The Training Master Who Started at Hogwarts

The reason why this book is not popular now is because it is still unfolding the world view, and the plot progress is too slow, which can easily make readers who come for HP and Pokémon run away, or feel deceived. The author of this book doesn't know what he thinks. Most of the fans of the fanfic are fans of the original work, but now maybe Pokémon fans among the original fans are almost gone, and some HP fans will also run away from expanding the world view. The author is very ambitious, and the writing is very good, but the customer is God. If he wants to build a hodgepodge of Western fantasy world, he will definitely offend some fans of the original work. I am still here because I have also played The Witcher, so I don't hate the Witcher branch line, and I can continue to watch it. This author is also a Buddhist, and there is not much of the author in the book review area. Compared with the quarrels in other book review areas, this place is completely stagnant. This is normal for not being popular. After all, the author is so short. It really has little to do with the book review section. This is the starting point now. People will read the shit written by the old author. Unless the new author is really amazing, it will only last more than 60 chapters. The author is also a Buddhist. How do you want to be popular? It's okay for the author to start a py with other authors. Now he is working hard on his creation, and his ambition is very high. When he raises his head, there are still so many fans. This book may be even more popular than it is now if it is renamed.

The best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read

This episode shows the power of Xiao Zhibo. 1. Increased power of moves (including skills) - The first battle between Lukabo Missile and Electric Field plus the power boost failed, the second time it was a draw, the first battle between Pikachu and Electric Monster Iron Tail failed, and the second time it was a complete victory. 2. Share the damage. After Pikachu was knocked to the ground by the crazy volt of the electric monster, Pikachu and Ash screamed at the same time.

Jiangjiang is here, bringing Xiao Sheng Pan-fried Buns, Fried Soybean Noodles, hot fried dumplings with scallion oil and egg custard to support her. I strongly support the great book, yeah yeah!

It looks great, which one did the author choose for the heroine? Seven recommended tickets are given to you every day

To be honest, the poor performance of this book can only be attributed to the three discussion posts. There are no excellent comments at all. The readers have a little desire to get in. This book is still very good. At least it has a setting. It is different from the same Harry fans who basically follow the plot until they die. The fans in the hospital are really boring. This book at least has a witcher branch, a vampire and werewolf branch, and a potion master branch. I think the only difference lies in the title of the book. After all, not many people read Pokémon. I think it is very interesting. I plan to read Harry Potter again.

To be honest, I have never figured out why such a purposeful and ambitious protagonist was assigned to the Lion House?

Old eunuch, this is boring. Many books like "The Eunuch" don't matter because they have been wonderfully written or have no expectations, such as this one. Drawing Cards to Conquer Demons and the previous book Hogwarts are becoming more and more exciting as they are written, and the more they are written, the more they look forward to. They are very popular, and you don't say anything, eunuch. The reason is reasonable and readers can understand it even if they are dissatisfied.

I saw 94, and it has not yet reached the charging chapter. The writing decision is worthy of praise, but I am not comfortable with two points: first, the Pokémon scenes seem to be a bit sparse, I thought it was my problem, after all, I only watched the first part, but when I came to the post area, I found that many people were complaining, and it seems that there will not be too many Pokémon parts in the later chapters; second, the second branch has too many points. First of all, I am not very interested in Western Fantasy, and I don't understand it. Secondly, I saw HP and Pokémon. Mengcai came in, but HP integrated other worldviews, and accepted the second design. After only two steps, another fan-fusion second design appeared, such as the Church, the Witcher, the Witch, the Vampire, the Demon God Solomon, King Arthur, and Fate. To be honest, I don't understand these, so I am confused now. When a person's name appears, I have to first respond to which class he is from, and the blood ancestor of the protagonist seems to be a foreshadowing of some second design. In contrast, in Chapter 70, I no longer find the protagonist to be a master by himself as soon as he enters school. Yes, originality is difficult to write, and it is an original plot two years before Harry. However, the first part of the book's title, the plot of Hogwarts, is supported by other world views. The female Defense Against the Darkness teacher is an Amonite. I can't understand this part. The second part of the Pokémon storyline seems to be gone as well, and I only read this book because of these two parts. . . . . Was this screened out by me? Shizhiyunlimist lacks interest, but Qiuzhi's writing style and imagination are quite good. I'm scared, so I plan to write a book. The protagonist traces his bloodline and discovers that a man named Jack from his ancestor went to sea to become a pirate in order to find the lost dragon egg of his ancestor Dragon Mother. The dragon mother had a fight with God when she married Merlin, so the protagonist wanted to find the weakness of the church and came to Ilvermorny College in the United States as an exchange student. With the help of his classmate Constantine, he came to Gotham and found that Iron Man was studying Aladdin's magic lamp. Finally, the protagonist embarked on the Grand Line and Shattered the Void. It's called "Warcraft Begins in Konoha" to attract Naruto fans and Warcraft fans.

