Even with an SSS Talent From the Start, I'm Still Too Weak

After reading a few chapters, I felt pretty good, but what I didn't like was that the author's depiction of human nature was too one-sided and somewhat illogical. Humans are social animals. When encountering this kind of situation, people's first reaction should be to stick together. The author is a little too obsessed with the laws of the dark jungle. The people the protagonist can contact are all people on the earth, or even people from a country or even a region. It is only logical for people to seek help from each other under this kind of survival pressure, and to develop together as a team. I hope the author will not focus on the evil of human nature. After all, there are still a majority of kind people in modern society. Come on, creating is not easy, I hope you can persevere.

Please post a post and leave a review. I think this article is very good, for the following reasons. 1. No female leads. At this time, no one can believe that unless you are 100% sure that others can't hurt you no matter what. When a female character appeared before, I was thinking, if there was a female protagonist so early, I would give up immediately, but fortunately there is not one. At this time, it is not suitable to have a female protagonist at all. It is very difficult to survive, and it is even more difficult to be a drag (I don't think a powerful female character will choose the protagonist, so it must be a drag) 2. The logic is more reasonable. Historians and geographers should stop arguing. This is not a professional literary work. Let the author go. I think the process of psychological change is quite good. When you are full and warm, you can think about lust. Only when you have enough food and drink can you have human nature. Unless you are a real Holy Mother, but that is stupid. It is normal for you to have a spiritual life after eating and drinking enough. But one thing is that the woman from District 18 seems to be licking the dog a bit too much, and it feels a bit low-key. 3. The uniqueness of the protagonist He is not the only one who has SSS-level talent, so the protagonist's ability to thrive in it depends partly on himself, rather than letting me think that anyone can be replaced. I think this is OK, and there is no such brainless and cool routine. 4. The car drives just right It is a car that is not vulgar and can be driven. Both men and women can have fun looking at it. I think it is very good. 5. I suggest the author be more confident, write well, and ignore the trolls. Just look at me and ignore them. Anyway, there is a grumpy old man 😏 in the book club circle who lines up every day. Ignore the trolls, there are many more people who support you than the trolls, that's how writing is. In the eyes of mature authors, trolls are automatically filtered out. It is recommended that those who troll as soon as they come up should follow my approach and arrange a permanent banning package. I would like to emphasize that I am not bribed, I just like to write long reviews, it is a personal habit.

Damn it, you are more ruthless than beheading a girl. Every time a girl shows up, before I even poop my pants, the girl is gone, or I get beaten up. Damn, you are so awesome.

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Why is there no country? Why don't the presidents of these countries speak out? How about quickly organizing military scientists and professionals to build civilization? Especially our country, it is so good at the epidemic. Even if it travels to another world, it will be fine. The country will respond absolutely quickly. You know nothing about the strength of the country, and the president of our country is definitely not that stupid. He will definitely make a voice and call on us to unite.

Did you charge any money? I am so scared of your comments.

It can only be said that this type of novel has basically destroyed the national system. Even if all the people really travel, as long as there is contact, the basic organizational framework can be established. I don't know what other countries are like, but our country will find that the surrounding government staff will issue orders, and the militia, army, police and other state violence systems will begin. Operation, the people of the country will take the initiative to gather and start organizing production (if you look at the previous three-defence project, you will find that the country is really comprehensively prepared. It is prepared for a full-scale nuclear war. What it faces is how to resume production from scratch when the industry is completely scrapped, such as using animal power to drive machinery for industrial production and other nonsense)

This kind of leap is only achieved by a few minor levels in fantasy novels, but it directly spans two eras? You can speed up the process but just skip it. It feels like the book is about to end? Don't you want to write about interstellar war? Aren't you going to fight the so-called divine four-dimensional creatures? The outline of this book is quite good. It moves directly from survival to science fiction, which is logical. In the end, you can write science fiction. Now in three dimensions, developing civilization to four dimensions, five dimensions, six dimensions, etc., You can keep writing, right? You can challenge your writing limits and see how many millions of words you can write without breaking down. In the early stages of this book, the world view seems to be very grand, and there are many foreshadowings. I feel like you're going to keep writing like this. The outline is pretty good, but why now? It feels like you are about to finish. It won't really be finished this month or at the end of the year, as the single chapter you posted said, right? Then this book is very bad!

What an honest author. Looking at the introduction, the logic does not make sense, the details are ignored, and there is a typo. I entered it by mistake - don't enter!

It's all booked, can the author kowtow to me? I'll kowtow for you first, don't be a eunuch. Bang bang bang