Dao Ni Fengyun

Newbie, new book, please support me

(*'へ'*) Goudan Warrior? ! Get it you! ! !

Why does Brother Gou write so well? I admire it. The plot is exciting, the characters are vivid, and I support Brother Dog🌹

Goudan, no, this is not the speed you have changed. I'm sorry for your title of tentacle monster! ! ! Come on, Goudan, don't be weak!

The introduction has been changed. I wonder if you are still satisfied with it?

Read it, can't sleep at night🙂

Damn it! Damn it! Come on! Use your motivation to flirt with young ladies in coding! Although I will not give recommendation votes, it is still okay to leave a comment to prove that your book is read! !

My broadsword is already hungry and thirsty, prepare to die! ! ! I use chop, chop, stick, intercept, pick, tease, push, stab, hold, cut, wipe, chop, hang, belt, block and sweep, there will be one move that can kill you! ! ! Lin Chen traveled to Douluo Continent and obtained the system at the beginning, but the system was deceitfully swept away by a mysterious voice, leaving Lin Chen with amazing imitation power and another unknown ability. After awakening the martial spirit, the ability to imitate becomes even more terrifying. Join Wuhun Palace, beat Tang San violently, and save Qian Renxue. What random cloak hammering technique, what Xuantian Baolu, bring them all, you God?! I can not only imitate, but also surpass!!!

Come on Goudan! ! ! Support you

Meet the boss! 👏🐉

What did this author write? This is nonsense. If it weren't for his handsomeness, I wouldn't have finished reading this book.

God, there are more than 800,000 words, I want to learn from you

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't help but feel uncomfortable with some of the things I said. I only came across this book when I saw your post on Assistant. I didn't sign a contract, but I wrote 800,000 yuan, which is shocking. Let me talk about the problems I see. First of all, you made a big mistake. You wrote so much nonsense at the beginning of A Word A Thousand Dollars. You wrote so many irrelevant words about a simple matter. I am also a martial arts writer, and I am well aware of the shortcomings of martial arts novels. The beginning is dull and the pace is slow, but these are things that need to be discarded. When you start, you should at least write a complete story. Your opening is meaningless, and you don't seem to know what should be rewritten and what should be left out. For example, for the tofu shop in Chapter 2, you could just write a few sentences, but you wrote hundreds of words about tofu, which is completely unnecessary, brother. When writing a story, you need to have a beginning and a transition, but I think your writing is too plain. If you open a new book, remember not to write like this again! You have a foundation of 800,000 words, and you will definitely be able to sign a contract if you open a book again, but remember not to procrastinate in writing.

The sword goes against the wind and clouds, the perfect world, one thought is eternal, the life of cultivating immortals in all realms, Douluo's imitation master

Why not publish a second book? It's not easy to write more than 800,000 words with determination. Wouldn't it be better to change the plot of the next book?

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