Uncle Snake, Master of Core Technology

Every time I see a Naruto fanfic, I feel so bad when the protagonist works so hard to fight Ninja War again and again (눈_눈) To put it bluntly, Ninja War means that ninjas have no production capacity and can only rely on tasks to get paid. Is it ultimately a shortage of resources? What the hell is this? If ninjas don't produce, can those daimyo and nobles be productive? I summoned 100 chuunin, slaughtered the entire noble leadership of the Fire Country, and replaced them with transformation techniques. What tasks would I have to do every day? I get taxes while I'm lying down, and I send tasks to the Ninja Village ☄ฺ(◣д◢)☄ฺ

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Every time you write about a parallel world, please write "parallel world" at the beginning, and then when writing about the main world, write "main world" at the beginning. The same goes for the characters. Please mark them. You may have no trouble reading it because you wrote it, but readers may have trouble reading it! The reader feels very confused when reading it, and needs to think carefully whether it is talking about the main world or the parallel world, and whether the person who said this sentence is Tsunade from the parallel world or the main world. Believe it or not, after you have written hundreds of chapters and then look back at the first part, you will have trouble reading. You have to carefully ponder the meaning of each word, because you have forgotten the rhythm you arranged at the beginning! I am not the only one who said you were messy. Many people commented that your writing was messy. Don't think that I am deliberately criticizing you. We readers read novels to relax. If we have to carefully consider every sentence, we will feel tired and confused while reading. Many people will directly choose to read another book! So please revise the previous content, so that more readers will read this book. The subject matter is very good. It would be a pity if this book ends up being unfinished or unfinished because too few people read it!

After reading the beginning, I feel that the writing is not like Uncle Snake. Being a scientist is basically a desire to explore, and that desire is greater than anything else in their eyes. If a system suddenly appears, what Uncle Snake will do is not to use the system, but to analyze the system. If he studies it clearly, he will directly become the creator, and will he unlock it step by step? This is how scientists and ordinary people see things. Just like a mobile phone, in the eyes of researchers, it is just a component, and in the hands of ordinary people, it can be played however they want.

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The road to the rise of Snake End🤓 Become the Creation Quetzalcoatl

Studying science by yourself is like making the entire ninja world study science. 😒 I don't understand. It is true that the bear can transform humans, but the author also wrote that it can be artificial flesh and blood and can use chakra. How do the villages outside know that Orochimaru is using a scientifically made robot? While talking about the importance of intelligence, he also threw it all over the world. If it is the main story of Naruto, the first thing is to obtain information, and then plan targeted tactics. Instead of studying science, okay, I will also start the science department. Which village doesn't have a trump card? As of Boruto, scientific ninja tools are still looked down upon by ninjas. The puppet is strong but not invincible. Can scientific research produce results in the short term? The puppets are not human, and the combat is rigid. I really want to target them, but I can't. Okay, having said all that, I personally hate this way of writing. The protagonist has some kind of golden finger, and then the enemy is forced to turn on the halo to develop technology. Obviously the protagonist is a black technology, and the enemy can copy and strengthen it in less time. Anyway, the protagonist is exhausted and the enemy just has an idea. I feel like there are too many templates in this set.

I came to see Orochimaru do research. I'm not here to look at the system and some random stuff, rubbish. Abandoned

The writing is too taken for granted, and the so-called technology is exaggerated. As for the puppet man in Chapter 1, if you said energy shield defense, I would still be able to accept it. As a result, it would be too much to be able to restrain Rouquan just because of its mechanical structure. Byakugan can directly see your internal structure, and can use soft fists to drive chakra into the inside to destroy your energy transmission routes and the operation of joints. It will directly turn you into useless scrap metal.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't hold it any longer It felt like a fantasy novel, but it still had the style of a novel ten years ago. The author's typos were still at the level of a middle school Chinese multiple-choice question. After Mikoto's thought of "Oh my god, my great Uchiha has died" appeared... I really couldn't hold it any longer.

Embarrassed, I read a few new ones and was immediately poisoned to death. Orochimaru turned from being cold and powerful in the previous chapters to a dog. Shinkuna's approach and Minato's plot manipulation are disgusting. They are all garbage chapters created for the so-called opening of more new worlds. After following this process, the whole village of Konoha will not die. Either the author is cheating, or some time-travel time compression is used to shorten the time Orochimaru leaves. Accepted, given up.