Kamen Rider Thunder

Come on coffee! (Hope it can be read to the end) The author writes very well! 🤭🤭🤭 As a derivative fanfic, it is already at a good level. Although it is still confusing to read, the rhythm is tight, the language is witty, and it is full of humor. People who have watched the original animation will definitely be able to bring themselves into it even more! I dare not say the advantages. Personally, I think the shortcomings are that the characters are too hasty, lack of true feelings, and the story line is not clear enough. In fact, the first three chapters of the novel are called the "Golden Three Chapters". They are where the author can best reflect his own advantages, and they are also the most attractive and exciting place for readers! The author should work hard and try not to copy the plots in the animation. Although the fans are fans, they still need imagination to fill the readers' curiosity! Another point to mention is that the author's abstract thinking must be very active, and the description of actions can be more detailed. It can be read between the lines that the characters in the author's works are flesh and blood, but actions are rarely used to promote the plot, as well as language promotion and psychological promotion. These are treasures that the author needs to dig deeply! 🤝🤝 Finally, I hope the author can write better and better! There will be fans, and there will be achievements! Update quickly, don't get tripped up by any bottlenecks, and keep writing! "High mountains have their own paths, and hard work pays off"! 🤭