Transmigrating Through the Heavens, Starting with The Smiling, Proud Wanderer

I specially subscribed and posted a post. Author, have you carefully read Swordsman? Lots of holes. First: Do you classify Xiaoao Jianghu martial arts into elementary, intermediate, advanced and super? Peerless? There are five levels, and then the martial arts you receive later are divided into a mess. Huashan Xinfa and Qingcheng Xinfa are sects that can be learned at the beginning, so it would be wrong to turn them into elementary ones. What kind of sect is the Five Mountains Sword Sect? The introductory mental skills of a sect are not bad, the intermediate ones are almost the same, and then Huashan's Yangwu Swordsmanship, Xiyi Swordsmanship, Taiyue Sanqing Peak, and Hengshan's Yunwu can be turned into elementary swordsmanship. Please, these can be said to be the top swordsmanship of Swordsman. The Zixia Magic Skill is obviously better than it, and the only one that is better than it is the Sunflower Book. Do you dare to say that the Star Absorbing Technique and the Ice Qi are better than it? Second: I have so hastily passed on the Zixia magical power. I have read many of the author's replies, saying that Huashan has no other internal skills except the Huashan mind method. I'm afraid you are being ridiculous. Of the nine skills of Huashan, Zixia is the first. Hunyuan Gong is one of the Nine Gongs of Huashan. Do you think it is possible for a sect to rely on two internal skills and mental methods? Third: Pig's Foot follows the path of Linghu Chong in the original work, and becomes a sworn homage to Xiang Wentian, rescues Ren Woxing, and learns the magic of attracting stars. I'm afraid it's funny to you, Yue Buqun is disgusting in all kinds of ways, and he kneels and licks Ren Yingying in all kinds of ways. Please use your brain more. I think the person most people hate the most is Linghu Chong, but it's only when you are ignorant that you think Linghu Chong is awesome. Only when you step into society do you realize that it's better to get out of here because of this kind of unorganized and undisciplined character.

There is a saying, no matter how good your writing skills are, a Xiaoao Jianghu is enough to -5 points

According to normal reasoning, leaving this villain behind will definitely cause endless harm, and he actually becomes a bad good guy 🤫🤫🤫

It's a pretentious slap in the face, and it's forced to subjugate one's wits. The plot is too taken for granted and has no logic at all. Please hurry up and eunuch.

This book has three wrong views.

Many people say that Saint Aunt Ren Yingying is a good person. Haha. Why do those evil heretics in the original book listen to Ren Yingying? Is it because she is a good person, or because her father lets me do what I want. Actually, bullshit is not. It was because Ren Yingying used the Three Corpse Brain Pill to control them. If a person uses poison to control others, if he is still a good person, I have nothing to say.

It's 2021, and there's still an author writing a Madonna protagonist, Terraqua… so poisonous

The old fire that grinds and chirps seems to be able to kill, but chirps and waffles a lot. Just a virgin bitch

The lower limit of IQ is too low, I can't stand it

It's really too vicious, not to mention letting his enemies go one after another. When I saw the part where Yue Buqun taught the Zixia magic skill, I couldn't stand it anymore. Zixia's magical power cannot be passed down to anyone except the master. It will not be passed on to you unless you are highly qualified. Moreover, your protagonist is a person with no foundation. I don't know where you come from, who your parents are, where you learned martial arts, and what experience you have. Who can trust someone who can't find out the martial arts to teach you martial arts, let alone the Zixia magical skill that can only be practiced by a master. If your loyalty cannot be tested, the more talented you are, the less likely you are to teach your martial arts. Otherwise, after you become a master of martial arts, you will deceive your master and destroy your ancestors, and you will be treasonous and immoral. Who can control you? Really, it's too poisonous. In previous time-travel novels, the protagonist started traveling through time as a baby or young child. After staying in Huashan for more than ten years or decades, it was possible to be taught the Zixia magic technique. The protagonist of this book's experience is so outrageous!