Ning Rong Is Alive in Red Mansions

There is no room for two tigers in one mountain, except one male and one female. There can only be one time traveler, unless one is a man and one is a woman. The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, he is an aborigine, and he has lived and died together since he was a child. Even if biological brothers who grew up together in modern times, do they have that level of emotional foundation? Father and son kill each other, and brothers turn against each other. This is not only an idiom, but also a fact seen by the ancients. There are still two protagonists, two male protagonists? How many tragedies have happened to relatives who competed for money and power in reality? How much more to call the wind and rain in another world and splash ink with a pen? To be a 'god' that is not God? It doesn't matter whether the novel is good or bad, what you wrote, the author, is not in line with human nature! It's not fun to lie to yourself, right?

Even if Huang Yizhe's "Two Pig's Knuckles" is written by Huang Yi Zhe, many people can't stand it. The author should think carefully before starting a book in the future.

Nowadays, there are still double-wearing clothes.

Double-crossing the protagonist, who should our readers take the role of? Or schizophrenia

Dual protagonists? Distract readers88

There is a typo in the introduction. What does "come" mean?

The biggest bug in this novel is that Jia Cong is Jia Lian's younger brother. He is just a little kid. The story of Red Mansions has not yet begun. Why does a little kid have to go with the army? This is unscientific~

There are typos in the introduction. It's a waste of time.

Oh, double penetration? Oh? Pounced? Oh~

Going off to war at the age of 10 was such a failure. If you are not a poor person, you can only be a commander-in-chief. If there is neither advancement nor inferiority, is this dynasty in its final stage?

This paragraph directly took me away. I have no reading experience. This is the first time I have seen such a long one. I don't know if the author reads the comments. Can't he modify it? I was still somewhat interested because it has been a long time since I saw the double wear. The basic layout is unacceptable. It is really off-putting. I suggest the author to modify it a little and it won't waste much time. Regardless of the reason How is the writing going? First, correct your attitude. Writing is for people to read. Secondly, whether it looks good or not. Experience can be accumulated. Come on, I don't know if the author of my comment can see it. If he can, I think he can probably understand it. I saw that he wrote hundreds of words in the book without even a paragraph. It feels uncomfortable to have no punctuation and to feel uncomfortable to not have paragraphs.

No, is it still necessary to save the Red Mansion Jia family?