People Are in the Arena, Playing the Role of Hegemon

The writing is good, the plot, writing and characterization are all good, but there is one sentence that doesn't stop you from saying something fast. If you have anything you want to say, can you write it in the author's statement? Writing it at the end of the text affects the reading too much.

I feel like Xiong Ba's portrayal is more sinister than domineering. Xiongba should be the kind of person who is invincible in the same realm. Even if he encounters a single protagonist, he is still invincible. The failure of Xiongba was entirely due to luck, and it was impossible to do anything due to bad luck. Every opponent Xiongba encounters is stronger than him, and his three-point return to vitality is inferior to Fengyun's high-end martial arts. But Xiongba's domineering power comes entirely from the inside out. The Sword Master is so strong, but he is only stronger than Xiong Ba in terms of strength. Xiong Ba still despises the Sword Master psychologically.

I saw someone saying in the comments that Xiong Ba's martial arts is wrong, so I'll explain it here. There are two versions of the character Xiongba, one in comics and one in film and television. In the comics, the martial arts of the Xiongbahui are: San San Gui Yuan Qi, Tian Shuang Fist, Cloud Dispelling Palm, Fengshen Kick, San San Finger, and Wedding Clothes Magic. I won't talk about the standard ones. Let's talk about the magic skill of wedding clothes. This martial art is similar to that in "The Two Prides", in that they make wedding clothes for others. Xiongba absorbed the martial arts skills of Bai Yujing, who practiced the magic skill of wedding clothes, and became a master. But in the subsequent plot, Xiongba never used this martial arts, so I didn't add him to the protagonist's status bar. Some friends said that Xiong Ba knows swordsmanship. Let me explain. The setting that Xiongba knows swordsmanship is only found in movies and TV series. In the movie and TV series, the sword-breaking technique he knows is actually the family martial arts of the sword demon. Because the first reference for this book was the comics, I didn't include this martial arts in it. Of course. Everyone should know that in martial arts novels, usually when one reaches a certain level, one method can conquer all. Therefore, it is actually okay to say that Xiongba knows swordsmanship. However, all he knows is ordinary swordsmanship. Therefore, if you want to see the protagonist's swordsmanship be as good as Wuming's, it is unlikely. After all, everyone is familiar with Xiongba, so we must choose his famous name to write about.

The most beautiful woman in martial arts

Seeing this layout, is it really a waste upgrade stream that limits the protagonist? First develop in a small and weak corner, and then enemies in big places appear one after another, and then one is more talented than the other. It's cliché enough.

When I saw Nie Feng's upgrade and the Human Emperor's Tomb, I knew it was going to be unfinished.

Classic ntr

The more I write, the more embarrassing it becomes. It doesn't sound like a domineering one.

Once a group is established, brothers can join the group and brag.

The biggest characteristic of Xiongba is that he is cunning, cunning, ruthless, one thing on the surface but another thing behind his back, quite superstitious

，，，，，，，，，， I have read a lot of books like this. The soup is changed but the medicine is changed. All the hostile forces seem to have changed their names. The core has not changed, the protagonist has not changed, but the progress bar has changed. You can still trample people by leaps and bounds.

At the beginning of the first chapter, the token rules of Qishalou are simply doing charity.

After reading the first few chapters, I knew that this role couldn't be 100%, because the young gang leader Qin Shuang had already become Bu Jingyun's disciple before he showed up. Bu Jingyun had already become a senior brother, and when Qin Shuang showed up, it would be impossible to suppress Bu Jingyun. Qin Shuang's matching character cannot completely match Qin Shuang, because Qin Shuang is a melon, relatively honest and obedient, and it is impossible not to listen to the words of his senior brother

Chiba Shinichi, the actor who played Xiongba, has passed away. I read this book 😭

Build a supporting building. If you have a role, you can tell me about it below.

Chiba Shinichi, who plays the role of the hero, has passed away. The golden scales are not a thing in the pond. When the storm changes, the dragon changes. There will be no hero in the world. 😭😭😭

I recently read the news that Chiba Shinichi, the actor who plays Xiongba, passed away due to the new crown.

Brothers of the Second Young Master Chu, come out and have fun 🤓

I see that many friends feel that the protagonist in my book does not fit the domineering temperament. Regarding this, let me explain it here. First of all, my protagonist is not Xiongba himself, he is just pretending to be Xiongba. Secondly, everyone is different. Maybe the protagonist is the same as Xiong Ba in many ways, but he is still not Xiong Ba. Also, the main way to play Xiong Ba is through power, and personality is not the main factor. After all, Xiong Ba's goal is to dominate the world and dominate the world, and the system can be compared to a golden finger formed by Xiong Ba's obsession. The goal is to unify the world and dominate the world. In addition. Questions about affiliation Some people asked why the subordinate's name was like Bu Jingyun Nie Feng, and his character was almost the same as in the original work. Regarding this point, the reason why the names are the same as those of the original book is because I want these popular characters to appear in this book and increase the popularity →_→. The reason why the characters are similar is that to bind this subordinate, you must first find a character whose attributes in all aspects, such as personality and experience, are consistent with this subordinate character, and then you can implement the binding. Also, binding requires a certain level of trust. Just like Bu Jingyun, he was the slave Yan Xiong bought from a merchant. He followed him for a long time before being successfully bound. Another example is Wen Chou Chou's bound person, Ah San. Ah San was originally a beggar saved by Yan Xiong. He followed Yan Xiong for two years and has always been his slave. He has a certain level of trust.

Just write about the book friends' supporting roles. Other readers won't care, but don't always mention it in the article. Halfway through, you suddenly point out that this is a certain book friend's supporting role, which is easy to cause drama. Now I feel that the author is not writing the story, but forcibly adding drama for those book friends' supporting roles. The plot always revolves around them, which feels very boring.

Three thousand Daozangs have realized Xuan Gong and come to play Qin Cangyu Peak in their spare time. The ancient sword shines in the dust across the nine fields, I only hope that the world will be the same. Welcome Taoist Chonghe to the stage, and we will give you ten thousand rewards😁

I don't know if there are characters like Wu Ming, Sword Master, and Emperor Shitian in martial arts myths. However, Xiongba's three-point returning vitality is very strong. In the TV series, Emperor Shitian poisons Xiongba before Fengyun can kill Xiongba.

There's so much nonsense at the end of the chapter that it's annoying even if you don't pay for it. So drunk.

The character has left the factory, it's OK, thank you to the author, vote and vote 😍

Brother, don't stop updating, I'm waiting to see

Passing by, I don't like crossing, so I left

Should we consider the match of Fengyun and Mo Ke Wuliang? Otherwise, I feel that the strength of Nie Feng and Bu Jingyun is still a bit low. If they unite, they will definitely be a big help to the world.