Fighting Against the Demon Wu Xin

I think it's quite interesting, but some of the plots at the beginning feel a bit confusing. I hope the author can write better and better later on, come on!

The writing is not good and my language is not good, so I won't comment. The poison pit is relatively high and it is basically difficult to be poisoned. Although many of the previous chapters are indeed a bit messy and poisonous, I like these settings and plots😍 (The plot of Yun Yun Yafei does feel a bit messy and poisonous, but it is not poisonous to me hahaha) Come on, author 👍👍👍

So what, I've read so much, I don't know what to write.

It's too out of the ordinary, so boring, and he just traveled through time, how could he adapt so quickly! ! ! !

I've only read two chapters, and I don't have enough poison resistance, so I'll withdraw first.

The writing is too messy and I can't understand it. I would like to give you some suggestions from an old bookworm, such as setting up the male protagonist. If you don't mention it later, I really don't know that there is such a background of bitterness and hatred in the first chapter, so I am actually a little confused about the male protagonist's starting mentality. There is also a feeling that the character motivation is a bit lacking. Generally, when you go to a place, you must have an original purpose, but in this novel, I can't understand what the motivation is for going to Canaan College (it may be that I missed the motivation after reading it too quickly). I only know that I went there, and then beat Xiao Yan and Xiao Xun'er to destroy Medusa. All I can say is that new books and new authors will keep up the good work.

The writing is not good, and the plot is not laid out well. It is too forced to pass the plot. Now that I have read it all, I feel like it is something written by a young literary author.