Immortal Ju Hua in the Wilderness Era

How many days does the author have until Hedao? There is a question. In the original work, Ji Ning clearly had not perfected his Taoist heart when he was in Hedao. Why did his Taoist heart become perfected in just three years? Is it possible that Hedao still adds to the sharpening of Taoist heart?

Predicting the outcome of the wave, since Ju Hua knows that there is a book on the earth called The Wilderness Chronicles. Then he will become a god or a true god, and it will be the slowest time for him to become an ancestor god. Find the earth among the small worlds Nuwa hid. Found a person named Tomato. The keyboard hit him directly in the face and said: "I read one sentence, you write one." Then the protagonist is invincible and the whole book is finished. There is no need to write about the Three Realms after that, the Three Realms are the most beautiful. This would be perfect. You don't need to write stories outside the Three Realms, but you can also reach a higher level.

It's a good thing if someone complains, just don't mind it. The more people you want to scold, the more popular your book will be. Ma Huateng doesn't get scolded every day. Fortunately, it's not a bunch of people charging money🐶

Although it only has more than 10,000 words, after reading so many Manghuangji fans, this is the best! Come on, no more eunuchs, no more writing! Will continue to support!

A cool novel like this is a failure when it comes to writing emotional scenes. No matter how good or bad the writing is, it is a failure.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, is the male protagonist subconsciously a nanny-type girl-supporting demon? The ultimate goal of spiritual practice is to protect your sister forever and better? Speechless... Flashed

Ji Ning didn't come back from time and space to chop you into a dog.

I have an idea, a general golden finger, and write a family story based on the world view of the Wilderness Chronicles. The talent of the first generation ancestor is set at the strength of a million-year loose immortal, which is comparable to that of a heavenly immortal. It can live for one million years, and then cultivate offspring, occupy territory, gradually develop, accumulate from generation to generation, and wait for the talented descendants to become immortals.

A childish human sister who is nearly 300 years old? ! Nearly 300 years old, eh, eh, the protagonist was still in a coma for 3 years during this period, and this sister was bullied. She hasn't grown any knowledge and brain yet? Can this brain be saved? What's more, can readers feel a sense of empathy for doting on a sister who is nearly 300 years old? Isn't it embarrassing?

The treatment of my sister and Taoist companion is too rough, but I always mention these two things. Damn, this level has dropped instantly.

I would like to ask if my sister is poisonous. People who see my sister now are afraid to look at her. There is too much arsenic and I am afraid of the poison.

To be honest, I personally feel that writing about the sister and the wife is a failure, which greatly affects the reading experience. It does not mean that it cannot be written. The key point is that the characters of the sister and the wife are not outstanding at all, and there is no sense of substitution. I have no feelings about the various actions of the protagonist doting on the sister and the wife. I just find it very annoying. (It would be okay if the emotional characters were written in a delicate and immersive way, but it is obvious that the author is not suitable for writing this type of writing)

I didn't grasp the essence of Tomato's upgrade. In Tomato's novel upgrade, there will be a small climax or climax after the upgrade. If the upgrade does not explode or the explosion is too small, it seems that the flavor is not enough.

Although this book is a bit inferior to The Wilderness in terms of brilliance, details, and characterization, it is still very good. There is nothing mentally retarded. The content is also very exciting, and it suits me better. Like the author

This book still has some shortcomings. In short, I feel that the protagonist is too alone. Yes, he is alone, lonely and alone. The protagonist of Tomato has relatively positive views. If the protagonist and Ji Ning were in the same period, I believe they could be friends and brothers, but unfortunately, they can only be masters now. It can be seen from this article that because I know too many secrets, I don't have a deep relationship with anyone. After reading this book, no one is impressed. It is indeed a pity that no one is deeply impressed by the description. Will the author write Devouring Fans next? This should be a good choice. After all, Devouring Fans has surpassed Manghuang Ji n streets in terms of popularity or breadth. It is recommended that it is best to start from scratch and be at the same time as Luo Feng. When you become stronger, you also need to look back on your friends from back then.

Why doesn't the protagonist appear? It can also be used as a backdrop It feels weird without Ji Ning

I haven't read the original work, but if it is set that the loose immortals have to go through tribulations all the time, the tribulations should be getting stronger and stronger, otherwise it will be a process. So since the tribulations are set to become stronger and stronger, the more tribulations you survive, the stronger you will naturally be. There's nothing wrong with that, right?🙂

Manghuang Ji is the fan that I like the most

I abandoned it once before, but now I've come back again. After a hundred chapters, I still died from the poison. It's far worse than the one in Temple of Time and Space.

This Feng Yu is much better than Zhong Mu as a heroine. First of all, both of them are determined towards the Tao and can have more topics to talk about. Secondly, she is also more talented. She is not an emperor, but it is not difficult to become a world god with the help of the protagonist.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's like thunder rolling down the sky.

This heroine comes out of nowhere.

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There are too many settings that have been changed. Changing the basic setting of the Sanxian body is worse than reincarnation.

The writing is like a martial arts fight, the scenes are bland, the characters are childish, and they have lived like a peasant clan for millions of years.

Is this wave a bug?

There are still so many scenes What a good subject and written in such a ghostly way

Seven monthly votes have been cast. Come on

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