Swallowed Star: The Illustrated Guide

What a guy, the protagonist thought Luo Feng was dead and almost had a mental breakdown.

It's a bit naive, and at the same time, it feels a bit weird to follow Luo Feng. Following others is the goal of life. I don't want to think like a person who has been terminally ill for three years.

Are there any living people? The comment area is so deserted 🐴. A living person squeaks and a robot clicks.

It's a bit embarrassing. There are so many licks from the original owner. I don't know why😳

Being able to worship the protagonist of an online novel as an idol...

Not promoting time travel for minors

After reading it, let me tell you my feelings. The first is that the writing is immature and the plot is as bland as water. The second is that the position of the protagonist is not obvious. What kind of person he is and what his thoughts are. All of this must be based on the article and have his own ideas, not to cater to the public. Although we read fan fiction to make up for the regrets of the original work, more importantly, we want to see a different real person making different choices in that world. There is no novel that everyone likes. Therefore, the author's three views determine the three views of the readers who will read this novel, rather than your own ideas. If you impose them on a certain reader, this will only make everyone feel uncomfortable. I feel like this is the biggest problem with this book. Finally, to summarize, keep it up, you can see it, but you still won't get enough food.

I don't know if the girl depicted in this description is the heroine, which is a bit embarrassing. First of all, only the person she likes will pay for it. If the male protagonist accepts it, doesn't it count as a replacement? Secondly, this girl is not cheating, and she wants to catch up and doesn't want to be a vase. If the male protagonist accepts, will resources be allocated to her next? She may not be able to practice particularly well, so I don't know what this female protagonist is doing. 😂 Regarding the male protagonist, as an otaku, others have indeed given to you, but you can't refuse as firmly as you did at the beginning. She likes her predecessor, not you. You are entangled when she gives you something, and you enjoy it. In the future, maybe more people will value your talent and give to you. Do you accept it?

It is impossible for terminally ill patients to worship characters in novels. After all, there is no specific image, so only a poisonous point can be accepted. Also, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them.

In the first three chapters, I felt gay in gay.