The Start of Feng Yun Fake City Lord

The protagonist talks like a fool, talking nonsense regardless of the situation, and thinks he is humorous. There are so many typos that I can't stand it.

The protagonist is a bit neurotic, like a psycho.

The protagonist is a little bit crazy

I thought it would be a good article, but I didn't expect it to be about helping someone raise their son. Oh my god, she still enjoys it. This is so unimaginable. I'm convinced.

After a quick look, there was actually no need to reveal his identity, even if it was revealed to other Juggernauts, there was no need to know. If you have a golden finger, it only takes two years, and your strength will increase. If someone else's son has something to do with you, wouldn't it be nice to have him yourself? People are all selfish, and some selfishness is not bad. Wouldn't it be nice for Fengyun World to plan something, live forever, and then dominate the world?

Chapter 15: Death from poison. If you want to know more, you can read Chapter 15. .

I hope you won't be an eunuch. It's rare to start by pretending to be alone.

When you write martial arts, fairy tales and fantasy, you insist on talking about the relationship between foreigners and Mao in Harry Potter.

The protagonist talks like a deranged fool. Does the author usually say that?

In an era when online novels are rampant, primary school students dare to write novels without learning basic social knowledge. How can the quality be guaranteed?

There are a lot of typos, and each character has at least three names, which is okay... Then, the chapters are confusing, and the rest is okay. I can sort of find the order by chapter, but Chapter 134 is too much. The chapter order and chapter names are all correct, and the content skips several chapters, but it's okay...

The author died of poisonous poison. The author of this article is very good at writing ex

Go to the Sword Master and tell him directly that his brother is dead? This is the first time we have such a stupid conversation. Say goodbye.

I read a few of them, but there were too many typos. The writing and plot were like kindergarten playing house. I couldn't read it.

Nowadays, I don't even think about writing books. I don't even know that the author is so naive, so he just writes blindly? Just fooling around?

The author is an immature child

It's too boring, the plot is messy, and there's no essence of Fengyun at all.

No one with a brain could write those dialogues! Farewell!

I can't check it carefully after I finish writing it. There are too many typos and occasionally it's confusing 😰

I was very interested in the book title and introduction, so I clicked in, but after reading the first chapter I couldn't stand it. The protagonist looked like a retarded person.

The protagonist is so strong and powerful, how come he talks and acts like a diaosi?

What about the author's other novels? What about the time-travel villain's son?