, the dragon spirit species who are at your peak at birth, are born as an egg. How do you do this? Isn't this just a three-wheeler mixed in with a bunch of luxury cars at a party? Or the kind that breaks a tire and breaks a chain.

The birth of the dragon spirit species - born from the remains of the gods The reproduction of the dragon spirit species - reproduction through the inheritance of the remains The existence form of the dragon spirit species - a life that is integrated in time and space. It knows its destiny as soon as it is born, knows why it is born, and knows why it dies. The moment you are born, you are in your prime, because you are born with the relationship between the past and the future, and there is no physical state such as injury or weakness. Either you are not injured, or injury means death. The way dragon spirits move is not to fly in the physical sense, but to move by rejecting time and space, and at the same time rejecting the interference of time and space. Therefore, DIO's time suspension and Shirai Kuroko's space teleportation are completely ineffective against dragon spirits. The language of the Dragon Elf species - the Dragon Elf Language is the remnant of the founding power and the most primitive language of the planet. It has countless nicknames such as "Universal Language" and "Creation Language". It is the language of royal authority that can command all things in the world to surrender unconditionally during the war. There is no need to compile spells or invoke elves. Dragon Essence Language itself is "magic". Simply put, it is the power of "word spirit". The prophetic ability of the dragon elf species - because it exists at multiple points in time at the same time, it can see the future to a certain extent.

I just read a chapter and I didn't think it was very good. There are some sentence problems and the protagonist's performance is a bit awkward. The author can re-read it carefully. Unless you like the manga very much and don't care about the protagonist's expressiveness, this kind of beginning will not work. Whether it is an anime or a novel, people still value the performance of the protagonist.

It's a bit unbearable to watch without thinking (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ. There are typos, settings, chatting, etc., And various embarrassments caused by the age of the protagonist. It feels like I have a chat group just to write about cultivation and immortality.

Regarding the race of the protagonist Daidu who loves to eat Dragon egg joins the chat group at the beginning Regarding the protagonist, I have made a certain degree of secondary design. The main reason is that the dragon spirits in the original setting of the game life world are very strong, and they reach their peak at birth. The question is whether they can defeat Tut who holds the Star Cup. Not to mention Tut, even if he goes to save Hubi, Rick must be able to defeat the god from 6,000 years ago! And the pressure from Tut holding the Star Cup when changing history! So I made a second design, just hoping to write a better ending with Hubby and Rick having a blank ending. A lot of people came to me to complain about the name of the protagonist, and some even scolded me directly. I also agree with those who complained about it. After all, I am a bad namer. As for the readers who scolded it, if you don't like it, just don't look at the back row. Just look at the three names in the front. The back row was used at the beginning of the plot. As for the writing problem, the first few chapters were a bit sluggish. It is my first time to write a book, and I have been learning how to practice writing well every day. I personally feel that it should be much better now. What do readers think? Then please readers give free recommendation tickets to Daidaiha, it's really important. Although everyone can now use free chapters for free, then Xiaolong can use free recommendation tickets as money for whoring nmI

The little orange cat we just adopted is named Fat Niu, because the last orange cat we raised was called Fat Tiger, and this time it's a younger sister, so she's called Fat Niu. Take a day off today to take her to get the vaccine distributed

You can read it when you are short of books, but don't take it seriously. If you take it seriously, you will not be able to stand it anymore.

If you want to win the Star Cup special map, you must at least start at the top super single level or multi-level (by the way, the multi-level I mean means destroying infinite single universes with one blow)

I saw the part about the birthday party, let's talk about my opinions Many people said that the settings were written wrong, but that's not the most important thing. Everything is based on the second setting, but the descriptions of other character personalities are also very different from the original works. Various magic changes, Dagu engaged in scientific research to mass-produce the magic rod, Spider-Man directly changed the power system at the beginning, and the protagonist of Slime became half a king. These are all okay The most important thing is the protagonist's stuff. It's a random gift. The author just gives away the characters he likes. From the perspective of the protagonist in the plot, he is the person he has met for the first time, and he is also a person from the group world. When they meet, he gives away things about the power system, and various treasures are directly sold for free. It feels like a rich man passing by and seeing an unknown person: I like you, and I will give you a Pentagon The author likes it. I understand, but from the perspective of the protagonist, it is not logical at all, and it is too uncomfortable to watch.

Let me ask you, from which chapter did the improvement in writing become more obvious? I've reached chapter 15 and it's really hard to accept, so I'll jump back a little bit.

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Big collapse, plot, characters, dialogue, big chaos. This is the ravings of a mentally ill person

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Which one is better, the Dragon Spirit Seed or Zhan Yan Emperor?

Author, has your new book been blocked?