People in Marvel Can't Be a Mage Properly

It can be seen that the author does not know how to write emotional dramas, so he should write less emotions. The top chaebol is in a coquettish relationship.

To be honest, the heroine Jessica is useless. It would be better not to write it. The emotional scenes are too jerky and drag down the whole book. This book is imaginative and well-written. It is just that it is acceptable for the super second generation to fall in love with the little secretary around her, but it is too early to fall in love with it. It is not a Korean drama. The little secretary has a high degree and good looks. , But it's nothing good for the protagonist's family power. The protagonist wants to have a lot. In other words, he is not worthy of it. I can accept your whole Captain Marvel. If you make an ordinary person and like to show off your temper, the protagonist is very speechless. The harem is better than this, so you can eat.

The Ancient One is already at level 5, but Emperor Weishan, the source of white magic, is only at level 6? Funny? Emperor Weishan must be at least level seven! Thanos is at most level five like Ancient One Odin. If he were pseudo-level six, he would have killed Ancient One Odin and taken away the gems.

The top chaebol falls in love coquettishly! It's like I've never seen the world before, it's embarrassing

No sense of involvement, just like running a running account, just plain and simple

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You took over the Winter Soldier because you wanted to kill Stark? Even if he is controlled, he cannot hide the fact that he committed murder, which is as disgusting as a mentally ill person who has no legal responsibility for murder. In fact, the perfect charm of Captain America was broken by the Winter Soldier. He has selfish motives and you may not be able to trust him at critical moments. Although Stark is a playboy and seems unreliable, he relies on him to come back in every crisis. You can always trust him. If you want to recruit the Winter Soldier with so many heroes, it is not nonsense, it is definitely a failure.

Jessica has too few scenes, I want to watch Jessica

Collected it, it's not bad. This is the first time I read about Marvel magic. The background attracted me. The writing style is good, simple and clear. I look forward to the follow-up 😁😁 I have to say that the current author's imagination is really big, Qian The weird settings, time travel and systems are all tricks, and I will be attracted to it, but how can I put it, it is interesting at first, but after reading more than ten chapters, it will become boring, so no matter how good the setting is, no matter how awesome the writing is, it is not as important as a good story. Recently, I am also writing a book. I use all my free time to understand the pain of single-player. Although I work hard, newcomers still have to persevere. After all, there is no exposure! Let's work together and encourage each other. If the author has time, you can also come and take a look at my fantasy. I feel pretty good about myself, hehe Come on and give me Oli together!

The writing is too poor, the dialogue is novice, the emotional scenes are really awkward, and it feels like a primary school student's composition. Thanos' strength is written too high, and Weishan Emperor is set too weak. They are both pseudo-sixth level. As a source of magic, Weishan Emperor is in the fifth level range like the Ancient One. Is this possible? The author's explanation is that he doesn't want to introduce too many gods for fear of the collapse of the power system, but does this have something to do with the power system? It's just a simple comparison of strength. Whether it's in comics or fan fiction, the default is Emperor Weishan > Odin, Ancient One > Normal Thanos.

Let me tell you something. I really don't like this heroine. Can I change her to another one?😁

Come on, author, there are too few wizards in Marvel, so don't be a eunuch.

You have a good idea, go for it ^0＾~ Become a mage while doing DC in the Marvel world

John Thompson

The writing style is too new and feels like flowing composition. Mainly because it's awkward in many places. For example, you haven't known Gu Yi for a long time. Why should he give up his position and make you a variable? Just because of good talent? After reading a few chapters, I decided to abandon the book.

Let's change Chapter 77. The time when Eric Shavig studied the Rubik's Cube was overtaken by [Iron Man 1], and Hulk came out earlier~ "Iron Man 1 was in 2009, Avengers 1 was in 2012, you overtook for three years, Hulk fought the Abomination in 2010, and America woke up in 2011"  In 2009, Eric Shavig was still a professor at the university, and Jane Foster had just been admitted to college "Immediately after the end of Avengers 1, there was the plot of Iron Man 3, and then in 2013, Thor 2~The Reality Stone came out" The source of Skye's alien gene is her father, but it has to be changed. Whether it is the comic universe or the movie universe, it is her mother~ "Skye is in [S. H. I. E. L. D." Bureau Agent] Appeared at the age of 19, in 2013, the same year as the event (Thor 2). Skye appeared in Chapter 75 too early 🤐 She was at most 14 years old at this time Eddie (Venom) is a character in SUMC, forget it in the MCU universe, please~ Spider-Man is a character after college, Peter Parker has not finished elementary school at this time of appearance. But Venom is forgivable even though he is not a character from the same universe, even though the timeline is at least 10 years apart {"NickName":"Misty Rain and Ren Shengshengxiao","UserId":217219019} Obey! 🙄 Search "Marvel Timeline" on Baidu. When writing about the characters who appear in the original work, you can search on Baidu for the appearance time and the relationship between the characters.

The peak of the normal Thanos single universe? What nonsense! Bye-Bye!

After reading a little bit, this female secretary really affects the viewing experience. The protagonist is really a licking dog.

It feels like you have overestimated the protagonist, and the enemies are all idiots who will be killed by themselves. It's really a novice.

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

There is no good power in becoming the Supreme Mage, or someone else's power cannot be used in other worlds.

The main character has a dog, and his background is even better than Tony Stark's, and he actually adds a little secretary. The layout is too small, and I can't stand it.

The author doesn't know what he thinks. Thanos without the Infinity Gauntlet is a pseudo-level 6, and Emperor Vishand is a level 6 The Thomson family is written so nb, the most profitable industries in the world are all big guys, but one Osborn is a little weaker than it Big brother, they are not on the same level, just like a puppy and a tiger Can you understand, I will write it The strength is also a mess

Alas, the character creation is not good. I barely read 30 chapters.

Let me talk about a bug in the timeline of this article. The Marvel timeline is very confusing, but the generally accepted time of the Doctor Strange movie is after Avengers: Endgame, or after Thor 2, or shortly after Captain America 3 to be precise. During Avengers 1, the Ancient One was still alive. As can be seen from the final battle of Avengers 4, the American Hulk who traveled back in time met the Ancient One.

One hundred and twenty-five, many memories turned into rituals

Why does the protagonist laugh when he fights😰