The road ahead has come to an end. Break through the limits of the human body, behold the mountains and waters, the sun and moon. Throw your head back and laugh at the heavens: I was never meant to be a nobody.
On a rainy night in the martial world, sword in hand, I charge into the clouds. I debate the Dao beyond the seas and battle the Nine Suns beneath the open sky.
In the struggle for supremacy, I gather the world's heroes and enter the Undying Divine Realm. Tell me, who in all the world can surpass me?
The road to immortality is lonely. I summon the baleful power of the Nine Heavens and awaken an ancient demonic tribulation. Even the immortals above must bow before me.
Beyond the starry sky, I soar through the heavens and let out a long cry. Through three thousand cycles of flowers blooming and fading, only I can cross the ages in carefree freedom.
Devour the heavens and destroy the earth. Take my place among the gods. In the boundless chaos, where years have no meaning, waves surge a thousandfold across the Sea of Origin.
Three lifetimes stand side by side. I tread upon myriad laws and gods. One leap through the heavens earns the praise of all living beings; when I look back, the road has ended, and my Dao stands revealed.
How high are the heavens? I ascend to the celestial palace, settle a few matters concerning the pilgrimage for scriptures, and turn Mount Sumeru upside down.
The mysterious light of primordial chaos, the debate of ten thousand sages: I unveil the first tribulation of creation. Through ten thousand calamities, only I may claim the highest throne!
National arts, wuxia, immortal techniques, sorcery, demonic arts, magical arts, the divine path...
Cheng Qian opens his eyes and takes a step. He surveys the heavens, the earth, and all the worlds, then treads upon immortals, gods, and every Dao!
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Let's change the name of the Great Luo realm. Perhaps these other names can serve as a reference.
(Pangu, Heavenly Emperor, Ancient, Ruler, Primordial Beginning, Taiyi, +1, AO, Real World Consciousness, Life Court, Heavenly Ghost, Profound Meaning, 001, Supreme Lord, Laozi, Lord of Reason, God, Unique Author, Pan-Author, Pan-Primordial Consciousness, Ignorant Cat)
It's a miracle that humans can still emerge from underground. It's baffling that humanity's greatest enemy, parasitizing a high school student, could be detected by the police and national authorities despite such obvious evidence. It's incomprehensible that they haven't been wiped out.
The beginning was good, but there was no need to suppress the protagonist's strength. It was said to be about to awaken his power after only a few chapters, but after all that medicinal bath stimulation and stuff, he still didn't awaken. If even the protagonist, who was practically holding back his power at the last minute, couldn't awaken, how incredibly powerful would the others have to be to awaken?
You've taken a day off and haven't updated for three days, and you still expect readers to subscribe? It would be strange if you didn't abandon the project. You've been writing for months and haven't even reached two hundred chapters. What excuse do you have? Others working part-time can guarantee two updates a day, and you? You can't even guarantee one update a day. You're inconsistent, working three days and resting two. And you expect to achieve anything?
Your last book was so good, why didn't you write more?
The author's explanation of those two points is indeed reasonable. But... You still haven't found the root cause. It's not that the protagonist suffered setbacks, failed to fight back, or didn't awaken his inner power and show off, which makes the readers unhappy. Rather, the plot was forced into a dragging-out state.
Seeing the author soliciting names to replace 'Great Luo Realm', I couldn't help but suggest a few. The genre leans towards fantasy and martial arts, featuring characters like 'Pure Yang', 'Creation', 'Eternity', 'Taiyi', 'Supreme', 'Primordial Beginning', 'Great Void', 'Great Nothingness', 'Great Possession', 'Lord of the Dao', 'Ancestor of the Dao', 'One of the Dao', 'Beginning of the Dao'…
The writing is quite good, but the evil god controlling the woman, because the protagonist saw through her scheme, kept trying to kill him. Even after things escalated to that point, a group of police officers still mistook her for the protagonist's girlfriend, claiming he was two-timing them, which was why they wanted to kill him. It was really painful to watch.
It's a real shame about the last book; I loved it so much that I even created a Duan Zhen entry on Baidu Baike (feel free to add your own entries!). It's a shame it was abandoned. Good luck with the new book, author! I'll always support it. I hope the author won't belittle or smear other books for the sake of their own. Anyway, good luck! 🙂
I'm hesitant to read your books; I'm afraid you'll abandon them again. Your last one was quite good, why don't you write more? (✪▽✪)