After Sleeping for a Hundred Years, He Became a Sign-In Master at the Beginning

I don't recommend you to continue writing. Because since you are looking for relatives and descendants, you can ask the people you rescue to go to the government and find out immediately, but you have to pretend to let others build a house next to the tombstone and wait for three years.

After looking at it for a while, I couldn't tell what was wrong. But the author's writing style is still a bit tender. And what about your foreshadowing? Don't explain it to us. I'll send you some pictures. I saw them in the book circle of another book. I think what he said is very reasonable. You can take a look.

Author, you like to write foreshadowing, but your writing skills are not very good. It is so foreshadowing that people don't want to read it and keep guessing. This writing method of foreshadowing is okay in classic literature, but it is completely unnecessary in fast food culture novels.

When I see a shemale, I know it. What the author wants to express is that he is a gay

I gave up the book, feeling a bit baffled!

Although you explained that Xia Yixuan is a big shot, he just loves reading. But it's really hard to watch him get along with the protagonist. Real. The first time I said I was to help the protagonist drive and act as a driver. After buying a nice car, he drives it like a snail. And it can't be pushed. The more it is pushed, the slower it becomes. The more it is pushed, the slower it gets. It's like he is deliberately going against the protagonist. I don't know if I have any personal prejudice against him after this. Anyway, watch him get along with me after this. The more I look at it, the more embarrassed I become.

What? Can't you write it well? I have to make Xia Yuxuan disgusting!!!

Chapter 34, Farewell. This is not how the two male protagonists are written. If the characterization is not likable, then the number of scenes will be reduced. If you have two unlikable male protagonists, then your other boss will not be able to suppress it. The number of scenes is 10, and the description of Xia is only 6. He is not likable. This emmmmm

The first few pictures were pretty good at first and felt quite refreshing, but after the protagonist joined the academy, it didn't feel that satisfying anymore. It feels like the protagonist is always being plotted and led around. And there is another hidden one, really boss, this invincible article is not pleasant at all

The role of the driver is indeed quite convincing. I don't know what the author's plans are, but I have lost the desire to read on.

This driver is really something that makes me unhappy.

I'm numb. The driver is really disgusting to me.

The driver wrote disgustingly -_-||

After watching it, I have an inexplicable feeling. The protagonist is looking for his relatives, but the plot is confusing. The supporting characters, especially the driver, are poisonous. In fact, this idea is quite amazing, but it is a pity. Keep up the good work, and see you again when we are destined.

This person named Xia should either change her name to a female and make a shemale stalk people here.

I thought I could hold on, after all, it's been ten years. I'm sorry, I...

Everything is written together without being clearly separated, so it's a bit confusing.

The subject matter is good, I hope it can last to more than 200 chapters, otherwise it will not attract too many people to read 😆

The subject matter is good and the content looks okay. Also, can you sprinkle some dog food 😁

The way the words are expressed is difficult to read

Why isn't it updated? . I still like it quite a lot I spent 300 points just to post a message in the book circle. Author, are you busy recently or what? Please update soon!

Although many of the characters in this book are a bit nonsensical, I think the writing is quite good. And to be honest, the setting of multiple world transitions is a bit complicated, but I think the setting of the male protagonist is very interesting, so I can continue to watch it. You have to believe that more people will leave comments because they think it doesn't look good. . . So come back soon for updates!

I just took a look at the update time. . . And the number of updates for the last chapter has become less. But I still want to know whether Wuyou is the sister, and what the relationship between the male protagonist and him is. The characters are well developed. I am looking forward to their future and want to read the next chapter.

It's a bit like an assassination novelist, but it seems okay.