Female Majesty: I Don't Deserve to Be Hit with a Knife

Isn't this just an urban novel with a new skin? The routine is still old and seems annoying. Find an old city and ask, the living status of men and women is reversed, and a book on women will come out of the factory brand new.

It is now 1:12 in the morning. I found this book at noon today and read 50 chapters intermittently. Every few chapters I could not stand it anymore and was ready to give up. I just thought about it before going to bed, and I couldn't help but complain, so I immediately came up with the next starting point to complain about. If there are two directions in female-dominated literature, one is for men. The male protagonist travels to the female-dominated world and provides the g-spot in the female-dominated world with the male protagonist's thoughts. The second is for women, describing the reverse harem in the world of female supremacy and satisfying women. On the surface, this book is about the male protagonist traveling through time, but in fact he is Mary Suwen who has changed her skin (think half of it). If you swap the genders, you can find out 😒. And even if it is a Mary Su Wen, it is an unqualified Mary Su Wen. I don't understand the role of Little Cherry. If it is in other novels, she will be a weak heroine, which is fine. However, in this novel, Ye Ran is already the weak heroine. However, such a role must be arranged, so that Ye Ran needs to be the heroine when facing Shangguan Yanran, and the confidant big brother when facing Little Cherry. The character image is completely broken. In this clip, "You are going to die, beat my sister like this", are you sure he really came through time and was assimilated so quickly? If the image of Yeran shown in the previous clip is female, then what is going on with this Asasi-like male. Chapter 50, the image created is such a divided and featureless male protagonist, just like stitching together. At least Shangguan Yanran, a typical tall, rich and handsome character, is the only classic character that has been successfully written. Secondly, the fantasy world set in the background of the original text is useless. Reading other book reviews, they also said that the main focus is on playing basketball, and the setting is not used well at all. 😅 I hope the author can take a look at how to write Mary Sue essays and how to write urban essays. I feel sorry for the 1 yuan I paid to write a review 😟. After writing this, I suddenly felt that I should not write it. The author does not lack me as a reader, and I do not lack an author who writes books 😒 I can only say that I hope I can write a better book next time.

From my point of view, the character of Cherry is really poisonous, and there is a big problem in the creation of this character. Regarding the direction of character creation, we can probably know that there will definitely be a counterattack later. But the problem is that this process has been really slow so far. At the same time, not to mention the later stage and the early stage of Cherry's character, there is no bright spot at all. She gives us a cowardly image. Bringing it into reality, even the kind of sissy in reality cannot be said to be completely sissy, but at least it is a very cowardly and inferior image. And we have spent a lot of time describing this character, but so far, we have not seen any changes in her. It should be said that there is not much change. It gives people the impression that this person is mediocre and has no merit whatsoever. At the same time, you have created other characters that are better than this character, which further shows the uselessness of this cherry. Tell the truth. If you want to keep the character alive and not feel toxic. The space should be reduced to describe the various events and backgrounds of Cherry's incompetence. Although you can see Cherry in the new chapters, it is because of family circumstances. But until now, you still haven't highlighted the advantages and refreshments of cherries. It makes the readers think: Is it necessary for this person to appear? I think the best thing now is to reduce the length of describing her, because she is not the protagonist, and our main perspective is not on her. Let her develop quickly and highlight certain advantages to reach a certain point of enjoyment. Ah, after all, I have ordered all of them, so I support the genuine version. I am also good at this, so I hope this book will get better and better. I still support you, author! After all, sometimes writing a novel requires experience. (The above are all personal opinions, if you want to criticize, just criticize. Lord, have nothing to fear)

It's a trashy novel. The ending is terrible and rushed. It also kills Liuli.

I just finished reading Chapter 42, and I don't know whether the author has been deliberately describing the character of Cherry intentionally or not. It was okay at the beginning, but it felt bad at the end. It gives people a feeling of cowardice and is not likeable.

Cherry

Everything else is fine, except that the character portrayal of Su Qingtai feels a bit overdone 😥

LJ Shu, when I saw the basketball game started, I felt so wet and smelled bad. When I saw the comments that teased and then didn't get stronger, I couldn't stand it anymore, it was disgusting.

The avatar is so good-looking, but he has a 🐶 head

This male protagonist has no moral character. The time traveled is not short. It's time to get used to it. There's no need to compete with the whole world. The male protagonist thinks he is a free and easy man, but in that topsy-turvy world, he will only be regarded as a free and unrestrained love on the bus. If you are not able to fight against the whole world, then adapt to the world to avoid getting hurt.

