The Heavens Began Under One Man

I read two chapters and there are several poisonous points. No wonder so many people criticize you.

What about Tai Chi? Everyone has read it. This kind of novel must be a eunuch in the end. One book even goes to Longhu Mountain to practice swordsmanship. There is really no threshold for becoming an author. All kinds of monsters and monsters can appear.

Why do you have to write the main character so young and forcibly reduce his age? Especially in this kind of novel that can cultivate people. Is it because the vicissitudes of age cannot be written and the mentality cannot be grasped, making it easier for the main character to become a second grader?

After reading a few chapters, I would like to ask the author if he has carefully read Under One Person. Is the main character's martial arts innately powerful? The level of strength is acquired? Everyone is born with an innate energy. Some people are too active and become superpowers. They are called innate aliens. Acquired aliens refer to using exercises to stimulate the innate energy and practice. I won't complain about the pre-Qin Qi practitioners. I left you a real flying sword. What the hell is it? The world view is different. Isn't it explained clearly in the anime? The so-called flying sword sword immortals are all capable of controlling objects. The Eight Great Divine Curses, just a Golden Light Spell can be used as the inheritance foundation of Tianshi Mansion. When you come, you will have all the Eight Great Divine Curses. What can other people do? If you still draw thunder magic, you might as well worship the Tianshi Mansion. Why would you want to be reborn in Wudang? Fenghou Qimen doesn't even practice Tai Chi, but practices golden light spells and thunder techniques? There is no one who says that if you have good skills, you are invincible. Even Wang Ye and the Golden Watch can't shake the Heavenly Master. Don't you understand? What I'm talking about is personal cultivation. Who can you beat with this skill or that skill?

I don't mean to criticize you, but it's outrageous for a Taoist monk like you to practice Buddhist techniques! ! ! ! !

Since there is too little content, I just have one question for now! Wang Ye's master is Taoist Master Yunlong, and Taoist Master Yunlong is Zhou Meng's disciple. Wang Ye has to call him Master Zhou Meng. The protagonist is set to be Zhou Meng's disciple, which means he is Wang Ye's senior master. So what is the situation about this? Did the author modify the setting himself, or did he write it wrong?

How to say it? I just read the first chapter and I was a little bit addicted A Wudang disciple, you are so sorry, don't you know how to do Tai Chi? After staying in the mountains for more than ten years, I know nothing. Really, I don't know why it is set like this.

You write about a protagonist who is a Taoist priest, but he practices the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu of Tibetan Buddhism. Do you think writing a novel like this makes you look very individual, or is that weird? ———— Either you write it according to the [Hidden Dragon Pill Method] [Drawing Toad Strength] [Vajra Longevity Skill] in real Taoism. Either you copy the martial arts and Taoist sects of the three masters of Jin Guliang, Jin Yong's "Nine Yin Manual", "Xiantian Kung" and "Pure Yang Wuji Kung", Gu Long's "Da Liang Yi Divine Sword", "Ling Jade Divine Kung Fu", "Seven Seven Forty-nine Bashan Sword Techniques", Liang Yusheng's "Purple Sun Sword Classic" and "Nine Palace Divine Palm". ———— You won't be able to copy these two good ways, and you will have to stick to such a self-contradictory martial arts setting. I'm hesitant whether to continue reading.

I couldn't stand the first chapter. I don't know what the author's setting is, but the protagonist is an acquired stranger, and the skill he learned is called Xiantian Yiqi. Is it acquired or innate? ? Then comes the Eight Great Divine Curses. Can you tell me which eight great ones they are? Or is this spell just called the Eight Great Divine Curses? Poisonous

It's so outrageous that the author didn't write down why he didn't learn the martial arts of the martial arts after more than ten years in the martial arts, but only learned the martial arts drawn by the system. So many people are asking, but the author has not changed it.

So, as a young Wudang master, you have learned nothing for so many years and just relied on the system to draw prizes? Shocked

Congenital and acquired supernatural beings are just that one is born with supernatural powers and the other is acquired through cultivation. There is no distinction between superior and inferior. As for you, they are directly divided into levels. The good thing about Under One Person is that it doesn't have any vulgar first-rate or second-rate distinction like other novels and comics. If you want to know who is superior, you have to fight.

