Cultivating Immortality on the Down Low in the Xiong Bing Company

Cultivation and other things, I think it would be more enjoyable without a female protagonist. Of course, don't have too many, as it will be annoying.

Many fan fictions are based on the character Li Liangbing. What else is there? The three views are different from the five senses. When the yellow village comes in the plot, the change is the change. At least you can die with dignity, but asking the minions to use rape, what is the difference between this and the Japanese invaders? Even if it is cleared through a series of plots later, what is the use? ? Are you really going to put down your butcher knife and become a Buddha immediately? ? The above are all personal opinions

I feel like the author didn't read The Way of the Burning Sun 1. During Dukao's time in the Ming Dynasty, the Sun invaded the earth. It was Dukao who used his identity as a former war maniac to help Sun Wukong fight back the Sun. Of course, it was Lieyang himself who was beaten by Sun Wukong and refused to retreat until he had only one battleship left. Although Dukao is an alien, I still recommend the author to watch The Way of the Sun 1. Sun Wukong's training was arranged with the help of Dukao. He is not a member of my race, and his heart must be different. This sentence is actually not suitable for the Xiongbinglian universe.

Not my kind. His heart must be different. Even a three-year-old can understand it. Why don't you authors understand? Joining the Super Theological Seminary is not promising. When I see an angel, I can't run away and don't look back. That kind of arrogance is worth licking. Can you please give Diqiu some dignity?

You can watch it without thinking, otherwise it will be extremely poisonous! I just want to know how to time travel and bring a cat with you? We are here to see the protagonist, not the cat! I saw an article written by a big guy that fits your situation very well. I hope you will read it. I can tolerate other poisons for a while, but this one gave me goosebumps! If you are using this cat as a punching bag, forget about it as a pimp, but in a few chapters it turns out to be more of a protagonist than the protagonist, so you might as well kill the protagonist and just write about this cat. [Theoretically, the fewer supporting characters, the better. The supporting role is the tool of the protagonist. Supporting roles that have no functionality or overlapping functions should be deleted. A novel is your startup company, the protagonist and villain are the core personnel of your company, the supporting characters are the employees, and your energy is the salary, so remember this sentence-'The company does not raise waste. ' For example, your protagonist meets two heroines, both of whom are beautiful, one is a lolita and the other is a royal sister. The two are jealous and their goal is to be with the protagonist. This may sound interesting at first glance, but let me tell you, it is not the case in actual writing. The functions of the two tool men overlap! If you want to do it, you should also give them different goals. For example... I will give you an example casually. Loli is to have a child with the protagonist to complete the family mission, and Yujie is to steal the protagonist's information and serve the organization. Both of them can fall in love with the male protagonist, no problem, but they must be different. Otherwise, the plot of the two heroines will appear monotonous. The first two bites are fine, but if you eat too much, it will make you sick, and if you eat too much, it will make you sick... If you eat too much, it will make you sick... If you make readers sick, they will not pay for your words! When I wrote novels in the early years, I liked to arrange an entourage as a follower next to the protagonist, that is, a clown, to add humor and humor, similar to Zhu Bajie next to Sun Monkey. Later I discovered that the novel is not a cross talk after all. There is no need for this kind of character to exist in many situations. For example, when the protagonist goes to play a dungeon, should the clown follow or not? It's useless if you follow him, but why write about him if you don't follow him? This is very embarrassing.

Although I haven't watched Super God Academy, I have read a lot of Super God fanfics. Why are there so many Black Rose people in the comment area? I feel that Rose dedicated herself to the earth. I don't want to say how much it helped, but at least she had an attitude. In order to let Ge Xiaolun open his wings and increase his strength, he even gave her his first kiss. You, the author, are the same. You will be all kinds of negative when you catch Rose. It's okay to write that the B cat doesn't like it. Rose entered the formation and was abused and left alone. Especially in the thirty-fifth chapter, she started spraying directly, and all kinds of brainless operations were simply amazing.

Don't just let the protagonist travel around the world to cultivate immortality. Is it really that easy to cultivate immortality? In the setting, the protagonist is considered a super genius in cultivation. Even if he started practicing at the age of ten, he would still be 77 years old and practiced for 67 years before reaching the threshold of pill formation. An opportunity stuck for 30 years without a breakthrough. If ordinary people doubled the amount, would the earth really have that much time for humans to cultivate, or would it have so many resources for humans to use? The protagonist is in constant supply of all kinds of elixirs. Without any elixirs, it would take hundreds of years for ordinary people to just rely on absorbing spiritual energy to build a foundation, right? Don't talk about geniuses. If you don't practice, who knows if you are a genius? God's system is so busy following its own path, how can it have time to be distracted? At most, the protagonist like Linqi can hold hands and have to consume resources to be effective. Even this is not as good as his teammates. At most, he can keep up.

The world view of Xiongbinglian is quite macroscopic. If you add the setting of cultivating immortals, it is neither fish nor fowl, just for the sake of refreshment, which is a bit insulting to the original anime.

Lu Qingyang: I, Lu Qingyang, know the most immortal diaosi in the world.

After reading a lot of supernatural fan fiction, I discovered a characteristic. Most of the ones classified as light novels are mindless YY, with the main characters being sleazy and the plots are a complete mess. However, most of the ones classified as science fiction have a couple of tricks up their sleeves!