Journey to the West Starting from Da Qin

The beginning was very good. From chapter 16 onwards, the appearance of the female supporting character became less and less effective. By chapter 40, I just read the title directly. After more than 90 chapters, I still couldn't stand it. More than ninety chapters are all old-fashioned pretentious routines. The so-called Journey to the West has not even started, yes, not a single monkey hair has been seen. Then, when it came to the acceptance speech, the author said that it took a month of revisions by the editor to get the beginning right. I was enlightened on the spot! No wonder the writing style of the beginning and the following plots are not at the same level. I even guessed that the author decided from the beginning of Chapter 16 that he did not want to "trouble" the editors and wanted to write it himself? ? ! Book friends have been making comments since the female supporting characters first appeared. After dozens of chapters, the female supporting characters' roles were reduced a bit, but the lack of writing and the vulgar pretentious scenes made it hard to watch. Also, the title is Journey to the West, right? I came here for this! But it turned out that the plot before it was released was not interesting at all I won't talk about it anymore, 😒

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——              18 ， Wife - Hu Man (responsible for the economy) - Yu Ji (responsible for life) Colleague - Longhu Celestial Master (the one who pours Teng Yao) - Lao Jia (responsible for the early stage of management) - Wang family (ally of the united front) ——Meng family (friendly forces temporarily out of power) ——🐮3, Yi Ge and others (comrade executioners in the early stage) ——Li Xin (someone suspected to be a "highland security guard" trained by Li Jue) ——Han Xin (trained by Li Jue for the future) "Jungle" in the Qin Dynasty) ——Chen Ping (potential prime minister talent) Disciple—— NO1. Sun Wukong (chief disciple) NO2. Guiguzi (named disciple) NO 3. Gai Nie (disciple of the registered apprentice) Boss - Brother Zheng (Zu Long, Emperor Qin) - Fusu, (assistant candidate for the crown prince, the future Qin Er) Heaven The Demon Slaying Division and the Immortal Slaying Division—temporarily friendly (Who are you helping in Havoc in Heaven?) Giant Spirit God—temporarily friendly (Enemies in Havoc in Heaven?) Wen Quxing and Purple Fairy—the protagonist's enemies! The rule of the Bad Qin Dynasty The human world The land of mountain gods in Xianyang, the day travel god and the city god, black and white are impermanent ——(temporarily friendly, because of the future trouble in heaven) Mount Tai——the land of mountain gods, black and white are impermanent, ginseng essence, ——(temporarily friendly, because of the future trouble in heaven) Underworld ——The King of Hell (the leader who asked Li Jue to help) ——The Judge (Lü Buwei's colleague in the Underworld) ——Black and White Wuchang (the one in Xianyang is an acquaintance) Shui Tribe Weihe River——Prime Minister Turtle (has been beheaded) ——The Dragon Prince (detained in heaven to be executed) Huaihe River——The Dragon Prince (recuperating) ——Dragon King (presenting treasure dragon bone sword) East China Sea——Dragon Prince (the whereabouts of the Dragon Prince's cousin in the river is unknown) Monster Clan Ji Lei Mountain——Jade Faced Fox Family (the main members have been killed) Qingqiu Tomb——Pipa Jing (killed) Lishan——Wolf Demon and Xinglai Helper (beheaded) Ghosts ——Mei Bo, (beheaded) ——Ghost Judge Guan Zhong (beheaded) Political enemy Prime Minister——Lü Buwei (rebellion has been killed) Cheshaolu—— (rebellion has been killed) . Zhongche Mansion Order-Zhao Gao (Li Jue is trying to find a solution) National enemy -Jing Ke (beheaded) -Yan Dan (beheaded) -Yan Gong (beheaded) -Qi Gong (beheaded) -King of Chu (beheaded) Note: The remaining ones are officials, knights, and guests. . There are no statistics on those who were executed for committing crimes. . . Potential conspiracy to rebel against the Qin Dynasty ——The Xiang clan (Xiang Liang, Xiang Yu and their forces, etc.) ——Pei County of Surabaya (Liu Bang's group) ——Nomads in the grassland (the Huns...) ——Baiyue ——Overseas (Japanese Island) ——Western Regions (Asan's monk, preaching to rob the land and population) Protagonist——Li Jue (cannot become an immortal due to the suppression of heaven) ——Physique comparable to that of an immortal? ——The realm is comparable to that of immortals? Ps: This book is basically updated every day, at about 11 o'clock in the morning Discuss it Now it feels like the protagonist's upgrade is a bit slow, or is there too many things in Qin Shi that he can't handle? I don't know how Li Jue from Journey to the West got involved, and how Qin Shi developed after he stayed? Assist Brother Zheng and the others to change their fate against the will of heaven, and when Wukong returns from studying abroad, we can integrate the power of the human world together - (Making havoc in the Heavenly Palace)? To prevent the invasion of Buddhism, Brother Zheng sent troops to lead an expedition to spread the culture of the Sowers? Han Xin leads the troops? Wukong as the vanguard? Guiguzi is a military advisor? Li Jue assists Su to supervise the army? Turn the journey to the West into the expansion path of the Qin Dynasty? Has it become the way for the various schools of thought in the Qin Dynasty to promote the culture of flower growers? Haha, waiting for the update tomorrow, hoping for some exciting content————