NB After traveling through time for many years, I still have the mentality of a loser. Dogs can't change what they eat. A Taoist priest in Wudang Mountain practices the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu of Tibetan Buddhism. I just want to know how you can do the three meridians, seven chakras, and the eight extraordinary meridians. You have to think about the settings first. If you are too self-motivated, you will easily fall into the street.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is that the main character is out of tune. The main character is originally soft-hearted, and he wants the whole silly girl to restrict the main character. The stupid girl can't do this or that. It really doesn't suit my taste.

This book can also be on the hot search, the author should find a class

Endurance to the point of robbing graves. . . It's really unbearable. .

Let's talk about a few shortcomings. The protagonist's character is flawed, whether he is black or not, whether he is white or not, and is not lovable. The world under one person moves too quickly, and the writing style is not expressed at all. Some messy things outside the plot are also included, which is completely superfluous and superfluous. When writing system articles, just use the system to achieve the goal. Unless these are useless, it's okay not to watch the second world.

Tsk tsk, find a class, obediently you are not suitable for writing books

I gave up on tomb robbing when I saw it. It was so poisonous that the protagonist's IQ was completely gone.

Doesn't the author read book reviews? The first chapter is addictive, but it won't work until the second chapter. The toxic points in the first chapter can be easily modified. Does the author not read the comments at all?

The protagonist is too poisonous and has such weird brain circuits

How did it come to be ranked second on the hot search list? Puzzled!

Wow, you are so cruel. I looked confused and had a headache due to the confusion of seniority. I am now a master and a master, but I didn't learn Wudang's techniques in Wudang? The attributes are not displayed, and the realm is even more nonsense. It all states Taoism, that is, refining energy to transform into spirit, practicing energy to transform into spirit, and refining spirit to return to void. What else are you talking about?

In the third chapter, the protagonist said that Wang Ye went to Wudang Mountain when he was sixteen. The original book clearly stated that Wang Ye went to Wudang Mountain after finishing college. Are you kidding me?

Gu, I don't recommend you to watch it. The exercises are mixed but not refined. People who practice Taoism have many distracting thoughts. Do you want them when you see them? Monasticism?

To test the poison, it is recommended not to read it. The Nightmare Lord is outrageous. Under one person, most people do not know Qi, which is equivalent to the end of Dharma. After all, it is too outrageous to be suppressed. Heavenly Master, but the cumulative power of each generation of angels, according to your way of writing, can directly transcend the resurrection. And you are a Taoist priest who practices Buddhism. There is no problem in the first place, but as a major practitioner, there is a problem. You can refer to it, but you can't use it directly?

After reading Chapter 16, I really can't stand it anymore. Real. All kinds of speechless. In just chapter 16, a lot of exercises have been done, but they are useless. Still want to do eight strange skills? It's useful. You may not be able to learn it even if you are asked to do it, and it doesn't mean you will be awesome if you learn it. . . There are also various common sense errors in it. I can't stand it anymore. To tell a joke, acquiring a different person is a realm of strength. Vomited

I haven't even finished the first chapter, so I want to ask the author, you have been in Wudang for so many years, but you haven't learned a single Wudang technique, and I'm convinced that you don't even know the most basic Tai Chi. There is also a Buddhist skill, how do you know it? You have been in Wudang since you were a baby, and you have an innate energy. Is this a skill? In the world view of one person, everyone has this thing. There is also a level of strength. How can there be such a level? Innate is genetic mutation, and acquired is self-cultivation. There is no level division under one person, only one top and two heroes. In the 5000 lottery, you actually drew out a mansion worth 1 million. Brother, this is a world under one person. What is the use of this thing? It is not a great novel. Are you still going to pretend to be a slap in the face? Besides, how do you explain where this thing comes from? Anyone can check it out for you.

This book is useless after Chapter 10. What the hell are you writing about?

Chapter 9 What the heck is the Golden Light Spell? The protagonist is from Wudang, not Tianshifu! Persuade to quit