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I am really old and can't stand the system. In the first chapter, I found that the system was activated and decisively persuaded me to quit.

The writing is very good so far, but in the future, don't write every woman until the male protagonist can't walk. In reality, who would like an employee who is confused, unhelpful, and makes trouble when doing things? At best, he is stupid, but at worst, he is mentally retarded. Being a girlfriend will make subordinates tired, so don't want it.

After reading two chapters, I started skipping chapters. I personally like interesting articles, but your book is not interesting enough. Some trivial things are simply useless plots. Forget about your urban life channel. Entertainment stars only make short videos about their trivial things after more than ten chapters. It is not popular for no reason. Stop writing entertainment articles and write about trivial things in urban life. Two chapters are too much for this kind of life details. It took more than ten chapters to start making short videos. You deserve the series about quitting at the beginning! ! !

Sincerely, I feel that the author wants to write a lot, with a touch of literary youth, and wants to have a high-end style, as well as commercial literature and art. Swallowing jujube wholeheartedly makes it difficult to digest. The writing is confusing, the reading is confusing

Obviously, just do the directing job well and let the other side projects take their own course. I had to write everything at once, but in the end nothing was written well. I really don't know what the author thought about some of the plots. I won't talk about fairy tales. I copied "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" at a young age and didn't even know how to complain. Even if you copy Gu Long's novel, I won't complain.

The writing is too messy and confusing to read. Carrying out multiple projects at the same time is very demanding on story structure and writing. In the first fifty chapters, I was filming a sound engineer, starting a Weibo, writing a fairy tale, and starting a band. Everything was done at the same time, and the writing style was very literary, so I was immediately persuaded to quit. . .

Why would a talented pianist become a director? 😥 It's like a mountain apart. Wouldn't it be nice to just go straight to classical music? If that doesn't work, you can copy music that combines classical and modern music. Taking your time doesn't mean you have a direction.

Except for being a bit literary at the beginning (for me personally), the plot behind it is very well written. Come on

See Chapter 114, where the Infernal Affairs box office donation is made. Does the author know the movie box office sharing model? Box office revenue of 100 yuan. 3.3% Sales tax. 5% Of film special funds. The rest is divided between the producers, distributors and theaters. And theaters account for about 50~55% of this. The issuer generally accounts for 7% to 10%. The rest belongs to the producers. Generally speaking, the producers can only get about 30% of the box office. Now you want to donate half of the box office. What will you donate?

If you have any ideas, you can post them in the comments If there are any suitable ones, they will be adopted The general content is Name: Chinese and foreign Identity: occupation and background, etc. Of course, if you have any questions, you can ask them, and we will all read them.

Brothers, happy Children's Day~

I want to do a little bit of everything, but the protagonist has 240 hours a day? The coolness is 0

Overall, it's okay, but it feels like the steps are too big, and there's no sense of immersion. A year has passed, two movies (one of which is a short film), 10 famous songs, a collection of fairy tales, and two martial arts novels, The Condor and The Condor. It's too much, and it's too fast. The pace of the film is fast and it feels like the details are missing.

Great book, cheers to the author! I hope there won't be a harem🙂

Gou Bai

I keep using those pretentious words in trivial matters, which is tiring

It was indeed a bit of a stream of consciousness, the early stages were chaotic and confusing.

After reading the first three chapters, it seems that I didn't see how the predecessor died. Will there be any explanation later? The description in the book is that this is a middle-class family with two children and two parents, which does not conform to the mainstream time travel values. Therefore, the master's foot is forcibly seizing the body, which is not allowed in this world. So, the protagonist of this book is a stowaway. Will be killed by the law of heaven. I suggest that the writer's story setting should be like this at the end. The predecessor (actually the protagonist) woke up and found that he had had a long dream.

Haven't watched it yet! Because I calculated, it took me a year to write, 690,000 words! The average is less than 2,000 per day... I'd better forget about it.

It's okay, not outstanding, not dramatic. In daily life, I don't recognize the character of the protagonist at all. Known: pianist, senior citizen. I can't usually see it. Did the author forget

Leave a footprint. 😁

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