After reading Chapter 100, I tolerated the use of money in the Qin Dynasty, I also tolerated the appearance of paper books, and I tolerated writing in cursive script. What the hell is Meow's dragon-elephant Prajna Kung Fu, and the Vajra Indestructible Magic Kung Fu? Does the author know what Prajna and Vajra mean? Is there Buddhism in the Qin Dynasty? It's so poisonous. I admire myself for being able to read Chapter 100

It's so beautiful, from martial arts to immortality, the only one in the world, I've always been stubborn, I don't want to have a female protagonist! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! !

Can't you develop properly? A girl will be poisoned to death in a while.

Unable to stand. Although the executioner has a low status, he also has extra income. Not to starve to death. In addition, in the world of Xianxia, ​​executioners are still a lowly and moneyless profession that requires death. It's even less likely that he can't afford to eat. Otherwise, who would do it? If you don't do it, you will die, if you do it, you will die.

Good guy, those who behead (this book), do the autopsy (I forgot what it was called), sew up the body (I'm in Qiu or something), touch the body (Kaibang Daliwan), it's really a one-stop service

Probably? Is this it? OK?

Delete it if you need to, so what if you have 20 chapters? Some people don't read the book circle, and leave immediately when they see the poisonous point. If you don't delete it, you will lose a lot of traffic. How can you make money? First, think about the connection after deletion, and then take a day off to overhaul it. In this way, those who left before saw that you have changed and know that you listened to the persuasion and may continue reading. Newcomers may not know that they can continue reading without the poisonous point. This is all money, making money, not shabby.

Did the editor-in-chief get paid? Nowadays, really any book can be recommended by the editor, and none of them are good.

I never read any profile that boasts about itself!

The female partner was poisoned and died after being poisoned. She said goodbye.

This book is extraordinary. After more than ten chapters, I felt that my IQ had returned to my elementary school days, and I didn't dare to read it any more! I'll read it again when I'm old in a few decades!

All kinds of books can be included in the best-seller selection, but is there no one at the starting point? ? ?

The writing is terrible, the subject matter is good, and the story is poisonous.

Originally the book was quite good and I had all the tickets ready, but as soon as I saw the female supporting character, I immediately felt that it was not interesting. Let her get her lunch within a chapter or two!

One question, is this female supporting role here to feed poison to the book lovers?

Don't you know how to copy? Can also poison

While saying that the smell of pig semen is too strong, no one else wants it, and at the same time he said that he cooked it to remove the smell. It's funny, it's so easy to get it, and it's your turn?

Chapter 1: I couldn't hold on. The original owner was starving to death. Is there still food on hand? Would you rather starve to death than eat the food at hand? What great perseverance

With the social environment of the Qin State and the meticulousness of the Qin Law, could there be a place for Buddhism to survive? If you want to say that human beings have no right to speak and saints can do whatever they want, then you think I didn't say that. Qin and Buddhism are completely out of touch. They can also be related to each other, and the basic logic is not explained.

The writing is okay, but the author's knowledge is worrying, and there are a lot of Jin Yong's martial arts that make the drama

After watching a little bit, I immediately gave up. What a rubbish plot. The supporting characters and opponents are all the same as 250. Idiots.

The writing is so messed up that it makes my balls ache. There is no logic at all. I wonder if the author has written it yourself and read it?

I really don't know what the author is thinking. The protagonist can't even eat enough, but a box of gold is given to two women? Is there something wrong with your brain or something? Lower body parts?

The biggest advantage of this book is that it makes people feel aggrieved. Don't read it. You can always vent your anger when you reach a certain level. The protagonist will be a dog from the beginning to how long will he be a dog?

Where has Jiang Meiren gone? Look at how the person is gone. What is Jiang Mei's ending?

The single protagonist is cooking and eating at the same time: What the hell is the protagonist? Isn't the protagonist a human being? The population is created by refreshing, not life: Those who don't need to farm are refreshed by granaries.