Are all three books eunuchs? Draw cards to defeat demons, infinite journey, plus this, who dares to pursue your new book?

Very interesting, just too little

Are there still people who think that points are based on academic qualifications? What about Voldemort and Old Bat? It's just that different family environments teach different personalities. It can only be said that pure-blood families value glory more and have more ambition and purpose since childhood.

Crazy expansion of the world view without writing an outline. The classic of sudden death The latter takes a warning

I have to say that this is the HP fanfic with the best start that I have seen so far. It can be seen that the author's ambition is not small. He has added different system settings, hoping to ensure the quality and perfect ending.

What a stupid person I am, I finished finishing the book this morning only to realize that it was already finished? ? ? ?

I'll give you my daily recommendations. Come on, it's well written.

Although it was very satisfying to accept it, a person who had just received the Hogwarts admission notice, studied the basic basic magic theory by himself in a month or two, and then directly invented the magic spell. It was not just similar to the levitating spell, but also electromagnetic bubbles, cosmic power, this kind of high-energy magic! It's like giving you a set of mathematics books with coherent knowledge from primary school to college. After reading it for two months, it doesn't matter if you can do advanced mathematics. When your protagonist cheats, my dear, he directly discovered a new definition of mathematics! As for magic, it stands to reason that it is more difficult than numbers!

Is there a counter-curse for forgetting everything? And it's illegal to raise a dragon, right?

This book actually appears in the complete collection. It's really shameful.

The writing is too messy, everything is added in, a hammer here, a stick here, all kinds of messy branch lines.

Put it away on the bookshelf first. I hope the author will not write about Pokémon according to the original animation and original settings, because the original performance of the mythical beast is too low. Do you dare to believe that Groudon and Kyogre can destroy the world when they fight, but tmd is only 3.5M tall...

What's going on with the author? This book is very well written. I have been following it for a long time. Why did it become eunuch all of a sudden? If the author doesn't update it, please send me a message so that I can take it off the shelves.

I have read nearly fifty chapters of this book, and I feel like the protagonist is trying to perfect the framework of the entire Harry Potter world (the wizard's power system, the composition of various extraordinary forces, etc.). It's very novel, but the author has been emphasizing that the magic in the world of Harry Potter is idealistic. It emphasizes that magic must be driven by the heart, but such an idealistic power system will be very vague and not popular with readers. It can't be that two wizards with the same equipment, magic, and magic power fight against each other. One wins and the other loses. And the reason for victory is that that person's mind is very strong, right? Harry Potter was written 30 years ago. The power system at that time was very bad, so the author had to completely change it from the beginning in the book! JK Rowling, she knows hammer magic! !

You should at least write more than 800 pages like The Infinite Journey Starting from Hogwarts. It's too shameful to cut it if it costs more than 200 yuan.

I don't know if the author wants to read the comments yet, so I quickly skipped to the public section to post my opinion. Pay attention to your title. What is your attractive point? It's a Pokemon. They have too few scenes. Sometimes you have to weaken the protagonist to give the elves a role and let the elves fight. I think Geely Egg seems to be researching potions, so don't let the protagonist discuss potions with Snape, let Geely Egg do it.

Recuperating to death

The author is an old eunuch and has not finished several books.

When will you publish a new book? I hope the next book will be better and better.

There are no miracles in daily grave sweeping!

This book is actually quite good, but it's a pity that it's too late.