At the Beginning of the Hong Kong Drama, He Became the Younger Brother Who Stutters

Chapter 13: The limit is reached. Is this the person who came to Hokage? No wonder he was killed and slipped away

The first part was okay and I could watch it, but then the spiritual energy started to revive and super powers were flying all over the sky. It was a person who had super powers. It was a bit messy and I couldn't stand it any longer, so I withdrew.

The author should find a job in a factory. From the perspective of a bookworm of ten years and an author who is obsessed with street shopping, you can't afford this kind of food.

After reading a few chapters, I concluded that there is no doubt that it is a poisonous weed. I suggest the author reopen the book. This book can be admitted to the palace. Actually, the setting is still a bit fresh, but the writing skills are lacking, the plot is confusing, the description of the characters is confusing, and the wording and sentences are inappropriate, which makes it very entertaining. The protagonist travels through the Hong Kong TV series with the system ability of Naruto, and the protagonist is trained to defeat Kaguya Otsutsuki in the Naruto game. In addition, he is a modern person, so his IQ and EQ should be relatively high. However, when he travels to the Hong Kong TV station, his IQ is infinitely lowered, and his mentally retarded and brainless behavior is as if this person is the author himself. It is heartbreaking to watch! I still remember a plot in a novel. The other party was able to travel through another world and bring Kabuto, a pharmacist who was controlled by another god, back to the world of Hong Kong. Kabuto easily became a human master, earning wealth and status for the protagonist. With his wisdom, three-body magic and illusion, he was basically invincible. The protagonist of this book, who is said to be Chatanla, said to use a little and a little less, and then directly used shadow clones to create dozens of them, in order to earn thousands of dollars. . . I don't think you've seen Naruto😐😐😐 Hey. . . I feel so embarrassed when I see the good settings, I can't complain. 88

You are already so powerful. If you don't use Sharingan genjutsu to control the port governor as soon as you come, then you will be able to eat fish and give your sister a good life. Then there is no need to waste chakra and use shadow clones to become human-headed soldiers.

Just one word, bad. After reading five or six chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It's so toxic.

The first one was crazy, chakra can't be replenished. Then you run on the sea. After running, you can light a fire. I'm really convinced. Stop writing novels and do something else.

The idea is good, but the invincible flow is all about being happy. As a result, it was sealed immediately. It looked aggrieved and I was persuaded to quit with two pictures.

It's too messy and I have no desire to read on.

It's a bit unbearable to write about the recovery of spiritual energy. . .

More than forty Shennong speakers successfully persuaded me to quit 😰

You're invincible as soon as you appear, what's the point?

The little stammering brother - Little Jiba, assembled and reasonable.

It collapsed after fifty-five chapters, and even those who were somewhat famous woke up at every turn.

From Hong Kong variety show to fantasy, it's so poisonous

In the first few chapters, I covered all the poisonous points that could be touched upon.

The personality of this protagonist is not well written, just like a 250-year-old. Moreover, the author particularly likes to describe the psychological activities of the protagonist. If the writing is not good, don't write the protagonist in a way that is too out of the ordinary. You won't be able to grasp it.

It's a good subject, but it's a pity. Let's write a few novels first to practice writing and see if I have the strength to start again.

It's too messy. I'm moving here and there. It doesn't look smooth enough. I'll say goodbye and abandon the book.

Chapter 11 is extremely poisonous! Author, you'd better find a job in a factory! ! !

Isn't chakra spiritual energy and physical energy? Why can't you add more?

What kind of bullshit is this? You don't even need logic when writing novels now? Very poisonous

Chaos, and then forced to do it again in modern times, very speechless

One thing to say, with the name of the protagonist, this book must be wonderful. Isn't this name a hundred times better than those of Ran, Feng, Zi, Lin, and Ye?

There is no desire to read junk books at all.

Thirty-one, what does thirty-two mean?

Are there any ghost movies? All Hong Kong variety shows without ghost movies are substandard.

I just saw Walking on the Waves and couldn't stand it any longer 😅 The beginning seemed to be well-written.