Have Top Luck at the Beginning and Become a Saint in Ten Thousand Years

The handsome guy Qin Yuan not only has the appearance of an immortal, he has made rapid progress in cultivation, and he also knows how to restrain his sharpness. Regardless of the rights and wrongs of others, focus on your own pursuits. This is true for both being a human being and cultivating immortality! No love in the past, no love in the present, no welcome in the future. Come on, author! ! !

To be honest, I really don't have that feeling. The top-notch charm and some talents are not well portrayed. Reading the title of the book, you will feel that the protagonist is very stubborn, but after reading dozens of chapters, I don't have that feeling of being very stubborn. It is still not as good as Han Jue, the stubborn god. 😏However, books are still okay 🤫🤫

Good guy, I just complained a few words and was banned permanently. This author is really amazing. When I heard comments like this when I was writing a book, I would think about whether it was my own problem. I could tell at a glance that this was a cool article template. I just changed the soup without changing the medicine. I know that you are riding on the traffic of the recently popular "Gou Dao Style Theme". The least you can do is to write the development of the plot in a more exciting way, rather than the conflicts between certain people and the cross-talented children. You can avoid this kind of thing.

Let me briefly mention the content. Fellow Taoists think it's interesting to watch, so as not to waste time. It's probably because they chose to hide their innate aptitudes, and hired a master who was on the 7th level of Qi training. As a result, they thought that the protagonist's aptitudes were not good, and he only taught some superficial kung fu. The protagonist is born with a wolf demon who wants to kill the protagonist, but is injured by the golden finger's sword energy, and then runs away. The following is a classic routine. Six years later, the protagonist wants to build a foundation, and the wolf demon has already built a foundation to trouble the protagonist. He is blocked by the protagonist's master. The master is about to die. The protagonist succeeds in establishing the foundation. A sword energy destroys the wolf demon. The protagonist's master thought he was saved by an expert. The protagonist never appears. The protagonist's master does not know that the protagonist has already established a foundation... If you like Gou Daoliu, you can watch it.

It's a common mistake of old books: starting too high and not being able to grasp the top ten talents. For example, just practice Qi at the third level at the beginning. It is said that ordinary people upgrade to a level in half a year. But later, in order to pass the plot, it took 6 years to upgrade to 7 levels. It was really frustrating. And even though I was not injured, I didn't do anything. There was no reason. I just worked hard to practice, and then I upgraded to such a small level in 6 years.

Let's change the title of the book. Also unscrupulous,

I saw Chapter 66. Overall, I think it was average. Let's talk about a few key points. 1. Everyone thinks the same, it does not reflect the effect of talent. 2. The plot is very smooth, well, I only make up for it at the end of the writing, and the dialogue is also very watery. 3. There is almost no plot about Gou. Rather than Gou, it is more like a traditional fairy tale, a relaxed version. 4. Continued. For Gou in other books, disciples usually replace the protagonist, or stay in the sect to cause trouble. Even if he goes out, he will think twice. In addition to standard upgrades and hidden cultivation, the events and tasks of the protagonist in this book have no purpose at all, traditional cultivation of immortality. 5. The supporting character Yun Qingyao and the protagonist have made no progress [and were brought back to their parents], just like other books. 6, then 2: The dialogue is too objective (a group of water), the character is too objective (still stupid after 66 chapters), and the values ​​​​are so-so (a few words about eradicating demons and defending the Tao are none of my business, I just want to do what I want, people are destined to do it, just don't mess with me). ——————"Key Points" 7. Compared with other books of the same type, the writing is slightly inferior.

Extremely poisonous, follow the trend of hidden luck that is very popular recently. But you don't have the writing skills either. The most poisonous thing is your hypocrisy. TM Qicai Xiangyun has come out, and you say he has poor qualifications. Everyone saw it, and it was over in a blink of an eye. Too smart

I have a question, how did the protagonist stay in his mother's womb for 10 years? I was confused when I saw the introduction.

With these talents, I feel like I have become a saint in two or three years And I have top-notch luck. As long as the protagonist wants to keep a low profile, no one will come to trouble him. If someone comes to make trouble, it means that the protagonist does not want to keep a low profile at all.

It's better not to write that he has so many talents and only achieved so much cultivation in more than ten years. Top-notch truck transportation, nothing at all, baby, nothing

Top Luck: The title of the book says that I want to be stubborn, but I am a waste of money.

I pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger, but I really became a pig🐶

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, the promised Gou has a lot of poisons, and the plot progression is too blunt

Speaking of Gou Shilang, a mortal who had just started training for a few months was actually asked to practice.

Sometimes you pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. If you pretend for a long time, you really become a pig.

The plot is good, it would be nice to update it quickly

Does top luck mean encountering brainless rebellion everywhere?

The name is too similar to another one, I hope the content isn't too similar!

She's been pregnant for 10 years and still hasn't come out yet, and no one questions it? Are the protagonist's families full of people?

This kind of introduction to the second grade is written by a teenager who is in the second grade.

Does it look good? Do you have any recommendations?