I Am a Jianghu Hero

To be honest, when I reached chapter thirty-nine today, I kind of wanted to cut it off and start a new book. I feel that the previous writing is very unsatisfactory, and there are many places that discourage readers.

The writing is very beautiful, but I think there are some small problems that I can tell you. I felt that the big book was missing something. After thinking about it, I found that the most obvious thing was that it was missing psychological activities. Although psychological activities are not very important, it does not appear to be included in the entire article, but it seems inappropriate. There is also a big book that looks too straight and lacks foreshadowing. Therefore, the reader will feel that some places are very abrupt. I've only read less than ten chapters later and I won't talk about it for now. Take the plot between Lin Yunfei and You Ruo as an example, it seems very abrupt. They were moving too fast. After only a few meetings, we ended up living together. Although you said you would give an explanation later. But this is not in the main text, but in the chapter reviews. Not everyone reads chapter reviews! We can do this, for example, when the two meet for the first time, describe Youruo's psychology from the side, even in one sentence. Like how could it be him. It doesn't matter whether you think it or say it. Anyway you have to let the reader know they are related so it doesn't feel abrupt because they are moving too fast. After all, they are related. Although we don't know what kind of relationship it is. And this is also a matter of one sentence!

The story and writing are both excellent, but some places are a bit abrupt. Given time, this article will become popular!

A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people, relying on the strong and not bullying the weak! The protagonist is really quite chivalrous!