Starting with a Scandal with My Superstar Wife

I've held back for so long, but I couldn't hold back any longer. Just a few words before I leave. Smoking, smoking, smoking. As someone who can sing and became famous with just one song, is it really that hard to quit? You might as well just start by creating a persona. What I hate most are singers who start their careers by smoking, drinking, and acting all high and mighty.

Mao Mao is not a naturally gifted writer; in fact, one could say she's a complete failure. After writing for so many years, she has never been able to write with ease, which results in each of her books having various flaws. If you find this limitation acceptable, please continue reading. Thank you so much for your support! Thank you! Thank you! If you find it unbearable, please click the "X".

You just have to smoke to disgust people, right?

It feels like an idol drama, with forced "misunderstandings" and "coincidences," especially the female assistant character, who fully embodies these two words and her "I won't listen, I won't listen" attitude. The male lead, on the other hand, neither explains nor investigates, doing nothing and letting the misunderstanding fester. Actually, "coincidences" are quite normal in novels (the so-called dramatic elements), but your writing style is not very good.

The writing before and after the book was terrible. She claimed to be writing a sweet romance novel, but it turned out to be a hodgepodge. The female lead was forced into a depressed character and acted strangely. Wow, she tried to imitate artsy types before even starting to show any romance—quite a clever idea! After the book was published, it got even worse. This Xin Xin writing is infuriating; it turned into a pretentious face-slapping story.

This is so melodramatic! The female lead is such a manipulative green tea bitch. The protagonist was in the entertainment industry in her past life; doesn't she know the consequences? This is totally a twisted princess setup—"I'm in trouble, you have to act for me." These two sisters are disgusting!

The opening line says... This assistant is really... I think you could take a look at Xiao Ai from the book "My Wife is a Legendary Queen," which was written quite well by her assistant. The assistant is bypassing the person in charge and directly creating hype; this is truly toxic.

If you write well, write more; don't write short, small, and slow pieces.

It's written fairly well, but there are a few problems. 1. The protagonist is a bit pretentious; surprisingly, he doesn't want to plagiarize the song. His explanation is also unacceptable. 2. The female lead is portrayed as a top-tier celebrity, but in reality, she's just a third-tier nobody. She's always worried about this and that, afraid of this and that, and feels like anyone can step on her. 3. The recent chapters have suddenly become more literary and artistic.

I hope you can write over a million words with this book, write more drafts, and publish more chapters. Thank you, author. I like it.