The Imperial Deity

The protagonist's personality is more like a seeker, and it is recommended that the protagonist be single. For example, in the world of Zhetian, do you want to become stronger? Stay alone! Look at the strong men standing at the top in the end—— The Great Emperor Wushi? Single! The ruthless emperor? Single! Underworld Emperor Duande? Single! Emperor? Single! The remaining Ye Fan and the Immortal Emperor are no longer single, they both have their own partners, but do you think that's the end of it? The Immortal Emperor and the Immortal Queen lived apart for millions of years without ever seeing each other; Ye Fan, after becoming the Great Saint, sent his wife and daughter to become immortals on the Feixian Star. Since then, they have been dependent on Xiao Zuo and Xiao You until they met again after 700,000 years. It was during this period of time that Ye Fan made rapid progress in his cultivation. All of this fully proves a great conclusion, that is - in the world of Zhitian, being single is the best shortcut to becoming stronger! So, it is recommended that the protagonist be single!

How can I put it this way? This book is good-looking, but the concept is too high and makes it a bit awkward to read. Moreover, some of the protagonist's operations are difficult to understand. When entering the body of the Red King, the soul is divided before resuscitation. After the soul is divided, it is weak and then revived. Moreover, the writing looks like it is about to fail. What kind of operation is this? The ambition is too high and it looks embarrassing. The eight-hundred-mile wilderness is just a very small corner of this world. People in it cannot cultivate and live a difficult life. We don't know what the situation is outside the wilderness. There is probably no one there, and we don't know how they are living. Then the protagonist acted on the basis that the human race will not perish, the human race should strive for progress, I should guard the human race, and the human race will be protected by me. It was really embarrassing to watch. There are also the three prohibitions of the Blood Wolf clan: no harm to the human race, no disobedience to the human race, and no abandonment of the human race. It is really helpless to see it. It is too broad and empty.

The Great Wilderness, the sacred land, is located in the Beishan Region in the northern part of Donghuang State. It spans eight hundred miles, but it is only a corner of the Beishan Region. In terms of the vastness of the area, it is not a large area. So, the eight hundred miles of wilderness is equivalent to a novice village. Everyone's strength will be suppressed, the highest level of magical power. It is also equivalent to the Red King, the protective umbrella of the protagonist. Not that the whole world is just eight hundred miles away.

In fact, I don't want the author to just focus on development. I want you to lay out the layout, such as becoming the cultural ancestor and Taoist ancestor of mankind, establishing the proper social order, etc. The protagonist's avatar is innately divine, so there is a lot to be done about this, such as fighting for things that are beneficial to one's own development in the future, fighting for the power of heaven and earth, etc.

No, there's not even a heroine

I'm already writing your fanfic

Evaluate it objectively. The writing style is average, and the description and description can only be described as average. The plot, how can I put it this way? It was ok at first, but then it started to fall apart. After about twenty chapters, I couldn't hold it back in Blood Wolf. In fact, if you don't know how to play a good hand of cards, you can write about the innately sacred Zhu Tianliu. In the past, you could just write a few chapters of tribes. If you directly open the Zhutian dungeon, you have to write dozens of chapters of tribes. The step is too big and you can't stop it. Now it has collapsed. This book was not far away from writing, and Shen Nong completed the test.

There is no need to write this copy. I just wrote it, and it is not very exciting. Moreover, the plots of Night, Two Dragons, and various settings are mixed together, but there is nothing of its own, which is completely boring. Just write about Dahuang instead of writing a copy! You can write a copy, but please be more pure.

The protagonist is also in a mess. Instead of concentrating on reviving the copper tire first, he wastes his soul to create a separate soul. If it is not supplemented by the tribe's faith during the manufacturing process, the protagonist will fail to create a separate soul nine times out of ten, which will cause a series of hidden dangers. For example, the power will not be enough to revive the copper tire after the creation of the separate soul fails. If you can't even distinguish the most basic priorities, have you lived in vain for a hundred years? Or have you become stupid by practicing martial arts?

What typesetting is this. Machine