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The pace is fast, unlike other works of the same type that require multiple chapters for one event, and it is more of a fast-food style. However, I am afraid that the author cannot control the sequel of the plot, and the heroine is also a bit tangled in writing. Let's not mention the writing style for the moment. This book has advantages, but its shortcomings are also obvious.
It's all too cliche, why should the system wipe it out? For a new one, the Bulgarian demon king trains you for one night, punishes the male villain for playing a bad role, or punishes the female villain for playing a role. It's okay to have a little imagination. As a writer, you have to imagine more. It doesn't matter if the writing is bad, as long as the content is good.
What are you writing? It's a waste of traffic.
Composition for primary school students. Don't waste time and energy on writing and get no results. First read books to improve yourself and then try the water.
Using a little girl who likes you as a partner is really more than a little bit poisonous. The girl is unprofessional and emotional. Opening a company is like joking.
Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit. No matter why, I just can't stand this kind of plot that is deliberately set up to show off. It's too low-level. What's the age? The system still has settings to wipe it out. It feels like another puppet controlled by the system. Is the person named Ye so unfavorable?
The author's writing is really hard to describe! Find another job and do it well! If writing a book is just for fun and entertainment, then I didn't say that. If you want to make money and support your family by writing a book, you have to work harder.
You are the first one who can send me away in the first chapter, absolutely
How could you recommend this kind of thing to me? What rubbish!
This novel is written too casually. Goodbye to you.
I can't stand it anymore, it's too toxic, the beginning feels like Feilu's elementary school routine
Who is the protagonist after all , or is he a tool of the system?
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Nowadays, when I read books, I am a little sensitive to the names of the protagonists. As long as the three major surnames in online novels are "Xiao Fan", "Lin Fan" and "Ye Fan", and "Fan" is added, I will be very disgusted. Isn't it possible to choose another name?
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The timeline is all messed up
Chapter 1: Punishment for mission failure, obliterating the host. It felt like ten years ago! Goodbye!
I haven't read it yet. When I saw that the name in the introduction was Ye Fan, I didn't want to read it because I felt that the protagonists named Ye and Su at the starting point were too tired. They have to appear more than 4 times in ten novels 😂