Uncle Snake, Master of Core Technology

Every time I see Naruto fanfiction where the protagonist goes to great lengths to fight one Shinobi World War after another, it makes me feel so sad (눈_눈). The Fourth Shinobi World War, frankly speaking, was simply caused by ninjas lacking production capacity and only able to earn rewards through missions, ultimately leading to resource shortages? What kind of ridiculous reason is that?!

Here's a suggestion for the author: whenever you write about parallel worlds, please start with "(Parallel World)" and when you write about the main world, please start with "(Main World)". Do the same for characters. You might not have any trouble reading it because it's your work, but it will be difficult for readers!

After reading the beginning, I didn't think it was written like Snake. As a scientist, his true motivation is the desire to explore, a desire that surpasses everything else in his eyes. If a system suddenly appeared, Snake wouldn't want to use it, but rather analyze it, study it thoroughly, and become its creator. Why would he need to unlock it step by step?

Sigh 😣

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He studies science himself, making the whole ninja world seem like they're studying science too. 😒 I don't understand. It's true that Kuma is a cyborg, but the author also wrote that he has artificial flesh and blood and can use chakra. So how do the villages outside know that Orochimaru is using scientifically made robots?

I came here to see Orochimaru doing his research, not to see the system and all that random stuff. Garbage. Dropped.

The writing is too simplistic, exaggerating the so-called technology excessively. I could accept the puppet in the first chapter having an energy shield for defense. But to think that its mechanical structure can counter Gentle Fist is going too far. The Byakugan can see right through your internal structure, and Gentle Fist can easily inject chakra into your interior, disrupting your energy transmission pathways and joints, turning you into an immobile piece of scrap metal.

I couldn't hold back after reading a few chapters. It has the feel of a light fantasy novel, the kind of writing style from ten years ago, and the author's typos are at the level of a middle school Chinese multiple-choice question. After Mikoto's thought, "What?! My great Uchiha clan is wiped out?"... I really couldn't hold back anymore.

Awkward! I read a few more chapters and immediately died from the poison. Orochimaru went from being aloof and powerful in the previous chapters to a dog. Kushina's actions and Minato's plot twists are disgusting. These are just garbage chapters created for the sake of opening up new worlds.