The Great Desolation Is Coming: I Use Black Holes to Suppress the Way of Heaven

The title of this book is not attractive. A gadget like a black hole can be equal to the way of heaven. The prehistoric era is too fake.

How should I put it, this book still has its advantages. The general logic is okay. But there are also disadvantages. The storyline makes you feel breathless. This kind of feeling is not holding your breath while reading a book, but holding your breath while watching the protagonist. Superfluous storyline, superfluous foreshadowing, in order to quickly lay out the main line without any suspense, it is difficult for him to stick to it.

Why didn't I choose Buddhist contemplation methods at the beginning but black holes? Now I've come back and started practicing Buddhist techniques. Furthermore, besides fighting a few monsters in the first two chapters, you went to build a village. Don't say that no one has surpassed your level for such a long time. People with liver disease and those with a lot of European emperors

Come on, author, it has been collected, don't let the eunuch finish! ! !

The earth is not as big as a small dirt bag before it was prehistoric

The prehistoric times are coming, my cave is so dark and scary

It doesn't seem to be the strongest prehistoric one. Any orthodox mythology is better than it.

I always feel that this book looks very familiar, 😴🤐

This book has been invalidated since the village founding order. Since ancient times, you have cultivated immortality. Are you trying to gain influence? I feel so tired

The Great Desolation Is Coming: I Use a Drop of Blood to Suppress the Sea of ​​Blood

Drive high and go low. It was okay before the party, but using the party to turn the protagonist into a soldier is a bit outrageous. It is okay to cooperate with Guo Jia, but this method is wrong. Although the later stage is definitely a scene where one person is against the country, what you wrote before is too overwhelming for the protagonist. Half of the fun will be lost in an instant. The writing is below the level. There is a feeling of rebirth. Since the strong is destined to be respected, why did I write about Guo Jia and the like earlier? The rhythm is terrible. I was still in the abnormal game at the beginning, and the next second I transferred to the game. I was confused for a moment, and didn't explain anything. I didn't decide whether to join Guo Jia, so I forcibly changed the dungeon. What is this telling readers?

This prehistoric era should appear in the form of a game. The protagonist starts with something very awesome, and then enters the game. The protagonist is the first person in the game. The good things are all his own. Generally, you will be given a pet at this time (either by a strong man who loses his memory in a battle or by someone's bloodline) or After adding a little brother (he was a certain boss in his previous life), he builds a gang or a village, and then the plot adds some pretense and slaps him in the face, and he joins a certain special group of the country. Then the great times come, and the protagonist steps forward and becomes famous. I have not read this book, but it should be close to what I said.

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I thought I had read this book, but I read it stupidly for a long time. I didn't realize it until the village building order was issued, and I fell into the same trap twice.

From the moment I joined the Guo Jia Team, this book was no longer interesting. Oh no, it must have been because of the inexplicable appearance of a fat man who was said to be a colleague for three thousand years.

Black holes are here, but meteorites won't come out later.

How do you feel, too dark? When I opened, I introduced how useless I was for the first time and how awesome I was. The contrast is so huge. Why would I be so awesome if I had to do it all over again? He rubs all the good things on himself.

The worst thing about this novel is that it describes too much reality. . He also joined the Guo Jia team. . Don't write novels like this. This is not reality 😅 Only if you are popular can you have ghosts.

Drive high and go low, Chapter 25 I feel like I can't hold it anymore

Maybe those who obtained the Tao Fruit were Da Luo Jinxian before? So can get

Don't use one or two chapters to write about irrelevant things.

Is this the strongest myth? Expressiveness attracts a group of people

Is the prehistoric world the most powerful mythical world?

If you don't turn it into a game, just turn it into reality.

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