
Begin by Betraying the Shaolin Temple
开局叛出少林寺
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 387k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I found that basically all selection systems have a problem, the rewards are not equal. Since the author wants him to take that path, you can just give him a reward. What else is there to choose? Water word count? ? Since you are writing a multiple-choice essay, you should at least make it so that the protagonist feels in a dilemma when the multiple-choice question is asked. He wants this but doesn't want to give up that. If you come up with a path that readers can choose at a glance, what else are you going to write about?
A common problem with selection systems is unequal rewards. For example, 1 at the beginning is a reward for endurance skills 2 is a villain system These reward stars are not equal, and then favorable choices + good rewards, how can people watch it... At least. 1 Righteous System 2 Villain System Only in this way are equal rewards consistent with the system. This is a common problem in choice writing. I hope the author can think about it and try to keep the rewards of all different choices as close as possible, and the gap cannot be too large.
Are there any multiple choice questions if the rewards are not equal?
After betraying Shaolin, it is better to join any sect, or establish a small sect on your own, or become a lone ranger, than joining six sects and then working undercover in the demon sect. Undercover, this place is really poisonous
This data is written like a five-step saint. A sixth-level martial arts practitioner who has practiced to the tenth level only has the strength of one thousand kilograms. Others can penetrate the steel plate with one palm of their powerful Vajra Palm. You only have the strength of one thousand kilograms. You can't penetrate the steel plate even if you have the strength of two thousand gold. The strength data is seriously inconsistent with logic.
All kinds of bugs, if you watch it with a brain, you can't stand it, but if you don't, it's okay. This Blood Demon Cult feels more decent than decent, which is really funny. If you can't kill decisively, don't write a villain system, because this is not suitable for you. Writing a Virgin protagonist is more suitable for you.
Why study this kind of world. No matter how you write about someone who travels back and forth, there is no such thing as writing about the place of origin. After all, the holy demon yuantai cannot be played by high martial arts, which means that the world is immortal martial arts, not to mention that some martial arts in the puppet show series are very buggy. Nine hundred in one breath, the current setting is pretty good. In the early days, it was really like turning nine hundred times. If someone hit me, I would pay it back nine hundred times. Shi Yanwen's counter-intuitive skills made him stronger the more he practiced. In the end, the battle against Shi Yanwen was not one against one, but against a hundred Shi Yanwen.
Many factories are experiencing staff shortages. I suggest the author to work hard and maybe become a team leader.
It feels too poisonous, and my combat power and martial arts level have completely collapsed.
I have never seen such a poisonous book, the king of poisonous books in 2021
What kind of novel should you write? You can enter the palace and be a eunuch.
I would like to advise everyone, if you can't stand Chapter 10, just leave. The rest will be even more disgusting. I am deeply poisoned, so I will withdraw first.
The selection of awards is disproportionate, the settings before and after do not make sense, the writing style is not smooth, and it is inexplicably awkward. It is also a novice among novices. . .
I'm so depressed that I even wrote an undercover article and slipped away.
Today's novels are inseparable from the system
Why do everyone think that the Holy Demon Yuan Tai is awesome? It's because Qi Tian Emperor is awesome, that's why this one seems to be more powerful. If it's not Qi Tian Emperor, try someone else.
I hope that the combat power will not be raised too high all at once. The system's slow writing is also nice to read.
Damn it, all the exercises you chose were restrained by monks, are they useless?
The combat power collapsed too quickly. All the dragons and elephants have reached level six. At this glance, you can tell that this is low-level martial arts! Gao Wu, is it worthy?
The combat power is low, and Pili's physical and martial arts are too underestimated.