
One Step Ahead of Rebirth
重生之先人一步
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 645k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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316Chapters
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The forced plot is already annoying... The more I write this kind of article, the more tired I become... The subjective assumptions are too strong... A person whose reputation has been ruined can regain a certain amount of credibility by doing a good deed. Why? Because the deeper the hate, the deeper the love... No matter when, giving up should be dull, it makes the heart feel like death... Such a forced and disgusting plot to be honest... Boring... Give up... Because it is already foreseeable... Just make money, make money, make money, make money... Pick up your wife and children... I advise the author to open a new one... First, this kind of plot will not be on TV and movies, so there is no version Rights and benefits... Second, this kind of plot has no sense of substitution and is too deliberate... Third, the most important point is that it is illogical and has problems with the logic of thinking. This is a flaw... A normal person promises to change for the better. Whether it is true or false, at least he has to communicate. No matter how deeply he is hurt, this is not the reason why the protagonist gives up communication... That is, how to gain the trust of others? It's not about doing things, but talking first and then doing them... Deliberately adding emotional exaggeration, in fact, it looks like Qiong Yao's mistress sadism... The more trust is shallow, to gain trust, you should fully explain your every move... Plans, plans... You are so guilty... Are you afraid of leaking the news of your business? First let her see your handwriting of a business plan, and what information was used to determine the situation... I heard that someone caught a cricket and sold it for how much. I know I'm sorry for you. I plan to go there to catch a cricket and make the first pot of gold to start a business... I plan to sell cold drinks in the summer... Then I plan to sell hand warmers in the winter... The author should It's time for me to be an old bookworm, and I'm also an old fool... The routine is still the same, and I use it very skillfully... It's just that it's not so natural, it still feels like a mold, and it's stiff... The process is too fast... You write this so heart-warming... The main line is to pick up your wife and children to live with such a goal... It's a clear name... Who is still interesting to watch? If you write, he changed it, she doesn't believe it, he did it, she doesn't believe it, he said it, she doesn't believe it... Slowly increase trust, and slowly get better... His progress drives her progress, and her progress promotes his growth... The child can also be a cooperative partner... Later, I will write about the shortcomings of the parents... Please don't ignore the law... First, let's say that the world is also the world... The law is a Inevitably, because there is no law, a can kill b... B can kill c... Therefore, how not to be killed becomes a necessary condition... At this time, there will be a clique... Getting bigger and bigger... Until everyone has to give up the right to kill... And junior law enforcers will appear... The protagonist is married... The child is biological, you robbed it, you can't fight the law... You can't even handle the household registration... How can DNA be changed? The protagonist is not married, so it would be easier... The birth certificate is held... If you rob the child, do you think you won't be able to go to court in the end? You want a billionaire to rob others? It can be said that as long as there is no mischief, the child will definitely belong to the man... Unless the woman kills Nanfang... In the middle of the night, I write so much just to show you that I am vomiting blood...
This model is the same as a novel I read. It is also like being so useless and then forgiving my daughter and wife, and finally going to Hong Kong City to develop and then return to my hometown.
It's so painful, it makes me a little tired, o(╥╥)o
Unclear sense of era, forced plot advancement, old routines, bad reviews
Come on, it's not bad