Swallowed Star: The Illustrated Guide

What a guy! The protagonist thought Luo Feng was dead and almost had a mental breakdown.

It's a bit naive, and it feels strange to follow Luo Feng like this. Making following others your life goal doesn't seem like the mindset of someone who has been terminally ill for three years.

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It's a bit awkward, there are so many people fawning over the original owner, I don't really understand why 😳

To be able to idolize and fervently worship a protagonist from an online novel...

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After finishing the book, let me share my thoughts. First, the writing is immature, and the plot is bland. Second, the protagonist's character is unclear; what kind of person is he, what are his thoughts? All of this needs to be built upon the foundation of the story, reflecting the author's own ideas rather than pandering to popular opinion.

This description of a girl, I'm not sure if she's the female lead, is a bit awkward. First, she only makes sacrifices because she likes the original person. If the male lead accepts, isn't that just a substitution? Second, this girl doesn't have any special abilities; she wants to pursue him and doesn't want to be just a pretty face.

Terminally ill patients can't possibly idolize fictional characters, since they lack a concrete image; they can only accept one symptom. Also, if you can't write romance, don't write it.

The first three chapters felt a bit gay to me.