Uncle Snake Who Masters Core Technology

The sea, you are all water The author is really good at water.

Every time I see a Naruto fanfic, I feel so bad when the protagonist works so hard to fight Ninja War again and again (눈_눈) To put it bluntly, Ninja War means that ninjas have no production capacity and can only rely on tasks to get paid. Is it ultimately a shortage of resources? What the hell is this? If ninjas don't produce, can those daimyo and nobles be productive? I summoned 100 chuunin, slaughtered the entire noble leadership of the Fire Country, and replaced them with transformation techniques. What tasks would I have to do every day? I get taxes while I'm lying down, and I send tasks to the Ninja Village ☄ฺ(◣д◢)☄ฺ

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Every time you write about a parallel world, please write "parallel world" at the beginning, and then when writing about the main world, write "main world" at the beginning. The same goes for the characters. Please mark them. You may have no trouble reading it because you wrote it, but readers may have trouble reading it! The reader feels very confused when reading it, and needs to think carefully whether it is talking about the main world or the parallel world, and whether the person who said this sentence is Tsunade from the parallel world or the main world. Believe it or not, after you have written hundreds of chapters and then look back at the first part, you will have trouble reading. You have to carefully ponder the meaning of each word, because you have forgotten the rhythm you arranged at the beginning! I am not the only one who said you were messy. Many people commented that your writing was messy. Don't think that I am deliberately criticizing you. We readers read novels to relax. If we have to carefully consider every sentence, we will feel tired and confused while reading. Many people will directly choose to read another book! So please revise the previous content, so that more readers will read this book. The subject matter is very good. It would be a pity if this book ends up being unfinished or unfinished because too few people read it!

After reading the beginning, I feel that the writing is not like Uncle Snake. Being a scientist is basically a desire to explore, and that desire is greater than anything else in their eyes. If a system suddenly appears, what Uncle Snake will do is not to use the system, but to analyze the system. If he studies it clearly, he will directly become the creator, and will he unlock it step by step? This is how scientists and ordinary people see things. Just like a mobile phone, in the eyes of researchers, it is just a component, and in the hands of ordinary people, it can be played however they want.

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The road to the rise of Snake End🤓 Become the Creation Quetzalcoatl

Studying science by yourself is like making the entire ninja world study science. 😒 I don't understand. It is true that the bear can transform humans, but the author also wrote that it can be artificial flesh and blood and can use chakra. How do the villages outside know that Orochimaru is using a scientifically made robot? While talking about the importance of intelligence, he also threw it all over the world. If it is the main story of Naruto, the first thing is to obtain information, and then plan targeted tactics. Instead of studying science, okay, I will also start the science department. Which village doesn't have a trump card? As of Boruto, scientific ninja tools are still looked down upon by ninjas. The puppet is strong but not invincible. Can scientific research produce results in the short term? The puppets are not human, and the combat is rigid. I really want to target them, but I can't. Okay, having said all that, I personally hate this way of writing. The protagonist has some kind of golden finger, and then the enemy is forced to turn on the halo to develop technology. Obviously the protagonist is a black technology, and the enemy can copy and strengthen it in less time. Anyway, the protagonist is exhausted and the enemy just has an idea. I feel like there are too many templates in this set.

I came to see Orochimaru do research. I'm not here to look at the system and some random stuff, rubbish. Abandoned

The writing is too taken for granted, and the so-called technology is exaggerated. As for the puppet man in Chapter 1, if you said energy shield defense, I would still be able to accept it. As a result, it would be too much to be able to restrain Rouquan just because of its mechanical structure. Byakugan can directly see your internal structure, and can use soft fists to drive chakra into the inside to destroy your energy transmission routes and the operation of joints. It will directly turn you into useless scrap metal.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't hold it any longer It felt like a fantasy novel, but it still had the style of a novel ten years ago. The author's typos were still at the level of a middle school Chinese multiple-choice question. After Mikoto's thought of "Oh my god, my great Uchiha has died" appeared... I really couldn't hold it any longer.

Embarrassed, I read a few new ones and was immediately poisoned to death. Orochimaru turned from being cold and powerful in the previous chapters to a dog. Shinkuna's approach and Minato's plot manipulation are disgusting. They are all garbage chapters created for the so-called opening of more new worlds. After following this process, the whole village of Konoha will not die. Either the author is cheating, or some time-travel time compression is used to shorten the time Orochimaru leaves. Accepted, given up.

The consciousness of fire... It would be better to destroy this thing. If you can in the future, create a better country (not a village) Some people need to disappear in the new era.

If nothing else, it's too confusing and boring to watch. Orochimaru is not interesting.

Chaos, the summary is that the author's writing power cannot keep up with his own imagination, just like your eyes can keep up with the speed of the enemy, but your physical fitness is too poor and your movements cannot keep up.

In fact, I feel that in Naruto, it was divided into 5 ninja villages during the Warring States Period, which was actually the best choice. Think about it carefully, what kind of scene would it be like for all the families with hatred to be forced together by an invincible person? The most important thing is that that person is not immortal yet. What will happen if that person dies?

The plot is messy, no one can watch it anymore

At this time, why don't we directly travel through the prehistoric world or the perfect world to cover the sky, and still stay in the Hokage to do some knitting? No matter how you play, there is still a lot of chakra at the back door.

It's not unreasonable that the writing is so messy and the grades are poor. The idea is good but the author can't write it well.

The setting of Orochimaru is very exciting. The author made the protagonist travel through time and space to become Orochimaru. This setting will have a large number of fans of the original book and will find it very difficult to accept, so this book may be. Well, you know

Regarding the unification of the ninja world, it is actually beneficial. This can reduce internal friction and deal with the Otsutsuki clan in a unified manner. Moreover, it can develop and liberate advanced productive forces based on Chakra, vigorously develop education and cultivate outstanding talents. Anyway, there are many benefits.

The writing is so messy. I saw that White Snake Sennin gave up. Golden Finger has no sense of existence at all. I only know, oh, very strong, oh, xx ninjutsu, oh, xx description, oh, blocked the opponent's xx attack.

It's so boring to write, what's the point?

It feels like the author doesn't care about the original work at all, and only writes whatever comes to mind. The character creation is a complete mess. Except for the names of the characters in the original work, they are almost completely incompatible with the way they deal with things. It looks like Dou Po Cang Qiong wearing the skin of Hokage

Is Shinkuna that stupid? Adaptation is not random editing. You are writing as if you have never read the original work and are writing randomly here and there.

The ending is not out yet, today is the last day of 2021

The author of this book actually understands the benefits of reading🤣, I can't help but laugh🤣

I haven't read the book yet, but I just wanted to post a comment! Gree, mastering core technology

It ended badly. . . No, it must be a eunuch, he doesn't even have a tail. . .

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