I have no interest in the role of Su Yingying. . . .

So far, I have been reading the author's books, which are quite to my taste, but looking at the character of Cherry alone, I feel sad for his misfortune and angry at him. Purely kind people may be bullied, but people will feel more or less guilty and ashamed, and people around them will also admire and worship them. It is a kind of self-esteem towards beautiful things. But this is not the case for people who are purely cowardly. This character gives me the impression of pure cowardice rather than kindness. The protagonist has neither sympathy nor love for her, →_→, and I can't even see much emotion (maybe it lacks psychological description), just like a humble lucky man. What's more important is that this character's personality has barely grown in dozens of chapters. I initially thought it was the image of the redeemed that highlighted the protagonist's role as a guide. But in fact, she has not grown at all and feels that she lacks the meaning of the character's existence. Even deleting her from the book will not affect the current plot development. It is suggested that the author can make her stronger after the drastic change in her life (it is so tragic, I don't know how drastic change =_=), so that she can be more shining on her own, and more attractive to readers. Otherwise, I don't know why she can compete with others for Ye Ran, because cowardly people are not liked at all times. Of course, if the author has detailed plans and foreshadowing, you can ignore these Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard (´･･)ﾉ(._.`)

In this kind of world, men and women must be viewed upside down. If Cherry were a man, she would be too useless. If she was my childhood friend, we would probably have broken up with her long ago.

The writing is quite good, but in that basketball game, I was hit so hard that I vomited blood, and then I was able to continue playing. It was a bit toxic. I look forward to your next novel. Come on.

The fantasy background is written into a sports and competitive article... From the beginning to the present, the whole process is playing basketball. Maybe the author likes basketball very much? Then don't add any fantasy background. While some supporting characters narrowly escape death in a different world, the protagonist just had a fierce basketball game. It feels very strange The impression is a bit like this "Ultraman": Goodbye Ultraman "Ultra Seven": The greatest invasion in history "The Return of Ultraman": Ultra's five major oaths "Ultraman Ace": It's the future Ace "Ultraman Taro": Goodbye Taro! Mother of Ultra "Ultraman Leo": Goodbye Leo Heading towards the sun "Ultraman Jonas": Victory at the door of peace "Ultraman Eddie": The giraffe and the elephant were frozen into ice That's the feeling. It's not that Eddie's ending was not shot well, but I feel that he is the only one in the crowd who has a very different style of painting As long as this is written in an urban/campus background, there is no problem at all, but it is a fantasy background

I don't know if you have noticed that what the author of this book describes has been subtly invaded by Western countries. You can say that reality is more outrageous than fiction, and I agree with the tragic characterization. But this society is too Western, right? With the perfunctory behavior of the National Security Bureau, and the children in the cities who are studying, will the country really ignore them like this? This is not a social plot that should appear in a red country.

Well, to be honest, if there are so many people around you who are supportive and effortless, can you really control yourself? Well, I have a friend who was chased by a woman and got her in three months. You've been married for two years. If a girl really pursues you, how many of you can really handle it?

? ? ? This rhythm is coming to an end. Su Yingying died and Ye Ran and Shangguan got married. This should be considered a bad ending.

Eunuch is unfinished. Brothers, I subscribed in vain. Actually, I don't know much about writing basketball in a fantasy setting. According to the setting, the basketball written by the author is not strong at all.

I got married suddenly while playing basketball, I was caught off guard 🙂🙂🙂

Eunuch, the author sucks, why does a very good book just do this?

It's almost like a eunuch, so there's no need for book friends to come in. This book fast-forwards directly from the basketball game to the wedding finale.

It seemed pretty good at first, so I couldn't help but subscribe to the whole book. Later, the chapters were messy and repetitive, and then the plot fell off a cliff. A lot of plots in the middle were missing. I don't know if it was blocked or something. Feeling at a loss

It's really unfinished for no reason. I think your writing is quite good. I specially created a folder for you to collect the highlight chapters.

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A god-man novel, if I can finish reading it, I will become a god-man.

Come on, author, looking forward to new works

The ending is inexplicable, don't let it suck.

I really like the character Su Yingying, I really want to hold her in my arms

Do you have to write Liuli to death? You were born